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1专题五 短文改错第一讲 词法类错误真题验证1(2017·全国Ⅰ) 导 学 号 47404073In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word， “Speed up！” “Slow down！” “Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following my birthday，I took driving eighteeneighteenthlessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the ∧the/mycar，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders， once I started sobut/yetthe car，my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The goeswentinstructor kept repeating the ， “Speed up！” “Slow down！” “ wordwords Turning Turnleft！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes ，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a latelaterrelief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.suddenlysudden on of❶ 解析：eighteen 改为 eighteenth。考查序数词。 “我的 18 岁生日” ，应用序数词eighteenth。❷ 解析：在 first day 前加 the 或 my。由序数词 first 可知，其前应加定冠词the。也可以用形容词性物主代词 my 修饰 first day。❸ 解析：so 改为 but 或 yet。考查上下文的逻辑关系。根据语境可知，前后两句之间为转折关系，故把 so 改为 but 或 yet。2❹ 解析：goes 改为 went。考查时态。本文讲述作者 18 岁生日后的那个暑假发生的事情，且通篇以过去时为主。此处应用一般过去时，故把 goes 改为 went。❺ 解析：word 改为 words。考查名词的数。根据下文可知，教练发出了很多指令，故用 word 的复数形式 words。❻ 解析：Turning 改为 Turn。考查谓语动词。此处为祈使句，并和上文中的“Speed up”和“Slow down”并列，故改为动词原形 Turn。❼ 解析：删除 so 后的 much。考查固定句型。此处含有“so.that.”引导的结果状语从句，句中的 much 多余，故删除。❽ 解析：late 改为 later。考查副词。late 意为“迟，晚” 。 “一段时间＋later”表示“一段时间之后” ，故把 late 改为 later。❾ 解析：suddenly 改为 sudden。考查形容词。该句中的名词 stop 应用形容词修饰，所以把 suddenly 改为 sudden。解析：on 改为 of。考查固定搭配。in the middle of 意为“在……的中间” ，故○10 把 on 改为 of。2(2016·全国Ⅰ) 导 学 号 47404074My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案：My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very thatwherebig，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even to wait outside.My uncle tells hadhaveme that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh honesthonestyvegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he orand using usednever dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes ∧of the a3that business will grow .ourhis steady steadily❶ 解析：that→where。考查宾语从句。此处表达的是“靠近我所居住的地方” ，故需将 that 改为 where。where 在此引导宾语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。❷ 解析：but 去掉。考查连词。从属连词 Though(虽然)不可与并列连词 but(但是)一起使用，故需去掉 but。❸ 解析：had→have。考查时态。整篇文章都是以现在时态写的，所以需将一般过去时改为一般现在时。❹ 解析：honest→honesty 。考查名词。根据语境“我叔叔告诉我他成功的关键在于诚实”可知，此处该用名词形式作表语。❺ 解析：or→and。考查并列连词。根据语境可知，此处不是表示选择关系，而是表示“新鲜的蔬菜和优质的油” ，故把 or 改为 and。❻ 解析：using→used。考查被动语态。fresh vegetables 和 high quality oil与 use 之间存在被动关系，故用被动语态。❼ 解析：becoming 前加 of。考查介词。dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意为“梦想做某事” 。❽ 解析：the→a。考查冠词。此处表示泛指，故用不定冠词 a，in a short period of time 意为“短期内” 。❾ 解析：our→his。考查代词。由语境及主语 he 可知，此处指的是叔叔的生意，故将 our 改为 his 才合乎语境。解析：steady→steadily。考查副词。修饰动词 grow 该用副词，所以应用○10 steady 的副词形式 steadily。3(2016·浙江卷)When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，we'd greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.答案：When I was a very young ，my father created a regular practice I childrenchild4remember well years .Every time he arrived home at end of the latelater ∧ theday，we'd greet at the door.He would ask who we and pretend not to herhim was wereus.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared knowingknowdinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they ，my father chatchattedwould lift my sister and me up to sit the top of the fridge.It was both inonand frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool excitedexcitingfor putting us there.❶ 解析：children 改为 child。考查名词单复数。根据 I 和 a 可知，这里应用可数名词单数形式，故改为 child。❷ 解析：late 改为 later。根据语境可知，此处表示“很多年后” ，故改为 later。❸ 解析：end 前添加 the。考查冠词。at the end of 是固定词组，表示“在……的最后” 。❹ 解析：her 改为 him。考查代词。根据上文的 he 可知，此处应改为 him。❺ 解析：was 改为 were。考查主谓一致。根据 we 可知，谓语动词应该用复数形式，故改为 were。❻ 解析：knowing 改为 know。考查动词。pretend (not) to do sth.“假装(不)做某事” ，此处是不定式，后面需要用动词原形，故改为 know。❼ 解析：去掉 had。考查动词。根据语境和下文的“would talk”可知，此处应该用 would do 结构。❽ 解析：chat 改为 chatted。考查时态。根据全文的整体时态可知，应用一般过去时，故改为 chatted。❾ 解析：in 改为 on。考查介词。on the top of 是固定词组，表示“在……上面” 。解析：excited 改为 exciting。考查形容词。根据语境和主语 It 可知，此处表示○10 “令人激动的” ，故用－ing 形式的形容词。4(2015·浙江卷)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the 5mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance， I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.文章大意：本篇短文描写了“我”之前的教室。虽然“我”在那个教室里学习时还是个孩子，但是“我”永远都忘不了它。答案：My old classroom was interesting because three of the classroom were sidesidesmade from glass.I enjoyed close to the windows and looking at the －of sit sittingview.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football －easilyfield.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom also splendid.Close to the school there was a iswasbeautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance，I could not themitenjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The ∧aposition of the classroom with its view made me like I was dreaming.feltfeelI was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will IfAlthough/Toughnever forget it.❶ 解析：本题考查名词单复数。side 改为 sides 。side 取“侧面”之意时，为可数名词，在这里指的是教室的侧面，故可数。由 three 可知，要用其复数形式 sides。故正确答案为：将 side 改为 sides。❷ 解析：本题考查动词词组辨析。from 改为 of。be made of 和 be made from 都表示“由……制成，构成” ，但 be made of 表示制成成品后，可看出原材料是什么，制作过程仅发生物理变化；而 be made from 表示成品完全失去了原材料的外形或特征，制作过程中发生化学变化，在成品中已无法辨认。此处说教室的三面墙壁是由玻璃构成的，显然可以看出原材料是玻璃，应使用 be made of。故正确答案为：将 from 改为 of。❸ 解析：本题考查固定搭配。sit 改为 sitting。enjoy doing sth.为固定搭配，6意为“享受做某事，喜欢做某事” 。故此处要使用 sit 的 v－ing 形式，即 sitting。故正确答案为：将 sit 改为 sitting。❹ 解析：本题考查副词。 easy 改为 easily。修饰动词 see 要用 easy 的副词形式easily。故正确答案为：将 easy 改为 easily。❺ 解析：本题考查时态。is 改为 was。阅读全文可知，本文描写了作者的老教室，通篇使用过去时。此处说明“从教室后方往前看到的场景也很美” ，是对过去事件的一般性描述，要用一般过去时。故正确答案为：将 is 改为 was。❻ 解析：本题考查代词。them 改为 it。介词 around 指代 a beautiful park，用第三人称单数，故正确答案为将 them 改为 it。❼ 解析：本题考查句意和否定词。把 not 去掉。前文提到的都是在教室里能看到的景色，此处继续，文意为“远处我能欣赏到雪山的景色” ，用肯定而非否定。故正确答案为：把 not 去掉。❽ 解析：本题考查固定搭配。在 in 和 hurry 之间加 a。in a hurry 意为“立即，匆忙” 。故正确答案为：在 in 和 hurry 之间加 a。❾ 解析：本题考查非谓语动词辨析。felt 改为 feel。 make sb.do .意为“使某人做某事” ，make sb.done .则为“使某人被……” ，此处表达“景色使我觉得我好像在做梦” ，无被动含义。故正确答案为：将 felt 改为 feel。解析：本题考查连词。If 改为 Although/Though。if 意为“如果，假如” ，引导○10 条件状语从句，而此处“我只是一个小孩”和“我不会忘记”之间构成让步关系，用although/though 表“尽管，虽然” 。故正确答案为：将 If 改为 Although/Though。 模拟强化1(2017·广东省茂名市二模) 导 学 号 47404075One day when I was on my way to home from school，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes lately， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run into the building and rescued little girl.文章大意：本文主要讲述作者在回家的路上看到一栋建筑物着火了，打电话报警后，消防员很快扑灭了大火。但突然一名外国妇女跑来说她女儿还在建筑物里，但消防员们听7不懂，最后，作者将这些告诉了消防员，他们救出了那个小女孩。答案：One day when I was on my way to home from school，I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes ， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to latelylatercontrol the fire.With the help of the firefighters，a lot of left the peoplespeoplebuilding safely. a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the SuddenSuddenlyfirefighters .But they understand what she said.I went to the everythingsomething can't couldn'twoman and asked her was happening.She told me that daughter was still thatwhat his herin the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately runraninto the building and rescued little girl.∧the❶ 解析：考查介词。home 意为“回家” ，是副词，其前不加介词 to。❷ 解析：考查副词。later 用于一段具体时间之后，表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后，但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后。❸ 解析：考查词语用法。people 指“人”时，是集合名词，本身就是复数形式，不需要加 s 表示复数。❹ 解析：考查副词。修饰句子要用副词，形容词 sudden 的副词是 suddenly。❺ 解析：根据句意：告诉消防员一些事情。用 something。❻ 解析：考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态。❼ 解析：考查代词。分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用 what 作主语，同时引导宾语从句。❽ 解析：考查代词。her 指代 the woman。❾ 解析：考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态。解析：考查冠词。前文已提到过她的女儿，此处 little girl 前加定冠词 the 表○10 示特指。2(2017·福建省漳州市 5 月质检) 导 学 号 47404076Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take part in several days ago，I have a lot to share to you.Firstly，I feel real delighted that I've won the first prize in the 8competition，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from which I've learned a lot.More importantly，participate in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public，thus developing my self-confidence.Additionally，I owe much thanks to my teachers and judges.Without his help，I couldn't have done such excellent job.To sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences.文章大意：作者回顾自己参加英语演讲比赛后的一些体会。答案：Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I part in taketookseveral days ago，I have a lot to share you.towithFirstly，I feel delighted that I've won the first prize in the realreallycompetition，which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains，no gains”．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from I've learned a lot.More importantly，whichwhomin this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of participateparticipatingspeaking in public，thus developing my selfconfidence.Additionally ，I owe thanks to my teachers and judges.Without help，I couldn't have done muchmany his theirsuch excellent job.∧anTo sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable .experiencesexperience❶ 解析：考查时态。根据本句中的时间状语 several days ago 可知用过去时，故take 改为 took。❷ 解析：考查介词。此处为固定搭配：share with sb.和某人分享。❸ 解析：考查副词。此处为副词修饰形容词 delighted，故用 really。❹ 解析：考查动词。此处为 make 的固定用法：make sb do sth：让某人做某事，故去掉 to。❺ 解析：考查连词。此处为定语从句，先行词为 students，是人，而且关系代词前有介词，介词后接表示人的关系代词只能用 whom。❻ 解析：考查动名词。此处为动名词短语做主语。不能用动词原形做主语，故改为9participate。❼ 解析：考查代词。此处 thanks 是复数名词，不能用 much，要用 many 才能修饰可数名词的复数。❽ 解析：考查代词。此处是指前文中提到的老师们和裁判们的帮助，是他们的，故用 their。❾ 解析：考查冠词。此处为固定搭配：do an excellent job：做得好，做得漂亮。解析：考查名词单复数。此处是指这一次的经历，应该为单数概念，故用○10 experience。3(2017·河北省衡水中学二模)In my mind，I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a person's view for his whole existence.A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately，I didn't make it home as usually because I had a car accident.While I was driving，all of a sudden， but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily，I wasn't serious hurt.That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.答案：In my mind，I could never fancy how ten of life could change a secondsecondsperson's view his whole existence.A few years ago I the foron/about experience experiencedworst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately，I didn't make it home as because I had a car accident.While I was usuallyusualdriving，all of a sudden， but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily，I wasn't hurt.That accident changed way I seriousseriously ∧ thedrive and taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion theyit which thatlife needs to be .treasuringtreasured❶ 解析：句意：在我心中，我无法想象生活的十秒能怎样改变一个人对于他整个存在的观点。second 表示“秒”是可数名词，前面有 ten 修饰，故要用复数形式。故 second改为 seconds。10❷ 解析：考查介词。表示某人关于某一事物的态度、观点，或者关于哪个方面的课题、论文、演讲等用 on 或 about。故 for 改为 on/ about。❸ 解析：考查时态。句意：几年前我经历了生命中最困难的时刻。根据时间状语 a few years ago 可知，用一般过去时，故 experience 改为 experienced。 ❹ 解析：句意：我并没有按时回到家，因为我发生了一场车祸。本题考查词组 as usual，表示“像往常一样” 。故 usually 改为 usual。❺ 解析：句意：当我开车时，我前面的车突然停下来了。本句是由 While 引导的状语从句，主句前面不用连词，故删去 the car 前面的 but。❻ 解析：考查副词。句意：我伤的并不严重。这里用副词修饰句子，故 serious 改为 seriously。❼ 解析：句意：这次事故改变了我开车的方法。这里的方法是特指，故 changed 和 way 之间加 the。❽ 解析：考查代词。句意：那次事故改变了我开车的方法，它也给我上了宝贵的一课。这里用 it 指代上文出现的名词单数 that accident，故 they 改为 it。❾ 解析：考查同位语从句。句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。名词 the conclusion 后接从句表示 the conclusion 的内容，构造了同位语从句，引导词在句中只起连接作用，无意义，不作成分，故要用 that。解析：句意：我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。根据句意可知，动词 treasure○10 要用被动语态的形式，故 treasuring 改为 treasured。4(2017·河南省洛阳市二模) 导 学 号 47404077When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent would take me to club after school.I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us.She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well.She was kind or always trained me with great patient.In my heart，she was the best coach in our city.文章大意：本文讲述了作者幼时的网球教练对于自己的帮助。爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部，放学后我会在那里打球，吃饭和做作业。那里就像我的另一个家。我的教练对我很好，她不仅教我打球而且对我很好，在我心里她是我市最好的教练。答案：When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in 11the center of our city.Every day both my would take me to club after parentparents ∧ theschool.I played tennis， ate snacks and did my homework .It was basically heretheremy second family.A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was a mother to