1、,雅思小作文 - 结构,时态确定原则,当句子主语是图表，即chart / graph / curve / pie / column / bar / table时，一般现在时 当句子主语是图表中的信息时，时态由信息所对应的时间来确定 如果没有具体时间，默认为一般现在时,结构,总起段,时态：一般现在时 无需自己的想法 改写原题 增加、减少或替换单词 连续的5个字不能按顺序的重复出现,改写练习,Britain the UK America the US(A), the states during the period between 1981 and 2000 from 1981 to 2000 d
2、uring the last 19 years/two decades of the 20th century at the turn of the 21st century,The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.,The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Austr
3、alia in 1999. 改后：The chart describes the percentage of diverse types of poor families in Australia in 1999.,The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in America and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.,The chart below shows the different levels of pos
4、t-school qualifications in America and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. 改后：The bar chart illustrates the diverse levels of post-school certificates in the US and the percentage of males and females holding them in 1999.,亮点句型,According to/As (is) shown in/As can be seen from the
5、 table, chart, diagram, graph, figures It can be seen/observed from/ we can see from It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures (that).,主体段,时态：一般过去时 如果图表是对将来的预测，用一般现在时 结构：主题句+ 分项描述具体趋势 段落 一张图一般写一段 多张图之间如有联系，可写一段；如没联系，几张图写几段 流程图一般写一段,主题句常用句型,According to the 图的类型 As shown in the
6、图的类型 As can be seen from the 图的类型 It is clear/apparent/manifest/obvious from the 图的类型 that ,主题句常用句型,The overall / general trend indicates There was an overall + 趋势 It is clear that/ It can be (clearly) seen that From图的类型, it can be (safely) concluded that One of the most surprising/interesting featu
7、res/trends was,As we can see from the line graph, the Dubai gold sales fluctuated in 2002.,Number of full-time teachers of regular schools(in millions) in China (1960-1990).,It can be seen that there was an increasing trend from 1960 to 1990. However, there were some fluctuations in earlier years. A
8、ccording to the figure, although there were some fluctuations in earlier years, there exists indeed an increasing trend. The overall trend was to indicate the increasingly growing number, although there exists some fluctuations in the earlier years.,具体趋势描写,Describe 时间顺序 突出重点 非重点处理 Compare 比较相同特征 Con
9、trast 对比不同特征,主体段第二句的“具体来说”(可选) To be more exact=more exactly To be more precise=more precisely To be more specific=more specifically,More specifically , in January, gold sales were/stood at about 200 million dirhams per month. In February they increased slightly to Dhs 220 million, rising sharply to
10、 a peak of 350 million dirhams in March.,The next four months saw a steady decline, reaching a low point of 120 million dirhams in July. In August, there was a sudden increase. Sales almost doubled, rising from Dhs 120 million in July to Dhs 210 million in August.,This was followed by a drop in Sept
11、ember to Dhs 120 million before recovering to Dhs 180 million. In October and November, sales remained steady, and there was a small increase in December to 190 million dirhams.,According to the figure, there was a sharp decrease in the number of teachers from five millions in 1960 to three millions
12、 in 1962, which was followed by a rapid increase over the next two years.,The number rose again from just under six million in 1964 to six million in 1966 and then went up gradually until 1976 when there was a leveling off at eight millions for the next ten years.,The years from 1986 to 1990 saw a s
13、teady rise in the number of teachers.,总结段,重述总体特征 再次改写 “三不政策” 不要主观描述 不要分析原因 不要寻找本质,总结段常用短语,in short, in brief, in conclusion, in sum, in summary, in closing, to conclude, to sum up, finally, overall, all in all 参见主题句常用句型,In conclusion, it can be clearly seen from the chart that the main sales period
14、was in the early part of the year, plummeting in the summer, except for a sudden increase in August.,In conclusion, more teachers were in Chinese regular schools in the 1990 than 30 years before.,隐藏信息,双刃剑 量力而为,What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages exceed 100%, it can be conc
15、luded that some adults choose several reasons for studying.,What is worth mentioning is that the GDP of a country is contradictory with the statistics of population and growth rate of population.,The table illustrates the information of the countries of Madagascar and Mauritius around the Indian Ocean in 1999.,What is worth mentioning is that the numbers of passengers per year is not proportionate with the kilometers of route.,
