1、备考09写作专题1 三段式作文法重点诠释：所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言，如何把握较大的写作空间，三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为：1 第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间，地点，人物和主要事件及时点出。2 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。3 最后一段，得出结论或理由。注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁“和“粘合剂 “。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等 ，使文章 理清 ，文 。常用的过渡词 ： also, (and)besides, whats more, moreo
2、ver, furthermore, in addition, even, whats worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only.but also等 解释 ：that is (to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等 ：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the otherhand 等 ：firstly.se
3、condly.finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take. for example等 ：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so. that, so that等 ：though, although, in spite of, desp
4、ite 等 ：first.next.and then.finally, first.then.after that.finally等 ：and, both.and, or, either.or, as well as, 等时间 ：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly.when, no sooner.than 等结 ：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等见解 ：in my opinion, personally sp
5、eaking, as far as I am concerned，Im sure等件 ：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等写作 ：是 ， 的大Steve来，currency1和currency1的一“学学文，fi fl 学文的词 。据表提 的，fi currency1写一。” 20000 ”2 考词：fl recommend; 词 The English-Chinese Dictionary (ECE); Xinhua Dictionary (XD)Dear Steve,-Yours Li Yue 分：篇书面表达实物
6、明文，篇章结构可按三段式 写作。文的第一段，可用 的“Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese“.文可作为第二段，主要是词 的一 。结 可作为第三段。 将词 的 点表达， 大Steve作出合理选择。表达时，文章的 时 可考 用一 时。文：Dear Steve,Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.Id like to recommend the following two dictio
7、naries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word. Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, andit has a vocabulary fo 10,000 word
8、s. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECD is more expensive. It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue ：”用三段式表达，注意用过渡词1 ，地 面 ，fi据一提 写一篇100词 的 文。1 人 为 是 不 的2 实 是 常的3 人 Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany
9、 people believe that the worlds supply of fresh water will never be used up. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water. Furthermore,
10、with the rapid growth of the world population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing theganger of running out of fresh water. Actually, in some big cities, fresh water can not meet the daily needs.Therefore, to find new ways to sa
11、ve water is an urgent task. First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water. Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water, and try to find substitute to reduce the use of fresh water.2 几年，“考生不复读“ 个话题一 为社会各界所关注。表是 班“学讨论的结 ，fi 文报社写一，客观 讲座情况， 简要阐 自己的观点。要求： 1.的开头已为 写好，不计入
12、 词数。2.词数： 120 .Dear Editor:Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examination.Yours truly,Li HuaDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether studentsretake classes after failing t
13、he college entrance examination.Opinions are various on the question. Many students are against the idea of retaking classes. They think it unfair for the students who take the exam for the first time. Besides, it also adds the family burden. So many of them suffer mental pressure as well as economi
14、c problems. Others think that it can be done because through one more year of hard study, they can make better preparations and may get a chance to enter their ideal universities. After all, the kind of university they enter, an important turning point in life, will directly affect their future empl
15、oyment.However, I think, this depends on different situations. If one student has no chance to be admitted to one university, maybe he can choose to retake classes.Yours truly,Li Hua3最近几年来多的大学生入打工的队伍，fi 结合表，就 一 象写一篇 文。 象2暑 ， 一数 将增至723大学生常做的零活 ：家教、服务员、售货员等 5想经济 独立，买一自己想买的东西(由考生自己拟定) 78 2 考词： 调查survey
16、; 家庭教师tutor; 学费tuition; 经济地economically;视野outlookAccording to a recent survey,_According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of college students have a part-time jobDuring summer vacation, this figure will increase to 72 percent. College students are working as tutors, waiters or salesmen. Why do t
17、hey want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help coverthe increasingly higher college tuition. Second, they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want. Third, In my opinion, by doing part-time jobs, college students can gain some society experience and broaden their
18、outlook. Whats more, part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world. So its of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs.4最近，网 展开一场关“教科书是否要循环使用“的辩论。 如 是Li Hua，fi 向报社写谈谈 自己的一想法。要点如：”1.据我国的教科书寿命一 是半年，而美国则是五年。 明浪费严重 ”2.我国 亿千万学生，每年要用三十亿教科书
19、， 就需要消耗一千一百万棵树木。如 将教科书的寿命延长一年的话，那么将节省好多树木 ”3.许多贫困家庭的学生买不起教科书，如 将不用的教科书赠currency1 岂不是更好？”4. 的看法”至少点。要求：”1.句通 ，结构合理 ”2.开头和结尾已出，不记入 词数” 数：150 ”3. 考词：lifespan 寿命Dear Editor,Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet. _Best wishes,Yours truly,Li HuaOne possible versi
20、on:Dear Editor,Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet. I am writing to talk about it.As we all know, the average lifespan of a copy of a textbook is only half a year in our country while in America it is five years or so, which shows we waste too much. There
21、 are 220 million students consuming 3 billion textbooks each year, so about 11 million trees are needed to produce them! If the lifespanof textbooks could be extended for one more year, a large number of trees could be saved each year. In addition, many children from poor families cant afford textbo
22、oks. Will it be good if we can afford them to reuse the books?So I suggest that all of us should encourage students to take care of their textbooks, and not only does it do good to us but also to nature. At the same time, this can also help us develop awareness of thriftiness.52008 海高考 卷写作题：班将组队 学校组
23、织的集体舞比赛”group dancing competition,班长 大家 。谈谈 的看法。的文章 ：l. 是否会 比赛 2. 做出决定的 体理由。Version 1:A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to ou
24、r monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of re
25、laxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong
26、 enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.Version 2:Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancingcompetition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after somecareful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reason
27、s for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. Whats more, without any experience of dancing, I dont think I can be
28、 a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, its better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates. For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competitionthan to dance myself. 写作 法来，考生
29、可 据高考 论文写作的一 将整个文章分为三段来写。第一段是 言段， 出点：topic和thesis。Topic就是文章的话题， 篇文章就是集体舞比赛 个事情。而thesis就是 文的 ，文就是自己是否 比赛。注意 写作需要开门见山地 出主题。 考生 文结尾的时 表明自己 或不 的 就是不的， 开头就表明自己是否 个比赛， 后 论 理由。 如 文，A group dancing competition will beheld in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.或者Today
30、the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. 是用来出topic的句 。而 出thesis的句 则是While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.或者But af
31、ter some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.第二段是论 段， 是 文的重 所，主要是讲 自己的理由，为 么 或者不 个比赛。一 来，一篇120 150words的文章来， 要写个理由就 ，每个理由 后 一个 一 的细节阐 ， 整体的 数就不多达。 如，论 自己 比赛的 时， 文写点：1.可松自己 2.可 展 自己的舞 为班currency1做“。每个观点 自己的句， 如“松自己“的句就是用一个fi来 出relaxation的重要fl。而“展 自己的 “，句是自己学舞学五年 舞好。第一个分论点的论 式是提出 的观点， 论 ，是 法的fl理。第二个分论点的论 式是 理由， 观点，是法的fl理。最后一段是 结段，题 结段的时 可 写的”简一点， 如 篇 文，最后的结尾简， 结 文的 可。所用的句 可 东 高考写作教 。
