1、Lesson1 主题 ：小作文思路导图主讲人：TINA以 2011 年为例:cousin Liming 考上大学第一步：定位- 恭喜信第二步：归纳要求-1.恭喜 2. 建议和指导第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-恭喜2.打拳-夸复旦，为你骄傲3.肥肉（2 个万能句）-建议指导：好好学习4.结束语-祝福前程似锦Dear Li Ming,I am happy to hear that you will go to Fu Dan University. As we all know, Fu Dan University enjoys great reputation and populari
2、ty all over the world, so we are proud that you become a part of it. It is believed that ones success depends in large measure on his hard work and dedication. So I do suggest that your top priority should be given to learn useful and helpful knowledge in college, which makes it easier for you to be
3、come an excellent candidate after graduation. I hold an expectation that you will have a bright future.=you will have a great prospect. Yours sincerely, Zhangwei知识点：五点一五种头：1. It is believed/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledged that _2.众所周知 As we all know, _/As is known to all, 3.我认为： We/ I come to
4、realize/believe/that _I am firmly convinced that_As far as I am concerned, _In the eyes of most people, _I strongly feel/do suggest that_I have reasons to believe that_4. I am happy to learn/hear that_I am sorry to say/tell that _5.Everyone (in business/in the world) has been told that _二换词思维：1.换头：会
5、的人：I am writing this letter to you to congratulate you on the successful admission to Fudan University 不会的人：I am so happy to learn that you will go to Fudan University2.换词：e.g 录取：会的人：you have been admitted by/gained admission to/enrolled by Fudan University不会的人: you will go to Fudan University三变长句的诀
6、窍：3 个字变成 30 个字长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾以复旦很有名为例：Fudan University is popular 如何变长句头: As is known to all, _ 身体：Fu Dan University enjoys great reputation and popularity 主句垃圾：all over the world 介词结构尾巴 so, we are proud that you become a part of it.-从句推荐使用从句:When/if-假设逻辑关系because/so因果but, 转折，which_，who_四静态-动态语言 （be 动
7、词的转化问题）Be popular/ famous: enjoy great reputation and popularity all over the world Be cheap: enjoy a low and competitive price in the market.Be important: play a crucial role in doing something: quality plays a crucial role in boosting a companys popularity and reputation in the modern market. 五：肥肉
8、部分万能句（2 句话）1. 因果关系2. 首要任务放哪里，which makes it easier for sb to do.因果关系几种表达法：(1) Success depends in large measure on ones hard work and dedication. (2) Lack of communication is likely to give rise to social conflicts. 可能: be likely to应该：be supposed to能: be able to (3) The low price, good quality, super
9、ior service are a significant cause of the popularity of domestic cars. (4) Lack of environmental conservation awareness is supposed to contribute to global warming. 本文肥肉部分，万能句造句-建议对方好好学习，天天向上因果： 努力造就成功建议：你的首要任务放在学习，which makes it easier for you to do. It is believed that ones success depends in lar
10、ge measure on his hard work and dedication. So I do suggest that your top priority should be given to learn useful and helpful knowledge in college, which makes it easier for you to become an excellent candidate after graduation. 2010 年 中美文化交流项目感谢信第一步：定位- 感谢信第二步：归纳要求-1.感谢 2. 邀请第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-感
11、谢2.打拳-夸项目，为彼此骄傲/ 或回顾很开心3.肥肉（2 个万能句）-沟通促成交流4.结束语-邀请来中国玩My dear friends, I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception, when I joined the Sino-American cultural exchange program./which makes the journey in US impressive and pleasant. (善于利用前提). As is known to all, this program enjoy
12、s great popularity and reputation all over the world, so I am proud we can become a part of it. 肥肉万能句：沟通促成交流 It is believed by many people that communication between China and America is a significant cause of cultural development. So I strongly feel that when I return home, the top priority should
13、be given to bring the best part of your culture to our land, which makes it easier for Chinese people to understand the western world. I hold an expectation that you will pay a visit to China soon. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours Sincerely,Zhangwei求职信：复旦 MBA 院校刚刚毕业，求 BIZ manager 工作- 无经验类型第
14、一步：定位- 求职信第二步：归纳要求-1.求工作 2. 原因 3. 面试机会第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-求工作2.打拳-过度句3.肥肉（2 个万能句）-录用原因4.结束语-给面试Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to apply for a position of the business manager in your company. I am pretty sure when it comes to management work, I am your best candidate.As you can see from my resume, dur
15、ing the past 3 years, my top priority has been given to learn the essential management theories from western countries , which makes it easier for me to cope with major challenges in work as a team leader. So I have confidence that such overall and systematic learning is likely to contribute to my good performance in management position.结束语：I hold an expectation that you will offer me an opportunity for interview. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Zhangwei 模仿照写求职信（有经验）：工作多年的 biz manager模仿推荐信：把 Tom 推荐到销售岗位
