1、中考书面表达突破,新乡市一中,一、题型特点： 书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。 中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。 作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大： 06年 Non-smoking Day; 07年 “校园节约从我做起”; 到09年的“A Person I will never forget”， 10年_ is fun,二、考查形式（体裁）： 中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。 体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；,三、中考评分标准：
2、作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。,影响作文分数的因素： 1 题目要求、内容要点； 2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰； 4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 卷面整洁度；,2010年河南中考评分标准：,四、做题步骤： 1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点； 4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 *总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称； 三思：词汇短语句式； 三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,五、作文一般框架：文
3、章分3段： （1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题； （2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话； （3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。,满分作文标准：,第一档：（1513分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全，立意高。 句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。 卷面书写干净， 整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。 最好能有一两个亮点句。 （主从，定从，表从，谚语）,六、如何列提纲： 例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the
4、development of internet more and more popular Para2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-free Para3: （弊）However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelings Para4: （个人
5、）As a student, make good use of it.,七、如何列提纲： 例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排 Para1: （综述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.
6、Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.),八、常见的作文类型模板：,1 书信,Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - - -Best wishes!Yours, Lucy,a书信开头常用语,I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is
7、 everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)?Im writing to you for some advice on how toIm writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met.Thank you for inviting me to .,b 书信结尾常用语,Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forwar
8、d to hearing from you.,二、口头通知常见写作模板： 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in grou
9、ps. Please come on time and dont be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank you.,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：,2 图表、数字比例型,（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点）Most
10、students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to,3 说明利弊型,Nowadays is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages . First, 优点1 Besides, 优点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On
11、 the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2In my opinion,个人观点 ,4 不同观点型,We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas.Some believe 正方观点. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2As for me,个人观点 ,5
12、 解决问题型,Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.,九、常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end then/next/after that when/
13、while/as soon as/not until at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately in a word/in all,议论文常用连接词 表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for; bec
14、ause of; thanks to; (for the reason that); 表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;,议论文常用连接词 表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for ins
15、tance; such as; like; that is to say 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;
16、 be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;,议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; t
17、o be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;,议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make u
18、p ones mind to do; in a way;,十、作文万能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +时间+to do Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to v Its nice/kind of sb. to v Its time for sb. t
19、o do sth. Its a waste of time to Its years/days since sb. +ved Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing Its a pity that Its an honor to,十、作文万能句式 Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistakes There be doing Great changes have taken place in sth is/are well worth v-ing. It seems/seemed that
20、It seems (im)possible to v It is said that As the saying goes, and . are different in many ways. too + adj./adv. to do There are many differences between and ,十、作文万能句式 I have made up my mind to I am sure that I am not sure whether/if I would rather . than It doesnt matter if Thank you for v-ing. If
21、everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.,十一、作文万能短语 have/look for a chance to do do outdoor activities be/get used to (doing) sth. learnfrom be proud of/ take pride in play an important/active part/role in agree with sb. to do sth. with the h
22、elp of sb.=with ones help (反义：without ones help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth. pay attention to take good care of make friends with get on/along well with ,十一、作文万能短语 wish you successful/success as time goes by graduate from looking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态） pass the (f
23、inal) exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up ones mind to do sth. (on sth.) make a decision to do work hard at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on,十一、作文万能短语 in the future（将来）/ in future（从今以后） increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter
24、 of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth. have (no) time to do have experience in (doing) sth. follow ones advice/suggestions master some basic skills be required to do ask sb. for help cant wait to do,十一、作文万能短语 be supposed to do encourage sb. to
25、 do deal/do with work out/solve the problems all sorts/kinds of at home and abroad one of be full of learn sth. by oneself come up with good ideas be surprised at sth.(to do sth.) in order to keep healthy/fit a good way to v,十一、作文万能短语 keep (on) trying worry about/ be worried about in ones spare/free
26、 time be kind/friendly to be strict with help others say thank you to have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C/U worry about/be worried about ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help be popular with share sth. with sb. know little/much about ,十一、作文万能短语 do/try ones best to
27、 v be/feel sorry for help sb. (to) do sth./ with sth. in/during class before/after class teach sb. to do sth.,* 词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于 100词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真 实信息。,四、Language errors in writing 纠错,. be多余或缺少,Im enjoy studying English.It bad for our health.,I enjoy studying English.,It is bad
28、for our health.,2. 时态错误,At that time, they always help me with my English.I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.,At that time, they always helped me with my English.,I have enjoyed studying English since I met him.,My favorite sport is run.I think do some sports is very important for us.,M
29、y favorite sport is running.,I think doing some sports is very important for us.,3. 非谓语动词错误,I like do sports.I wish take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I like doing sports.,4. 副词位置错误,I very thank her.I very like football.,I thank he
30、r very much.,I like football very much.,5. 代词错误,They are good for us body.I hope me also become a basketball player.,They are good for our body.,I hope I also become a basketball player.,6. 缺介词或介词错误,I thank him very much help me study English.He even came to my home for help me.,I thank him very muc
31、h for helping me study English.,He even came to my home to help me.,I like it because its exciting and good for my healthy. I have ever gived up English.,(单词错误),(动词P.P.错误),I like it because its exciting and good for my health.,I have ever given up English.,7. 其他错误,Its good for my health. Not only ma
32、ke me brave, but also make me become taller.If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.,Its good for my health. It not only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller.,If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day.,（
33、缺主语）,（句型错误）,Lets practise.,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,1. I climed slowly and was very tried.,2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.,Spelling（拼写）
34、,（others),Friday,4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.,I cant forget that day because,5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever.,!,Capital letter（大小写）,Punctuation（标点符号）,6. I will remembered that day forever.,remember,7. I thought
35、it is hungry.,was,8. My grandmother always tidy up my room.,tidies,9. How unforgettable this things is!,thing,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Tense（时态）,Verb agreement (主谓一致),Word form (词形）,10. In my fathers help, I became more patient than before.,With my fathers h
36、elp,11. To cut a long story to short, .,To cut a long story short,12. I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother.,by bus,13. My mother told me dont give it up.,told me not to give it up,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Phrases(短语和固定搭配）,14. I saw an old lady lay in the
37、 middle of the road.,saw an old lady lying,16. We played snow in front of house.,played with,15. I sat on a seat , listening music.,listening to,17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid.,were all,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Missing wo
38、rds（漏词）,18. We should do things by our own hands.,with,the house,19. It is tired work.,tiring,Words order（词序）,Using wrong word（选词错误）,22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.,carefully,21. One Sunday morning, I went to Shihua by bus and sat beside me was a girl.,I went to Shihua on a bus
39、and there was a girl sitting beside me.,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Chinese English（中式英语）,In my life, many things happened.,20. In my life have many things happened.,During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small gi
40、rl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy
41、, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.,The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.,Check and correct this article.,a lot of things happened.,helping,I,were shopping,crying,happened to,couldnt,find,help,he
42、r,find,.,They,could also, so,1. 是否有大小写错误(capital letters or lowercase letters)是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes)是否有标点错误 (punctuation mistakes) 4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes)主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,Common Errors in English writing,五、整洁性,1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。 3 字数太多，显得太罗嗦
43、，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。,4 规范三写：大 小 写,拼 写,书 写,以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下： 1 孙老师，25岁，1.65米, 打扮入时。 2 关心热爱学生 。 3 教学方法生动有趣。 4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；,六、实战训练,Pre-writing 1.审：,2.定：,“My English Teacher” 为题写一篇100字作文,记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时 篇章结构：三段式 首段：个人简历 正文：教学特色 尾段：作者的评价,be fashionable,love stud
44、ents, and care about the students,be lively and interesting,get on well with,be popular with,Writing: 3.列 打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎,My English TeacherMiss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about
45、us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !,Writing 4.连：连词成句，连句成篇,复写Rewriting： 5、美润色丰富要点；,6、改查错改错,7、抄修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。,Writing My English TeacherMiss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65
46、 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !,homework,请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下： 1 谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业
47、后， 2 在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃， 3 对学生要求严格， 4 深爱学生。 5 谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。 6 你的感受及愿望。 参考词语：1. graduate from a university, 大学毕业 2. be strict with,对严格3. the Wenchuan earthquake, 汶川地震 4. collapse,坍塌5. deeds,事迹,三段式： 首段： 正文： 结尾：,谭老师的个人简介,谭老师的英雄事迹,作者的感受和愿望,列出7个内容要点：1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3） 深爱
48、学生； 4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。,He looks serious.,Hes strict with his students.,He loves his students deeply.,He was giving lessons at that moment.,When the teaching building callapsed, he protected four students with his body.,I feel deeply moved.,Ill learn from him.,连句成文：Tan Qianqiu
49、 was born in 1957 in Hunan province. He graduated from Hunan University. He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there for 27 years. He looked serious. He was very strict with his students. He loved them deeply.When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. The school building collapsed. he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved. Mr Tan lost his life.I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero. I will learn from him.,
