1、 1 / 6作文七天会-第六天句子接句子, “红娘” 是连词 (作文中如何使用复合句)写作口诀之六: 转换简单句,也用复合句连词当“红娘” ,作用真积极“非谓” 加“ 复合”,文章上等级1. 六大从句一、 主语从句Why he came so late was not explained.Who he is doesnt concern me.It makes no difference whether he will come.二、表语从句The question is who will give us a hand.That is why he has gone to America.三、
2、宾语从句I wondered whether she had received the invitation.I doubt whether he will succeed .He made it quite clear that he would leave office.四、定语从句This is the farm that we visited last time.The farm that we visited last time is very large.Do you know the girl whose spoken English is very good.五、同位语从句Th
3、e news that our team has won the game is true.The reason why he was late was that he missed the first bus.六、状语从句As soon as I hear the news I will let you know.Sit down where you like.2 / 6Because it was raining he didnt go out for a walk.The weather was so bad that we had to stay at home.Speak loude
4、r so that everyone can hear you.Youll be late unless you go there by taxi.He worked as fast as a skilled workerThough it was late, the workers went on working.You must do everything as I tell you.2. 写作中常犯的两种错误(1) 以为逗号可以代替连词1)我妈妈很忙,我得帮帮她。My mother was busy , I had to help her.My mother was busy , so
5、I had to help her.Because my mother was very busy, I had to help her.My mother being very busy , I had to help her.2)我叔叔从美国回来了, 我非常高兴。My uncle has come back from America, Im very happy.My uncle has come back from America, so Im very happy.My uncle has come back from America, and Im very happy.My unc
6、les coming back from America makes me very happy.With my uncle back from America, Im very happy.(2)错把副词或介词当连词1)张华很忙,但他经常帮助我们。Zhang Hua is very busy , however, he often helps us.Zhang Hua is very busy . However, he often helps us.Zhang Hua is very busy , but he often helps us.Though Zhang Hua is very
7、 busy , he often helps us.2)随着时间的推移,我们的英语水平越来越高。With time goes by, Our English is better and better .With time going by, Our English is better and better .3 / 6As time goes by, Our English is better and better .3. 适宜使用复合句的两种情况(1)简单句较多时, 换用复合句。1)杰克来自加拿大,他在我们学校已经学习了三年,他不仅经常帮助我们学英语,而且中文也讲得很不错。Jack is f
8、rom Canada. He has studied in our school for three years. He often helps us learn English. He speaks Chinese very well.Jack is a student of our school, who comes from Canada . He has studied in our school for three years. He often helps us learn English, and he speaks Chinese very well.Jack comes fr
9、om Canada . He is a student of our school where he has studied for three years. Not only does he help us learn English but he speaks Chinese fluently as well.2)李佳是在很多年以前开始学滑冰的,当时她是一个小女孩,她学滑冰已10多年了,她非常喜欢滑冰,终于成为有名的滑冰运动员。Li Jia began skating many year ago . Then she was a little girl .She has skated fo
10、r over 10 years . She likes it very much . She became a famous skating player at last.Many years ago, when Li Jia was a little girl , she began skating . It is over ten years since she began skating . She likes skating very much , which led her to a famous skating player at last.(2) 连接上下文时使用复合句1)史密斯
11、先生在会议上讲了许多关于学习英语的方法。他的话对我们帮助很大。我们决定课堂内外多讲英语,因为英语口语在交际中太重要了。At the meeting , Mr. Smith said a lot on how to learn English . His words gave us a lot of help . Weve decided to speak more English in and out of class .Spoken English is very important in communication.At the meeting , Mr. Smith said a lot
12、 on how to learn English . What he said gave us a lot of help . Weve decided to speak more English in and out of class because spoken English is very important to communication.2) 李佳在乡下和奶奶住了很长一段时间。在奶奶的帮助下,他学会了做家务。现在,李佳和父母住在一起,父母不在家时,他能自己洗衣服,做晚饭吃。Li Jia lived in the country for ages . with the help o
13、f his grandmother , he learned how to do housework . He is now living with his parents .Sometimes his parents are not at home . he can wash clothes and cook supper himself.Li Jia lived in the country for ages, where he learned how to do housework with the help of his grandmother. He is now living wi
14、th his parents .when his parents are not at home , he can wash clothes and cook supper himself.4. 段落练笔4 / 61)并列句李阳是一个很不错的中学生。他学习成绩好,尤其是数学和英语,他乐于助人,从不和他人争吵。但是,李阳不怎么喜欢体育锻炼,除了体育课之外,很少能在运动场上见到他的人影儿。不过,李阳的象棋倒是下得特棒。Li Yang is a good middle school student. He is good at his lessons . He is good at maths an
15、d English . He often helps others . He seldom quarrels with others . But he doesnt like sports . he has to have a P.E class. We seldom see him on the playground. But he is very good at chess.As we all know, Li Yang is a good middle school student , for he does well in almost al his subjects, especia
16、lly maths and English. He is always ready to help others and never does he quarrel with his classmates . However , Li Yang doesnt go in for sports and seldom does he appear on the playground except that there is a P.E class. But then he plays chess very well.2)主语从句显而易见,英语越来越重要。上星期六,我们邀请张教授给我们作了一场如何学
17、号英语的报告。这个报告对同学们的帮助很大。许多同学现在每天多花一个小时的时间学英语。Clearly , English is more and more important. Last Saturday we invited Professor Zhang to give us a report on how to learn English well .His report helps us a lot . Now many students spend one more hour in learning English.It is clear that English is more an
18、d more important. Last Saturday we invited Professor Zhang to give us a report on how to learn English well .What he said does help us a lot . It is said that many students spend one more hour in learning English from now on.3)表语从句现在是5点查3分,足球比赛马上就要开始了,但糟糕的是杰克还没有来。众所周知,杰克是我们队的主力。没有他,我们很难赢得这场比赛。这就是我们着
19、急的原因。It is three to five now. The football match is to begin. But Jack hasnt come yet . Everybody knows that Jack is a leading part of our team . Without him, we are difficult to win the game. So we worry about it.It is three to five now. The football match is to begin. But the problem is that Jack
20、hasnt come yet . It is known that Jack is a leading part of our team . Without him, it is difficult for us to win the game . That is why we are so worried .4) 宾语从句昨天下午5点钟,在放学的路上,我和李明看见一个女孩在路边哭。我们问她哭的原因,她说她迷路了,并告诉我们她就在附近居住。于是,我们决定帮助她回家。5 / 6At five yesterday afternoon, on our way home, Li Ming and I
21、saw a girl was crying by the road. We asked her why she crying there. She said that she lost her way home. She also said that her home was nearby. Hearing this, we decided to help her.On our way home at five yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I saw a girl crying by the road.“Whats wrong with you, youn
22、g girl ? ” we asked. The girl told us that she lost her way home and that her home was nearby. Hearing what she said, we decided to do what she wanted us to .5)名词性从句有人告诉我们下星期举办英语晚会,但我们既不知道具体地点,也不知道准确时间。王非说,时间和地点倒是无关紧要,而谁是晚会的主持人倒非常关键。魏东接过来说,我们的女班长是最理想的人选,但她下周要到外地出差呀。Someone told us that we would have
23、 an English Evening next week. But we dont know when we will hold the evening and where we will hold it . Wang Fei said that it wasnt important when and where we will have the evening, but it is very important who will be the host. Wei Dong said that our monitress is very good , but she will be out
24、on business 5next week. We ve been told that there is going to be an English Evening next week , but we dont know the exact time and place. “It makes no difference when and where well have the party, but it matters a lot who will host it. Do you think so ? ” says Wang Fei. Hearing what he said , Wei
25、 Dong says our monitress is the right person for it , but the question is that she will be out on business at the same time.It is said that well have an English evening next week, but we have no idea when and where it will be . Wang Fei says that it isnt very important when and where well hold it, b
26、ut the key question is who will be host or hostess. “Thats right, ” Wei Dong says , “Our monitress , as you know , is what we want, but unluckily , she will go out on business next week .”6) 定语从句这是我国一家生产小轿车的大型厂家,始建于20世纪50年代。过去,这家汽车厂出产的小汽车只在国内销售。随着科学技术的发展,这家汽车厂生产的轿车质量越来越好,品种多样,而且这些轿车省油,价格合理。因此受到国内外市场
27、的广泛青睐。This is a large car factory. It makes cars . It was built in the 1950s . In the past, their cars was sold just in our country. With the development of science and technology, this factory makes more and more cars and the cars quality is high . These cars save oil . They are not very expensive.
28、 Now they are sold in our country and in some other countries.This is a large car factory which/that has been producing cars . It was built in the1950s. In the past, however, what they made was just sold at home . With the development of science and technology, this factory makes a variety of cars ,
29、 which ,of course, are of high quality. Whats more, the cars they make not only save oil but also have a reasonable price. Thats why they are popular both at home and abroad.7)状语从句6 / 6众所周知,王楠是一个顶尖的乒乓球运动员,她多次为国家征得了荣誉。但是,在第14届亚运会上,尽管她已尽心尽力,王楠发挥失常。 失败是成功之母。回国之后,王楠认真总结教训,坚持刻苦训练。功夫不负有心人。在2003年的世界乒乓球锦标赛上
30、,她一举夺得三块金牌。她激动万分,领奖时热泪盈眶。Everybody knows that Wang Nan is a top table tennis player in the world. She has won a lot of honor for our country . But she didnt play well in the 14th Asian Games . She tried her best . When she returned , she learnt her lesson. She plays hard. No pains, no gains. At the
31、Worlds Table Tennis Title Match in 2003 she won three gold medals. She was excited because she got them.As is known, Wang Nan is a world-famous table tennis player and has won lots of honor for our country . Bad luck to her, however, she didnt play as wonderfully as before on the 14th Asian Games, a
32、lthough she did her very best. Having returned from abroad , she learnt her lesson in time and soon began to train herself as hard as possible . No pains, no gains. This year, in 2003, at the Worlds Table Tennis Title Match, Wang Nan has got three medals . She was so excited when she got them that s
33、he couldnt keep back her tears.It is known that Wang Nan is a top table tennis player in the world and has won lots of honor for our country . But much to her surprise, her opponents defeated her at the14th Asian Games, though she did what she could. After she returned to her land, she learnt her lesson in time and soon began to train herself as hard as possible so that she could stand up again . No pains, no gains. Not long before, she has won three gold medals at the Worlds Table Tennis Title Match in 2003. When she was given the medals , She was too excited to say a word.