1、生 命 是 永 恒 不 断 的 创 造 ， 因 为 在 它 内 部 蕴 含 着 过 剩 的 精 力 ， 它 不 断 流 溢 ， 越 出 时 间和 空 间 的 界 限 ， 它 不 停 地 追 求 ， 以 形 形 色 色 的 自 我 表 现 的 形 式 表 现 出 来 。 泰 戈 尔（1）用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型As the graph depicts , From the cartoon /picture , we can see that According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,The table show
2、s / indicates / reveals that It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that （2）用于句首提出论题或现象的句型Recently , has become the focus of the society .has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life .Nowadays there is a growing concern for Nowadays it is common to hea
3、r /see has become a common occurrence in our daily life .Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes In recent years , th
4、ere is a general tendency Nowadays has become a problem we have to face . （3）用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型Some people like / prefer , while others are / feel inclined to There are different opinions among people as to Some believe whole hold Some people claim that is superior to Others , however , disagree with
5、it . Some people believe Others maintain Still others claim Some people suggest Others , however , hold the opposite opinion . On the one hand , people tend to On the other hand , they feel Some people argue that Others , in contrast , believe that Although more and more people come to believe there
6、 are still others who insist that On the contrary , there are people in favor of There are some people who hold different opinions about （4）用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型My own experience tells me that In my opinion , we should attack more importance to As for my own idea about I believe As far as I am concerned
7、, I plan to Personally , I prefer In my view , both sides are partly right in that But for me , I would rather My own point of view is that In conclusion , I support the statement that As regards me , I tend to choose （5）用于书信写作的常用句型Thank you for your letter of It is a pleasure for me invite you on b
8、ehalf of to accept Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived I am writing to you with reference to I am writing to you in connection with I would be grateful if you could / would I would like to know some information on It will be appreciated if you can / could I would also like to know if you
9、can / could I look forward to hearing from you . （6）用于结尾的常用句型From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that It is high time that something was done about From all the reasons / consideration above , it is ev
10、ident / clear / obvious that Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that It is clear , therefore , that All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to It is esse
11、ntial that effective measure be taken to From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that In conclusion ,the most important is On the whole , it is high time that every one As a result , we should take some effective steps to Judging by the figures / statistics ,
12、it is not difficult to see that Only in this way / in so doing , can be really 高分作文标志:1：是否长短句交叉； 2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid
13、 to. ) 举个经典结尾 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/
14、I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable 替换proper, approaches 替换 ways, implement 替换 carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge 替换 enhance on
15、es competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。Computer and I ( By Simmy )I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i i
16、ndulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth
17、. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say
18、 we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularCoincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter intoCurrent ( currently
19、)替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly bro
20、adened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Del
21、iver 替换 sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can f
22、unction in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先 There is no denying that 这个句型，还有 however 作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a posit
23、ive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part of Unf
24、avorable 替换 bad Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语 Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect 各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！以下是 30 个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下: 1.individuals,characters, folks 替换(people ,pe
25、rsons)2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance wi
26、th girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换 many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。 Eg. Many i
27、ndividuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替 think (因为是书面语，所以要加 that)7:affair ,business ,mat
28、ter 替换 thing8: shared 代 common9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasing
29、ly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly13beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换 customer15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换 very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable17.sth appeals t
30、o sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in18.capture ones attention 替换 attract ones attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigg
31、er 替换 cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换reasons for sth23.desire 替换 want.24.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to25.bear in mind that 替换 remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思)27. interaction 替换 communication 28.frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance30. next to / virtually impossible,替换 nearly / almost impossible
