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1、COMPOSITION写作指南要求考生就“垃圾分类的重要性”这一题目发表自己的看法,这篇文章可以写成议论文。根据题目要求,文章结构如下:第一部分,描述社会现象:垃圾未分类的现象时常发生。第二部分,阐述垃圾分类的重要性,如减少环境污染、某些垃圾可进行循环利用等等。第三部分,总结全文,号召大家行动起来。范文与解析The Importance Of Waste SortingPeople produce waste everyday they live, which worsens the increasingly environmental pollution around the world.

2、Among those waste, some can be degraded, while others cannot. Therefore, waste sorting, which can help a lot to save our planet, is very important for us.Waste sorting is a must. Firstly, it helps to do less harm to our earth. Nowadays, the most commonly used method to treat waste is burying. Howeve

3、r, some waste such as discarded batteries and chemical waste, if buried, will pose a great treat to the environment and public health. To sort them out and treat them in an appropriate way can reduce the pollution to the lowest level. Secondly, some waste is recyclable. For example, we can manufactu

4、re useful products by recycling the old glass, metal, plastic and paper, etc. Without sorting out, the valuable waste will be thrown away, which leads to a big waste of useful resources.In conclusion, waste is very important and helpful. In daily life, everyone should nature the habit of sorting out

5、 the household garbage, so that the garbage can be recycled and treated more easily.1 开门见山,用动词 worsen 形象地描述了事情的严重性。2 degrade 意为 “降解” 。3 用 FirstlySecondly分点论述,可以使得文章结构更为清晰。也可以采用其他句式,如 On the one hand On the other hand; For one thing For another 等等4 discarded batteries 指“废旧电池” ;pose a treat to 指“对造成威胁

6、” ; reprogress 指 “重新加工 ”。5 总结全文,呼应第一段提出的论点。6 nature the habit 指“养成习惯” 。NOTE-WRITINGWrite on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Alice is your close friends and her house was ruined by an earthquake. She is very depressed now. Write a note to console her.范文Ap

7、ril 25thDear Alice,Im sorry to learn that your house was destroyed by an earthquake. You must be .feeling depressed. Please look on the bright side, and there is always hope. And dont be too worried about the life in the future, for both your friends including me and the local government will help y

8、ou.Yours Faithfully,Lili一、介词误用(1) e.g. There are several reasons for why waste sorting is so important.改完句子如下:Correct 1: There are several reasons why waste sorting is so important.Correct 2: There are several reasons for the importance of waste sorting.解析:因为 reason for +名词/动名词或者 reason + why 引导的定语从

9、句e.g. Sickness is a legitimate reason for asking for leave.生病是请假的正当理由。e.g. He demands your reason for your unusual conduct.他要求你说出这样反常的理由。二、词性误用(1)名词与形容词误用e.g. Its help for our countrys develop.改完句子如下:Correct 1: Its helpful for our countrys developing/development.解析:be helpful for 意为“有助于” ,for 为介词后面加

10、名词或动名词,所以应该用 development 或 developing。(2) 动词词组误用e.g. As it is important to protect the environment, we can begin from waste sorting.改完句子如下:Correct 1: As it is important to protect the environment, we can begin it with waste sorting.解析:begin 意为“开始,首先” ,常用 to begin with 作副词放句首,begin with 意为“以开始” 。From

11、 the beginning 意为“从头开始” 。At the beginning of 意为“在之初 ”e.g. To begin with, she is too young to do the job.e.g. You should begin every sentence with a capital.你应该在每一句话开头用大写字母。e.g. After the fire, we have to build the business again from the beginning.火灾之后,我们不得不从头开始重建。e.g. At the beginning of the term,

12、I found it difficult to study English.开学之初,我觉得学英语很困难。(3) 动词与名词词性误用Produce 为动词,意为“生产,制造 ”Product 为名词,意为“产品,结果” 例如:我的自行车是国产的。e.g. My bike is produced in China.e.g. My bike is a home product.Live 为动词,意为“居住,生活 ”Life 为名词,意为“生活,生命”例如:我更喜欢乡村生活而不喜欢城市生活。e.g. I prefer living in the country to living in the ci

13、ty.e.g. I prefer country life to city life.Waste 作动词时,意为 “浪费,损耗,破坏,干掉” 。作名词时,意为“浪费;废料,废品;荒地” 。e.g. You are wasting our time. 这真是浪费时间。e.g. This is a waste of time. 这真是浪费时间。e.g. Waste sorting is important to protect our environment.废品处理对于保护环境来说有重要意义。三、连词误用(1)not onlybut alsoe.g. Waste sorting is not o

14、nly environmental but also can save resource.改完后句子如下:e.g. Waste sorting not only can protect our environment but also can save resource.解析:not onlybut (also)前后接同样词性的单词、词组、句式,意为“不但而且”e.g. He not only studies hard but (also) works well.他不仅学习用功而且工作认真。e.g. He was not only a distinguished writer but a fe

15、rtilizer of other talents.他不仅是杰出的作家,而且还有使人获益的其他才干。e.g. Not only did he make a promise, but also he kept it.他不仅做出了承诺,而且履行的诺言。e.g. He made away not only with his own money but also with much of his wifes.他不仅挥霍自己的钱,还用掉他妻子的许多钱。(2)due to 与 becauseDue to +名词/动名词,because 后面接完整的句子,意为“因为,由于”例如:由于天气很冷,所以我们无法去

16、植树。e.g. Due to the extreme cold, we were unable to plant the trees.e.g. Because it is very cold, we were unable to plant the trees.例如:由于对大气层的污染而造成了气候变化。e.g. Changes in the climate are due to pollution of the atmosphere.e.g. Because the atmosphere is polluted, climate has changed a lot.(3)only+介词短语/从

17、句在 句首时,后面主句中的谓语动词、助动词或情态动词与主语部分倒装。e.g. Only in this way can we make big progress.只有用这种方法,我们才能取得大的进步。e.g. Only by overcoming our weakness can we be invincible.克服缺点我们才能无往不胜。e.g. Only if the red light turns on, is there any danger to employees.只有红色信号灯亮的时候才意味着员工们有危险。四、选词不当(1) e.g. Our living level is be

18、coming better and better.解析:因为主语是 living level 即生活水平,所以应该是越来越高,而生活条件越来越好。改完句子如下:Correct 1: Our living level is becoming higher and higher.Correct 2: Our living condition is becoming better and better.(2) e.g. Recycling will decrease our outcomes.解析:outcome 意为“结果,成果,出路” ,这里应该是想说再回收利用可以减少支出,可以用 expense, expenditure 等等。e.g. In his plans he discounted the expense.改完句子如下:Correct 1: Recycling will decrease our expense.五、注意事项(1)题目每个单词的首字母大写即可,不必将所有字母大写。(2)标点不清,逗号与句号要点清楚。(3)字迹混乱,字迹不易改正,但要保证每个字母能辨别清楚,慎用连笔字。字母与字母间隔半个字母的空,单词与单词间宜空三个字母的空,行与行之间空隙拉开,这样能是文章看起来有序工整。(4)不能用涂改液。错的部分用修改文章的各种修改符修稿。

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