1、12018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（一）个人情况一、 与专题相关的话题项目：Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods 二、 与话题相关的知识准备：1. 相关单元：七上 Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things七下 Unit 8 From hobby to career八下 unit 8 Life in the future2. 语法相关：一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时3. 词语相关：描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：tall，short
2、, old, young, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built等描写人物性格特征的形容词：kind, friendly, smart, outgoing，funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy, lovely，hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active 等。描写兴趣爱好时可能用到的单词或短语有： hobby, favorite , be i
3、nterested in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendly to ,preferto等。4. 经典句型： I study at Middle School. Im in Class Grade . I am good at . My best subject is . I am keen on . I am interested in . My hobby is doing. I enjoy doing very much. I think it is to.2 I study very hard at school
4、. I want to be in the future. I used to be Im interested in I often I practice very hard. I am glad I want to when I grow up. My favourite subject is You are the candle lighting my future. （你就像一支蜡烛,照亮我的前程）二、经典例题：（2009 年 广州市中考考题）你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1、 你的爱好；2、 你的优点和缺点；
5、3、 用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。注意：1、词数 80 左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数） ；2、不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and Im from Class 2, Junior 3. .解题思路：1. 审题：a. 本文共有 3 个要点b. 时态主要采用 一般现在时c. 人称是_I_2. 可能用到的短语和句型a. 你的爱好enjoy /like doing, be friendly to ,preferto等。 My hobby is doing.3 I am keen on .b. 你的优点hard-w
6、orking, generous, careful, confident, active My best subject is . I am good at . My favourite subject is c. 你的缺点 My weakest subject is . I am poor at .3. 成文：I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball on P.E. lesson. At my free times, I often play football with my friends.
7、 We are enjoy ourself. At study, I good at maths, but I poor in English. I cant get high grade at my English. I cant get high grade at my English, now I am do more English exectrise so that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.点评：整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式4. 检查思路：完成作
8、文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目 第一次自查 第二次自查布局与内容要点 人称 时态、主谓一致 动词搭配、介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 4分项分档评分表项目 要素 给分表切合题意，体现要点内容6 分有所发挥6-5554.54.54-3.53-2.5 2 1.5 1 0语 法词 汇准确性6 分 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误6-5.5 54.5 4-3.543-2.5 2 1.5 1 0流畅性3 分结构 3-2.5 2-1.521 0.5 0 0 0 0自评总分： 10.55. 参考例文：My name is Li Hua
9、and Im from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. Ive collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But Im not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends, sometime
10、s I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school. Maybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.(增加正能量，给老师好印象 0三、 练习：假如你叫李芳，昨天从报纸上看到海珠区要组织一次“全民学英语” 活动，在暑假要招聘一批英语志愿者的广告，你想应聘。请你用英语写一封简短的书信，根据表格提供信息，表示愿意
11、为广州市民服务。5姓名 李芳 年龄 15身高 160cm 健康状况 良好性格 外向（outgoing）爱好 体育运动特长 英语, 唱歌，跳舞其他情况 E-mail address：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意：1. 词数 80-100 个2. 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3. 可适当发挥。解题思路：1. 审题：a. 本文共有 个要点b.
12、 时态主要采用 c. 人称是_2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）_3. 可能用到的句型_64. 成文：_检查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目 第一次自查 第二次自查布局与内容要点 人称 时态、主谓一致 动词搭配、介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 参考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haiz
13、hu district.My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, and I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl, so I would like to make friends with others. In my free time, I like doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think it is good for ourhealth and I am quite healthy. I am also
14、good at singing and dancing. My best subject is English. I always find the chance to practise my English. And I won the first prize in the English speech competition in our school last year.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, please send me an e-mail to , I will try my best to do the job well.Yours truly,Li Fang
