1、2017 高 考 英 语 null 浙 江 专 版 null null 轮 复 null null 策 略专 题 一 读 后 续 写 读后续写作null浙江英语高考新题型，是一种常见的null给材料作文null，它要求学生在阅读完一篇null未写完的文章之后，根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把null篇未写完的文章补充完整null读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述，去推想之后可能出现的情况，要展开合理null充分的想象，构思nullnull的情节，写null一篇完整的文章null读后续写有null于null养学生的想象能力null创新思维能力和语言表达能力null 选材特点 1所需阅读的短文词数在 350
2、 以内null 2多以记null文故null类文章或者夹null夹议类文章nullnull，故null情节有曲折null有起伏，但是，故null线索的逻辑性比较强null 评分参考 阅卷时null要考虑以null内容null 1null所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度null 2内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况null 3应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性null 4nullnull文的连贯性null 注意null 1所续写短文的词数应null 150 null右 (词数少于 130 的，从总分中null去 2 分 )null 2应使用 5 个以null短文中标有null划线的关键词语nu
3、ll 3续写部分分null两段，null段的开头语nullnull你写好null 4续写完null后，请用null划线标出你所使用的关键词语null 写作步骤 1精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间null线索null是以空间null线索等，null有利于nullnull藤摸瓜nullnull 2仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制null使用几处null划线关键词语null续写段落的首句提示等，做到null心中有数nullnull 3回扣原文，想象续写内容null快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容null 4拟写草稿，修改错词病句null结合提示语和
4、文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，nullnull文的衔接null 5标出所使用的原材料中标有null划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，null必做到null字迹null整null清晰nullnull 方法技巧 1在读懂原文的null础null，紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局null起点，写出故null情节的发展和null化null 2对原文故null没有写出的情节展开合理的推想，打开思路null多角度地想象出几种情况或结局，并从中null以最优选择null 3要注意前后照应，符合逻辑，防null自相矛盾null必nullnullnull文紧密联系，使nullnull文
5、融null一体null 4原文的null要角色，续文中都要安排nullnullnull，但null要引进影响null件结局的新角色null 注意确保四个一致null 1要null原文的null题或作者的本来意图保持一致null 2要null原文的体裁null结构null写作手法保持一致null 3要null原文的语言特点和nullnull风格保持一致null 4null要人物的思想行nullnull性格特点要null原文保持一致null 写作要求 阅读null面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构null一个完整的故nullnull A funny thing happened to Arthu
6、r when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank， he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopp
7、ed and asked，null It looks like youve got a problem，null Arthur said. null Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.null null Is there something I can do to help？null Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，null Thanks.If youre sure it woul
8、dnt be too much trouble， you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.null null No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.null The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground， he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suit
9、case and started walking， he heard the long loud noise of an alarm It was from the bank There had been a robbery(抢劫 )! Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers jo
10、ined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other，null What happened？null But everyone had a different answer. Arthur， still carrying the suitcase， turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surpri
11、sed.null Why is she looking at me like that？null He thought.null The suitcase！ She thinks Im the bank thief！null Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened， and without another thought， he started to run. 注意null 1所续写短文的词数应null 150 null右null 2应使用 5 个以null短文中标有null划线的关键词语null 3续写
12、部分分null两段，null段的开头语nullnull你写好null 4续写完null后，请用null划线标出你所使用的关键词语null Paragraph 1null As he was running， Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，null Stop， stop！null_ Paragraph 2null The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur_ _ null经典范文null null范文一null As he was running， Arthur he
13、ard the young man shouting behind，null Stop， stop！null And also at the moment， Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber So Arthur didnt stop， but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it， jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver，null Go to the police s
14、tation，please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief！null The taxi raced away like the wind. The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously， the police had already learned about the robbery They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum
15、of money inside， as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase.Later， with the information， the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Wordsnull 153) null范文二null As he was running， Arthur heard the young man
16、shouting behind，null Stop， stop！null Thinking of the way the young man had behaved， he realized the young man might be the bank robber So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi.The moment he got into the taxi， he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the
17、nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away. The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police， he hea
18、rd a voice outside，null Help！ Help！null To the surprise of Arthur， it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Wordsnull 158) nu
19、ll范文点拨null 原文所给关键词分类null 地点null Park Avenue， the bank 人物null The young man， people， the bank thief null件null suitcases， in the back seat， loud noise of an alarm， robbery， the shouts 在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，null需要注意以null线索null 1 Why did the young man look worried? 2 What happened？ But everyone had a differ
20、ent answer. 3 Arthur became frightened and without another thought， he started to run. A (2016 嘉兴一中质检 ) 阅读null面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构null一个完整的故nullnull Jack， a clerk at the local bank， was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold，silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda， who had been in a ca
21、r accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed， waiting for more money for her operation Jack had sold everything he had， and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack， it
22、would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.null I have only one option left，null Jack said to himself.Then he went to the bank， his workplace， again.For several days， he observed the bank and planned a theft The next day， he went to work as usual.Everything seemed norm
23、alnull he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work， instead of the small one he always carried.At 5null 00 pm， the bank closed， and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However， at that moment， Jack was i
24、n the bathroom， and the guards didnt notice him， of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark， Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the
25、equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools， he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The banks security system wasnt very good， which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several min
26、utes later， Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money. 注意null 1所续写短文的词数应null 150 null右null 2应使用 5 个以null短文中标有null划线的关键词语null 3续写部分分null两段，null段的开头语nullnull你写好null 4续写完null后，请用null划线标出你所使用的关键词语null Paragraph 1null After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while， the alarms began to rin
27、g._ _ Paragraph 2null But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank， an old man. _ _ null写作指导null 本篇读后续写是一篇记null文nullnull要null述了 Jack 作null银行null作人员，利用职null之便，null了筹钱给妻子null手术，nullnull地偷走了银行的钱null根据第一段提示，null段应null写银行和社会对nullnull的反应null根据第null段首句提示，银行null理nullnull了最null幸的人null尽管 Jack null妻子治好
28、了病，但心理nullnull发生了很大的null化null null参考范文null After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while， the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly， only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town， which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering
29、 the strange theft The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case， of course， including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible， even though no clues had been found yet. But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank， an old man.He seemed to be the onl
30、y person to blame and was removed from his position.At last，with enough money for her operation， Jacks wife was saved.However， Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally， he turned himself in to the po
31、lice and accepted his punishment. null导学号：85602000null B 阅读null面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构null一个完整的故nullnull It was Mothers Day and I was shopping at the local supermarket with my son who is five years old， Tenyson As we were leaving after finishing our shopping，we realized that only minutes earlier an elder
32、ly woman had fallen over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her， but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately， a lot of people stopped to help out. While we were walking towards the scene， Tenyson became very wor
33、ried about what had happened to the elderly couple.He said to me，null Mom， its not much fun falling over in front of everyone.null Seeing that there was a flower stall(摊null ) at the front of the supermarket， he added，null Why shouldnt we buy the lady a flower？ It will make her feel better.null I wa
34、s amazed that hed come up with this sweet idea who was only a five years old boy.So we went over and told the flower seller what we wanted.null Just take it，null she replied.null I cant take your money for such a wonderful deednull By now medical staff had arrived， and were looking after the injured
35、 woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror， but he tried to comfort his wife and held her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the womans husband and I told him it was from my son.At that， the old man started crying and said，null Thank you very much.null He
36、 then turned to me，null You have a wonderful son.Happy Mothers Day to you.null The man bent down and gave his wife the flower， telling her who it was from.Regardless of being badly hurt， the old lady looked up at Tenyson with love and appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son w
37、ent down his body to the injured lady and tenderly said，null Happy Mothers Day to you， too.null 注意null 1所续写短文的词数应null 150 null右null 2应使用 5 个以null短文中标有null划线的关键词语null 3续写部分分null两段，null段的开头语nullnull你写好null 4续写完null后，请用null划线标出你所使用的关键词语null Paragraph 1null After a moment， the elderly lady was taken int
38、o an ambulance_ _ Paragraph 2null One year later,_ _ null写作指导null 本篇读后续写根据文中所给的关键词，故null情节以及null段开头语可推知，续写内容null老妇人被null往医院nullnull处null应null写儿子的心理活null，以使文章内容null情感更null充实null根据第null段开头语可知，null处要讲述一年以后的null情，null了使故null情节更null完整，学生可以将null件回null到母亲节，作者母子在超市购物null老夫妇重逢的情形null在写作时，学生可以nullnull运用null列表
39、达方式null worriedly， It seemed that.， there is (are) .等null null参考范文null After a moment， the elderly lady was taken into an ambulance by medical staff and was sent to hospital.The crowd gradually scattered.Tenyson and I went home.On our way home， he asked me worriedly，null Mom， will the elderly lady b
40、e OK since she was too old and she had badly fallen over？null I looked at him and said.null The elderly lady would be fine since there were so many people coming to help her.And you did a wonderful deed， my boy.null One year later， it was Mothers Day again.As last year， I went shopping， at the local
41、 supermarket with Tenyson.Suddenly， Tenyson said excitedly，null Look， Mom.It is that old woman.null I looked that way and saw the elderly lady and her husband.It seemed that she had recovered from her injury.We walked towards them and they were happy to meet us， too.The elderly lady hugged my son an
42、d whispered to him.null I will never forget the flower you give me， my sweet boy.null C (2016 金华一中模拟 ) 阅读null面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构null一个完整的故nullnull Jim was walking down a dimly lit street late one evening， hoping to see his lovely children as soon as possible.As he was walking quietly， Jim heard muffl
43、ed(null沉的 ) screams coming from behind some bushes.Alarmed， Jim stopped to listen carefully.He realized that what he was hearing was the unmistakable sound of a struggle Thinking of the danger， he became frightened. Only yards from where Jim stood， a girl was being attacked.Jim didnt know what to do
44、.Should he get involved in it？ He was worried about his own safety and regretted having suddenly decided to take a new route home that night.He was afraid of becoming another victim.He was wondering whether he should just run to the nearest phone and call the police or went to fight with the attacke
45、r to save the unknown girl. As he struggled from within， the girls cries were growing weaker.Jim knew he had to act fast.Yet he knew he couldnt just walk away from this.He realized that he could not turn his back on the fate of this unknown girl， even if it meant risking his own life. Now， Jim was not a brave man， nor was he athletic.Even he himself didnt quite know where he found the moral courage and physical strength.However once he was determined to help the girl， he became strangely
