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1专题三 应用文写作应用文写作是高考英语书面表达最常见的一种考查形式。此类作文接近学生的生活实际,学生有话可说,能充分考查学生的真实写作水平。常见的应用文有书信、电子邮件、通知、日记、便条、启示、演讲稿等。而浙江英语新高考把应用文写作作为一个特有题型固定下来,主要是对书信和电子邮件的考查。类型 1| 书信/电子邮件 英文书信通常由下列五个部分组成:1.信头(Heading)。包括写信人地址和写信日期,通常写在信笺的右上角。在比较熟识的朋友之间的通信,写信人的地址常可省略。2.称呼(Salutation)。指写信人对收信人的称呼,如 Dear Xiaojun,写在日期下一两行,顶格写,称呼后面可用逗号,也可用冒号,一般用 Dear.或 My dear.开头。3.正文(Body)。这是书信的主体部分,即写信人要表达的内容。正文一般在称呼下方隔两行处开始写,正文的首行左边一般留约 5 个字母宽的空白。4.结束语(Complimentary Close)。它是书信结尾的恭维话,相当于中文书信最后的“祝好” 、 “致礼”之类的话语。如“Best wishes”等。5.签名(Signature)。签名通常签在结束语下方的中间偏右的位置,在签名的上方可根据写信人和收信人的关系写 Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely(用于长辈或朋友之间),或 Respectfully yours/Yours respectfully(用于对长辈或上级),注意开头字母要大写,末尾要用逗号。假如你叫李华,你的一位朋友 John 刚从国外归来,邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会,但你不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件:1.表达想参加的意愿;2.忙于准备高考;3.由于感冒,身体不适;4.表示歉意并另约时间。注意:21.词数 80 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.参考词汇:高考 the College Entrance Examination[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear John,I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.It is very kind ①for you to invite me to your house and I look forward to ②go to your party and ③ share your experiences abroad.To my regret,I will ④absent from your party because ⑤ of the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner,and I am now really busy ⑥prepare for it.What's worse,I ⑦ caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.Anyway,we ⑧ have many more chances to get together.⑨ (让我们把时间定在考试之后行吗?)I am truly sorry and hope you will accept my apology.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua1.避免搭配错误①把 for 改为 of2.杜绝语法错误②go 改为 going③share 改为 sharing④添加 be 动词⑤删除介词 of⑥把 prepare 改为 preparing⑦改为现在完成时 have caught⑧改为一般将来时 will have3.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑨处要点:Shall we make it after the exam?[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进3Dear John,I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I ① look forward to going to your party and sharing your ② experiences abroad.③ to my regret,I will be absent from your party ④ because the College Entrance Exam ination is just around the corner,⑤and I am now really busy preparing for it.⑥ ,I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.Anyway,we will have many more chances to get together.Shall we make it after the exam? I am truly sorry and hope you will accept my ⑦ apology.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua1.高级词汇在⑥处加入适当过渡词 What's worse2.高级句型把④改为 with 复合结构:with the College Entrance Examination just around the corner把⑤改为介词+关系代词引导的定语从句:for which I am now really busy preparing3.一定的修辞意识在下面标号后写出相应的修饰词①really②happy③Much⑦sincere1类型 2| 建议信1.写作目的:建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。2.写作方法(1)首段:a.简介自己,不要啰嗦;b.说明目的,注意语气。(2)主体:a.提出具体建议;b.首先肯定优点,再写需改进内容,否则变成投诉信;c.经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提升你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文,因为内容与议论文相似。(3)尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,盼望回复。假如你叫李华,你的英国朋友 Andrew 下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在,请你用英语回一封信,按以下各点答复:1.建议骑自行车上学;2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具;3.骑自行车的一些好处;4.骑自行车需注意的问题。注意:词数 80 左右。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear Andrew,As for the question about the transportation to and from school,I'd like to recommend your riding ① bicycle.Here are some reasons.② (骑自行车上、下学在学生中是很常见的。)As is well­known,buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycle­riding is also a way to do ③exercises and protect the environment.What you 1.避免词汇搭配错误④处 careful 改为 carefully⑤处 By 改为 In2.杜绝语法错误①处添加冠词 a③处 exercises 改为 exercise⑥处 relax 改为 relaxing3.要点一定不要遗漏补上②处要点:Riding a bike 2should do ④careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.⑤By this way,you'll feel it simple and ⑥relax to ride a bicycle while you're here.Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Huatoand from school is very common among the students.[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Dear Andrew,As for the question about the transportation to and from school,I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.Firstly,①riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and ② (便利的)in our school.③ (事实上),bicycle­riding is also a ④ (实用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.In this way,you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua1.高级词汇②convenient③Actually/As a matter of fact④practical2.高级句型用 it is common practice to do.改写句①加黑部分:it is common practice for the students to ride a bike to and from school1类型 3| 申请信1.申请信的写作要求(1)应符合英语信件的格式,表达方式符合英语习惯;(2)申请人的语气要自信而不傲慢,礼貌而不卑微,即不卑不亢,恰如其分;(3)应写得简明流畅,言简意赅。2.申请信写法:开头:说明写信目的(申请原因),信息来源,对所申请工作或学校的认识,自己的打算。主体:着重介绍自己的背景(教育情况,工作经历,兴趣爱好,特长等)。求职信先介绍工作经验,要突出个人能力及工作业绩;求学信要重点介绍自己受教育程度。总之,要努力使自己的介绍引起对方的兴趣。结尾:表达自己的愿望,如希望得到面试机会等,语气要自信而坚定。假如你是我市一名高三学生李华,你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admission information),并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求,你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告,内容应包括:1.记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果;2.说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。词数:80 左右。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear Sir or Madam,I read about the admission information while I ① am surfing the net the other day.I'm interested in it.For one thing,I can get on well with all my classmates.For another,I do well in ② my most subjects,especially in English.I like reading English poems and ③ enjoying English movies.Speeches,④deliver by famous people are also my favorite.I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city ⑤ 1.杜绝语法错误①处 am 改为 was③处 enjoying 改为 enjoy④处 deliver 改为 delivered⑤处添加连词 and⑦处 relate 改为 related2.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑥处要点:if I am admitted into your university3.规避中式英语②处“我的大部分学科”应准确2was honored the Best Speaker for my performances.English is so important to me that I intend to learn English ⑥ (如果我被您的大学录取).I want to have a job ⑦relate to languages in the future.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua表达成:most of my subjects[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Dear Sir or Madam,I read about the admission information ①while I was surfing the net the other day.I'm ② interested in it.For one thing,I can get on well with all my classmates.For another,I do well in most of my subjects,especially in English.I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies.Speeches, delivered by famous people are also my favorite.③ ,I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my ④ performances.English is so important to me that I intend to ⑤ (主修)English if I am admitted into your university.I want to have a job related to languages in the future.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua1.高级词汇在③处加过渡词What's more⑤major in2.高级句型把①改为省略句:while surfing the net the other day3.强烈的修辞意识根据语境写出相应的修饰语②really/quite④excellent/outstanding1类型 4| 邀请信1.邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。在国际交往以及日常的各种社交活动中,这类书信使用广泛。2.一般邀请信具有简短、热情的特点。格式一般为:(1)说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图;(2)具体交代情景:包括受邀请的人,邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。并且强调为什么邀请收信人而不是别的朋友;(3)表示期待朋友的回复。假定你是李华,你所在的学校将在暑假期间举办“澳大利亚文化展览” 。请你根据以下要点给澳大利亚朋友 Peterson 写一封信,请他届时前来给你们做一次讲座。目的:帮助师生了解澳洲历史与文化内容:简要介绍澳大利亚的风土人情日期:8 月第一周内任意一天的下午时间:3:00—5:00,约两个小时注意:可适当增加细节,以使结构完整,词数 80 左右。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear Peterson,Our school is planning to hold an ① Australia culture exhibition in ②summer vacation.I'm writing to invite you to come and give a talk on the people and ③custom on the continent of Australia.It will help our teachers and students learn more about your history and ④cultural.You may choose any day of the first week in August.You can give us the talk that afternoon,⑤that will start from 3: 00 p.m.and finish at about 5:00 p.m.⑥ (请让我尽可能早的知道,以便于我及时作出安排)I am looking forward to seeing you and enjoying 1.避免搭配错误①处 Australia 改为Australian③处 custom 改为 customs④处 cultural 改为 culture2.杜绝语法错误②处添加冠词 the⑤处 that 改为 which3.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑥处要点:Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements in time.2the talk.Yours,Li Hua[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Dear Peterson,Our school ①is planning to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation.I'm writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.②We would like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon,③which will start from 3:00 p.m.and finish at about 5:00 p.m.I'm looking forward to your reply and we're sure your talk will be a success.Yours,Li Hua1.高级词汇用 schedule 的相关短语改写①处的黑体部分:is scheduled to2.高级句型用 It is a good chance for sb.to do sth.改写句②:It is a good chance for our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.③处改为现在分词短语作后置定语:starting from 3:00 p.m.and ending at about 5:00 p.m.1类型 5| 求助信1.求助信要简明扼要,语气委婉、真诚,不强人所难,并尽量提供足够的信息,能使收信人愿意帮助你。2.写作指导(1)清晰陈述请求的内容或所要获取的信息;(2)提出的问题数量不宜过多,要便于回答;(3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。假如你是某中学的高一学生李明,最近与母亲关系紧张,难以相处。请根据下表内容用英语给某英文杂志 Helper 栏目的编辑 Mr.Smith 写一封 80 词左右的求助信,请他帮你解决问题。你的情况 你母亲的情况 你的问题1.学习成绩好;2.爱母亲;3.有点害怕母亲。1.大学教授,工作勤奋,很少有时间和你说话;2.对你严格要求,易发脾气。1.与母亲很少交流;2.不知如何沟通。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Smith,I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubled me for a long time.It is ②relationship between my mother and me.My mother is a university professor ③she works very hard.She is strict ④in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper ⑤easy.I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and ⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts.⑦ (如果您能帮助我,我将不胜感激。)1.避免词汇搭配错误④处 in 改为 with2.杜绝语法错误①处 troubled 应改成 troubling②处应添加冠词 the③处应添加连词 and⑤处 easy 改为 easily⑥处 exchange 改为 exchanged3.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑦处要点:I'd appreciateit if you give me a way out.2Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Ming[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Dear Mr.Smith,I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubling me for a long time.It is the relationship between my mother and me.My mother is a university professor,②and she works very hard.She is strict with me but ③she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily.④I don't know how to communicate with her.⑤Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.I'd appreciate it if you give me a way out.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Ming高级句型①处改为定语从句:which/that has troubled me for a long time②处改为现在分词短语:working very hard③处改为倒装句:so busy is she with her work that she finds little time to talk to me用 the reason why.is that.连接④、⑤句:The reason why I don't know how to communicate with her is that we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.1类型 6| 感谢信1.感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的专业书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。2.感谢信的写作格式主要分以下三个部分:(1)开头部分要明确对对方提供的帮助或赠送的礼物表示谢意;(2)主体部分则需列举对方提供的帮助,说明该帮助所起的作用,或表达对所收礼物的喜爱以及以后如何使用及收藏等;(3)结尾部分需再次表达诚挚的谢意并问候对方。假如你是一名失学儿童,名叫李华,你有幸得到在中国工作的 Mr.Brown 的资助,可以重返校园。请你给 Mr.Brown 写一封信,内容如下:1.收到钱和书后能重返校园,非常感激;2.在老师的帮助下,学习有了很大的进步,受到老师的表扬和鼓励;3.决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步;4.盼望见到 Mr.Brown,希望他寄来一张照片。注意:1.书信应包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数 80 左右;文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Brown,I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.I ①could not return to school if you hadn't helped me.Thank you so much.I have been ②work hard since I went back to school.I have made great progress in my studies ③under the help of my teachers.They often praise me and encourage me.I ④made up my mind to study harder and make ⑤ great progress.How are you getting on with your life and 1.避免词汇搭配错误③处 under 改为 with⑤处 great 改为 greater2.杜绝语法错误①处 could not return 改为could not have returned②处 work 改为 working④处 made 改为 have made3.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑥处要点:Would you please send me a photo of yourself?2work?I would like to meet you in person,but I have no opportunity to do so.⑥ (您能寄给我一张自己的照片吗?)Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Dear Mr.Brown,I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.I could not have returned to school ①if you hadn't helped me.Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back to school.②My teachers often praise me and encourage me.③I have made great progress in my studies with the help of them.I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life and work?I would like to meet you in person,but I have no opportunity to do so.Would you please send me a photo of yourself?Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua1.高级词汇①处改为“without+名词”形式:without your help2.高级句型用“介词+关系代词”连接②、③句:My teachers often praise me and encourage me,with the help of whom I have made great progress in my studies.1类型 7| 通知 1.通知分书面通知或口头通知。它是上级对下级、组织对成员部署工作,传达事情,召开会议所使用的一种文体。2.英文书面通知的格式与写法通知正文上方的正中位置写上 NOTICE(每个字母用大写),出通知的单位写在正文结束后的右下角,或者写在 NOTICE 的正上方。出通知的日期一般写在左下角。单位和日期两项也可以省略。通知不写称呼,也没有结束语,但在正文里,往往首先提到被通知的对象。通知的正文就是通知的内容,这是主体部分,包括通知的对象、事由、时间、地点等,语言应简洁明了,条理清晰,要求明确,特别是时间概念很重要,必须写得十分明确,不容丝毫含糊。请你根据以下内容,以学校的名义写一则书面通知。北京大学将于 7 月 25 日至 8 月 10 日在北戴河举办英语夏令营,以下是课程及活动安排。上午:英语口语,美国文化讲座。下午:爬山,游泳,做游戏。晚上:英语晚会,唱英语歌,演话剧,有时看英语录像(English videotapes)。有意者请于 6 月 20 日至 6 月 24 日到教务处报名、登记。日期:2017.6.11[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文NOTICEAn English summer camp is going to ① hold in Beidaihe by Beijing University from July 25 to August 10.In the morning,spoken English and some lectures about American culture ② is arranged.In the afternoon,students are going to take part in some activities such as climbing mountains,swimming,and playing games.In the evening,English ③activity will be held,④which students will sing some English songs,and put on some English plays.⑤ (有时看1.杜绝语法错误①处 hold 改为 be held②处 is arranged 改为will be arranged③处 activity 改为activities④处 which 改为 where⑥处 want 改为 wanting2.要点一定不要遗漏补上⑤处要点:Sometimes they can 2英语录像。)Those ⑥want to go should come to register from June 20 to June 24,in the Teaching Affair Office.Beijing UniversityJun.11,2017watch some English videotapes.[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进NOTICE①An English summer camp is going to be held in Beidaihe by Beijing University from July 25 to August 10.In the morning,spoken English and some lectures about American culture will be arranged.In the afternoon,students are going to take part in some activities such as climbing mountains,swimming,and playing games.In the evening,English activities will be held,at which students will sing some English songs,and put on some English plays.Sometimes they can watch some English videotapes.②Those who want to go should come to register from June 20 to June 24,in the Teaching Affair Office.Beijing UniversityJun.11,2017高级句型用 there be 句型改写句①:There will be anEnglish summer camp in Beidaihe by Beijing University from July 25 to August 10.用 whoever 改写句②:Whoever wants to go should come to register from June 20 to June 24,in the Teaching Affair Office.1类型 8| 演讲稿英语演讲稿实际上是属于一种特殊的说明文或议论文,其基本组成部分是:1.开始时对听众的称呼语。 最常用的是 ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况,选用 fellow students,distinguished guests,Mr.chairman,honorable judges(评委)等等。2.提出论题。由于演讲的时间限制,必须开门见山,提出论题。3.论证。对提出的论题,不可主观地妄下结论,而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是要把道理讲清楚。4.结论。结论要简明扼要,以给听众留下深刻印象。5.结尾。结尾要简洁,不要拉拉扯扯,说个没完。最普通的结尾就是:Thank you very much for your attention.。你校将举办“我为自己感到自豪”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇演讲稿,包括以下内容:1.简单介绍自己的性格;2.记述一件或几件自己引以为豪的事例;3.自我认识。注意:词数 80 左右。[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文Good morning,ladies and gentlemen!I am an easy­going and optimistic girl.I'm not a top student ① and I'm happy and full ② with confidence.Now I'll tell you why.As a child,I ③ show an interest in painting.With my parents' support and encouragement,I have been practicing drawing with joy and ④ my painting makes progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class.I usually send nice postcards made by myself ⑤for my friends and relatives.They are glad to accept my gifts,⑥ I am proud of them.1.避免词汇搭配错误②处 with 改为 of⑤处 for 改为 to2.杜绝语法错误①处 and 改为 but③处 show 改为 showed⑥处需要加并列连词and3.规避中式英语④处为中式英语,应改为 I make progress in my painting2I'm sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Let's be proud of ourselves!Thank you.[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进Good morning,ladies and gentlemen!Here,① (在你前面站着的是一个随和、乐观的小女孩).I'm not a top student but I'm happy and full of confidence.Now I'll tell you why.As a child,I showed a ② interest in painting.With my parents' support and encouragement,I have been practicing drawing with joy and make progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class.③ ,I usually send nice postcards made by myself to my friends and relatives.They are glad to accept my gifts,④ I am proud.I'm sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Let's be proud of ourselves!Thank you.1.高级词汇在③处加过渡词 Besides2.高级句型用倒装句式补全句①:in front of you stands a girl,easy­going and optimistic在④处添加“介词+关系代词”以构成定语从句 of which3.强烈的修辞意识②处在 interest 前面加表示程度的修饰词 greatA(2016·浙江省名校协作体联考)Couchsurfing.com,中文含义为“沙发客” ,是一个旨在帮助旅行者与当地人建立联系的国际性非营利网站。通俗地说,当你旅行时你可以住在当地会员家;当有会员来你的城市时你可以接待他们住你家。假设你是李华,你想成为该网站的会员,请用英文写一份申请,内容应包括:1.写信目的;2.你的条件(住宿情况等);3.希望获准。注意:1.词数 80 左右;32.书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数),可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇:non­profit 非营利性的 couch surfers 沙发客Dear Sir/Madam,I'm Li Hua,a student from China.I have learned that Couchsurfing is a non­profit international network Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作要求写一封申请信,属于半开放性写作。首先说明写信目的,由于开头已给出“沙发客”的简介,因此续写时,先要把题干内容表达出来,即通过该组织,不同地方的会员可相互提供住宿,顺理成章地说明写信目的;然后陈述你的条件,该要点为开放性内容,要详细介绍自己的住宿情况和意愿,比如可提供三室,渴望和有共同兴趣的人交朋友,分享旅途趣事和多元文化等;最后表达自己的愿望和感谢。全文主体时态是一般现在时,也可根据行文需要灵活变化。另外,注意恰当使用高级词汇和句式,如定语从句、非谓语动词等。语言要简洁委婉,符合申请信的需要。参考词汇:apply for 申请;be eager to do sth.渴望做某事;look forward to sth.盼望某事【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm Li Hua,a student from China.I have learned that Couchsurfing is a non­profit international network through which members in different places can offer accommodation to each other.Greatly interested,I'm writing to apply for its membership.With three bedrooms available,my two­storey house can admit several “couch surfers”.Besides,I'm eager to befriend tourists of the same interests,enjoy their wonderful travelling stories and get immersed in diverse cultures.Thanks for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your approval.Yours,Li Hua4B(2016·绍兴市柯桥中学质检)假定你是李越,你的美国朋友 Peter 想来中国旅行,他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信,建议他乘坐高铁。建议理由:1.便捷,准点;2.舒适,安全;3.购票方便,价格适宜。注意:1.词数 80 左右。开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:中国高铁 CRH (China Railway High­speed)自助售票机 self­service ticket machineDear Peter,I'm expecting you to come to China. 【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一封书信,为提纲类作文,要求学生根据所给内容给美国朋友Peter 写一封回信,建议他来中国旅游时乘坐高铁,并向其介绍高铁的优点。这类作文要点明确、范围具体、贴近生活,易于学生动笔。题目中的文字说明对写作范围做了较为明确的限定,因此一定要抓住文章的要点,不能遗漏。写作时,要使用准确、丰富的词汇,还要注意使用地道而富于变化的句型,使文章的结构错落有致。【参考范文】Dear Peter,I'm expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing,you'd better take the CRH train,which has been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.It has lots of different lines,so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.The CRH trains are spacious,comfortable and run at the top speed of 350 km per hour.5They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travellers.It's easy to get tickets through many channels,such as by telephone,through the Internet,or on the self­service ticket machine.Besides,prices of tickets are reasonable.It offers first­class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.Yours,Li Yue【导学号:85602004】C假如你是 Sam,大学英语系一年级的学生。你叔叔因为生意关系,需要个临时翻译,你想试一下。因此,周三不能上口语课。你只好给外教 Ms.Riddle 写个请假条,向她解释原因并请求准假。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Ms.Riddle,Earnestly yours,Sam【写作指导】本文要求写个请假条,属于一篇应用文。写作时,根据所给的材料,内容要点应包含:说明请假的原因并请求准假。写作时,应使用第一人称,以一般现在时为主。同时恰当地使用连接词和过渡词以及复杂句式,这样可以使行文更加流畅,提高作文的逻辑性和得分档次。【参考范文】Dear Ms.Riddle,I'd like to know if I could ask for a casual leave from your Oral English class this Wednesday.Yesterday evening I got a call from my uncle,who is running a small firm.He needs an interpreter for one day but cannot find the most reliable 6person,so he wants me to have a try.I regard this as a golden opportunity to put what I have learned into practice,but I need your permission of absence.If you think I may go and help him,I'm confident that I'll do a good job and both of us will be grateful.Earnestly yours,SamD(2016·绍兴市鲁迅中学质检)假定你是李华,你在本市作交流生的英国朋友 Chris 很热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。2016 年 5 月 10 日下午 2:00 在绍兴大剧院将上演新编的越剧《红楼梦》 。请根据下面信息,给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。1.提出邀请并简述原因;2.提出观剧后的活动建议(如游览东湖等)。注意:1.词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:绍兴大剧院 Shaoxing Grand Theater 越剧 Yue Opera红楼梦 The Dream of Red MansionDear Chris,I have some good news for you! Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一封电子邮件,主要是邀请热爱中国文化的英国朋友 Chris 来绍兴大剧院观看新编的越剧《红楼梦》 ,并提出观剧后的活动建议。书信的开头和结尾已给出,因此学生可以直接进入主题,展开写作。需注意所写的第一句话要与所给开头衔接自然,在陈述原因和提出建议部分可以适当发挥。写作时,人称应以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。此外,文中需要穿插使用一些过渡性词汇或短语,以使全文上下连贯,行文紧凑。7【参考范文】Dear Chris,I have some good news for you!A new Yue Opera, The Dream of Red Mansion,will be put on in Shaoxing Grand Theatre at 2:00 p.m.on May 10th,2016.I know you take a fancy to Chinese culture,the local operas in particular.I hope this opportunity will not only make you happy,but also satisfy your interest in Chinese operas.After the show,I strongly recommend that we take a brief tour around the East Lake,where you will be rewarded with a wonderful state of mind.I do hope you can come and join me.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【导学号:85602005】
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