1、作文提高六点1. 不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头（受汉语表达习惯的影响，不少人都喜欢以 I, People, We 等开头）1. Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.It is widely (commonly) thought (believed/ held/ accepted) that birth control is quite necessary in China.2. 不要千篇一律地使用主动语态（英语中被动结构的使用频率远远高于汉语）1. We are making great efforts
2、 to improve our English.Great efforts are being made to improve our English.2. We know very little about the nature of human beings.Little is known about the nature of human beings.3. 不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用名词结构来表达意思1. It is time for us to revise our educational system and then provide it to the society.It i
3、s time for us to provide our society with a revised educational system.2. If we dont recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.Failure to recognize the seriousness of the growing population will lead us a big mistake.4. 不要总是用肯定句来表达肯定的意思，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。1. Whenev
4、er you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisements.It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without finding advertisements.2. Food is the basic issue to individual and national survival.No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food.5. 不要总是用 if(如果)，because(因为) ，when( 当)
5、 等过于口语化的句子，要注意多使用书面语言。1. If we only apply knowledge in the books, we will not get good results.The application of knowledge in the books alone wont bring you good results.2. When our teacher had left, the heated discussion then ended.The departure of our teacher brought the heated discussion to an e
6、nd.3. Because the decision recognizes the rights of students, so they all welcome it.Students all welcome the decision which recognizes their rights.6. 恰当地使用排比句、平行句1. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms.
7、They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to equal opportunities for promotion.
