1、 15-Sentences Solution to IELTS Writing第 1 句：背景介绍 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education. 现在，越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。 Explanation: Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that Nowadays, an increasing number of peop
2、le are concerned about thepurposes that university education serves. Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。 I agree with the view thatR
3、easons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是原因如下。 第 2 句：交代辩论话题 A. “ 是否应该” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是，大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。 B. “是这样还是应该那样 ” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills or pure
4、knowledge to graduates has caused a heated debate. 但是，大学是应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能还是纯粹的知识造成了激烈的争议。Explanation: However, what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是，大学的应该主要提供给学生哪一种知识技能是一个饱受争议的话题。 C. 一些人认为;另一些人认为 Some people state that; others
5、believe that Some people state that universities should focus on giving access to knowledge; others believe that the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates. 一些人认为大学应关注提供知识；另一些人认为工作所需的技能对大学毕业生更重要。 第 3 句：交代你自己的写作观点 In my view, , My view is that(表语从句) I
6、 agree with the view that (同位语从句 ), for the following reasons. My view is that job-related knowledge and skills should be the main focus of universities. I mainly agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons.第二段 第 1 句：本段中心句 这一段的写作目的是以理服人。用 it is clear that这个主语从句写出你认为最重要、最明显的论据。 Firstl
7、y, it is obvious that for most students, the purpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become qualified employees in the jobmarket in the future. 首先，很显然对大部分学生来说上大学的目的是学习实用的知识技能，这些技能能让他们在将来的职场中成为合格的雇员。 Explanation: Firstly, it is c
8、lear/obvious/true that Firstly, there is no doubt that One reason for this isthat 第 2 句：对中心句进行拓展、解释、说明。 A. This is because这是因为（想上一句话的原因） This is because most of them, after graduation, will enter the workplace, earn a living, and supporttheir own families. 这是因为大部分学生毕业之后会进入职场，挣钱谋生，建立家庭。 B. This means
9、 that这意味着（想上一句话的结果）This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the most welcomed subjects which the majority of students will select. 这意味着那些专注于使用知识的课程会成为大多数学生选择的热门专业。 C. If not (反正中心句) If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills, most graduates will not be able to find sa
10、tisfactory positions in the workplace, leading to a higher unemployment rate. 如果大学不重视这种技能的培养，大部分学生将会很难再职场上找到工作，导致社会失业率增高。 Explanation: 可用下面的短语拓展解释中心句： In other words, 换句话说 More specifically, 具体来说 More precisely, 准确点说 第 3 句 重申写作观点。其实是对第一段最后一句话，也就是你的写作观点进行改写表达。 So universities, as service providers, h
11、ave to give top priority to these customers real needs. Explanation:推荐一个固定句型来写本句，让写作更简化：Therefore, it is necessary/crucial/important for sb. to do sth. Therefore, it is crucial for universities to give top priority to the students real needs. 第三段第 1 句 首句仍是该段中心句，是你绞尽脑汁想出的第二个原因论据。Moreover, focusing on
12、 the job-related skills can benefit the university itself. 另外，关注工作相关的技能能使大学本身受益。 Explanation: 可选用 Moreover, In addition, Besides 等词开始。 第 2 句 该段第 2 句就是举例。 For example, the sci-fi blockbuster “Avatar” has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive interest in 3D technology. 例如，科幻大
13、片阿凡达已成为电影业的一座里程碑，并且激发了大众对 3D 技术的广泛兴趣。 Explanation: 如果感觉上面的句子单词太难，我们可以简化为：For example, 3Dtechnology has become a hot topic after the movie “Avatar” made the whole world crazy. 例子越具体，越国际化，越时尚流行，越好。 第 3 句 上一句已经举出了阿凡达和 3D 的例子，为什么我们要提这个例子呢？接下来的这句话就是要写出我们举这个例子的原因，并证明本段首句的正确性。 If a university can quickly r
14、espond, and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses about 3D, not only will its graduates be more competitive in the job market, but the university itself will keep pace with the technological development and move forward. 如果一所大学能迅速反应，整合教学资源提供 3D 相关的课程，那么不仅毕业生在职场上将更有竞争力，大学本身也能跟上技术发展并向前迈进。 Ex
15、planation: 这里没有固定句式要用，可随意发挥，要写出例子和中心句之间的联系。 当然还可以再举一例：Another example is sth. 然后解释说明。 如在考场上实在想不出好的例子或并列例子，该段从第 2 句开始参考第二段的写作框架，再讲一次道理。第四段 第 1 句 写让步段落的两大好处：大多数考生绞尽脑汁也想不出第三个原因论据。我们何不换一个角度，想一想支持反方的一个原因或例子呢，那会容易得多。兼顾了反方观点，不会出现评分标准中因为 partly address the task 而丢分的情况。 A. That is not to say that.not . 这并不是说
16、（反方观点完全没有道理） That is not to say that universities should not pay any attention to developing pure science and knowledge. B. It is also true that. (反方观点中的某些方面) 也是事实。It is also true that universities should develop pure science and knowledge. C. Those whoharbour the view that. believethat. 那些持有（反方观点）的
17、人们认为 (这个句型中包含了定语从句、同位语从句和宾语从句) Those who harbourthe view that the main function of universities should be to give access to the knowledge believe that the theoretic knowledge is the foundation of any practical skill. Explanation: 在讨论优势和劣势的文章中，我们可以直接使用下列句型： This is not to say, however, that we should
18、 neglect the problems it has caused. But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted. 第 2 句 想反方观点的论据，或在特殊、极端情况下的一些合理性。进一步说明该段第一句话。 There are, of course, students interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater cont
19、ributions to our society. Explanation: 可选用 Of course 或 Indeed 开始本句。 第 3 句 让步后最终转折。表达“即便如此，反方观点在大多数情况下还是不可行的”或“即使存在上面提到的负面，正面影响仍是大于负面的” 。But unfortunately these people are few and far between. Explanation: 可选用 But, However, Yet 等词开始本句。 该段为文章次要信息，可点到为止，不可花费过多时间和笔墨纠缠。 实在不知如何反驳了，可用无赖写法：“（虽然反方观点也有道理）但正方观
20、点仍然更有道理。 ” But still, job-related skills are more important for most students. But still, the cos are far greater. 其实本句还可以不用反驳，再写反方第二论据，或针对第一论据的拓展、支持、举例。不过这样处理后在结论段要表达相对中立的观点态度。 第五段 第 1 句 结论段。重申写作观点。这句话其实是针对首段最后一句话改写。 In summary, 总之 In conclusion, 总之 In summary, the major function of universities sh
21、ould be providing most students job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment, and thus helping the society function better. Explanation: 通常，考官读完一篇作文后印象最深的会是文章中的例子和结尾段。所以该句不是简单的改写，而应是递进或强调。可用强调句型：It is sth. that. 第 2 句 照顾反方观点。表达“同时，我们不能忽视反方观点的价值，或低低估某事的负面影响” 。Explanation: 模板句式 Meanwhile
22、, we should not ignore/neglect/overlook/underestimatesth.s negative effects. 第 3 句其实末段有了上面两句话已经完整了。如果要冲刺高分，我们要再加一句话，给文章画一个有力的句号，或提升文章的思想境界，立意升华。 By doing so we can ensure that. Only by doing so can we make sure that. (only 在句首注意倒装)15 句高级作文写作分析 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write ab
23、out the following topic: Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has morebeneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
24、 Write at least 250 words. Model Essay Watching TV is one of the most important childrens leisure activities. However, discussion now centres on whether it brings more harm than good. My view is that too much time spent on it surelyhas negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inapp
25、ropriate programs and channels for them. 首段 第 1 句 背景引入 第 2 句 交代辩论话题 第 3 句 作者观点，中立 With the rapid development of science and technology, TV shows are designed so vivid and attractive that not only kids but eve adults are much easier to get addicted to them. When children spendmore time sitting in fro
26、nt of a screen, they are isolated from the real world. They do not have enough time to socialize, or to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth.Also, their eyesight will be weakened by staring at the screen for too long. 第 2 段 第 1 句 第一论据：看电视易上瘾（形式问题，对儿童身体发育不好） 第 2 句
27、展开支持。其实写的是：看电视上瘾的结果是什么。省掉了 This means that. 第 3 句 继续展开。其实是不良结果并列 第 4 句 继续并列。因为思想充分，想说的太多，代替了 so,. 重申观点这个句子 Moreover, questionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since their minds are impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV programme ra
28、ting system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes. So, TV is not always a good one in the sense that parents really cannot control what comes on the screen. 第 3 段 第 1 句 第二论据：有不良的电视内容（内容问题，对儿童心理发展不好） 第 2 句 展开支持，事实例证 第 3 句 继续展开。其实是不良结果并列Of course, there are many educational
29、 and inspirational TV shows, such as Disney cartoons whichenable kids to have fun in the learning process, facilitate their intellectual development and help them learn caring, sharing, courage, honesty and other virtues from an early age. These benefits of TV on a childs education cannot be denied. 第 4 段 第 1 句 反方观点。注意这一句话里包含了反方的观点和论据。用复杂句、举例、并列等手法列举了看电视对儿童的诸多好处 第 2 句 重申反方有道理 In sum, spending a long time watching TV is harmful and parents should either follow TV rating guidelines or carefully choose the programs for children. 末段 第一句 一句话高度总结全文。因为感到字数已够，就不在累述
