1、“我们一起研究高考“系列之写作 英语高考第II卷(满分35分) 第一节 短文改错（10分） 第二节 书面表达（25分） (如何找到有效的增分点？),高考英语评分原则： 1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。,高考英语评分原则： 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受
2、。 6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。,2010年新课标全国卷书面表达,假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华 ，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）, 希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委 。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2:00-5:00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话：44876655）欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右,(1),(2),(3),(4),(5),(6),2010年新课标全国卷
3、书面表达,One possible Version Dear Ms.Smith,Im Li Hua,Chair of the student Union,of Yucai Middle School,育才中学学生会主席,which is close to,your university.,Im writing to invite you to,at our English speech contest,be a judge,in our school on June 15.,to be held,我写信是要邀请你作为,要举行,2010年新课标全国卷书面表达,It will start at 2
4、:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation Please call me at 448876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishesLi Hua,deliver their,speeches,发表他们的演说,if it is convenien
5、t for you.,如果你方便的话,2011年新课标全国卷书面表达,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程， 遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助 。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 内容主要包括： 1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容； 3. 约定时间; 4. 你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678）。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 结束语已为你写好。,(1),(2),(3),(4),(5),2011年新课标全国卷书面表达,One possible Version Dear
6、 Ms.Smith,Im Li Hua,a Chinese student taking,summer courses in your university.,我是在你学校学习暑期课程的一名中国学生,Im,writing to ask for help.,我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。,I came here last month,and found my courses interesting. But I have,some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.,2011年新课标全
7、国卷书面表达,I was told the Learning Center students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:lihua1236. com;12345678.Looking forward to
8、 your reply.Yours, Li Hua,provides,help for,提供帮助,2012年新课标全国卷书面表达,假定你是李华 ，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营， 欢迎各国学生参加 。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力) 2. 参加意图（介绍中国） 3. 希望获准。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。,(1),(2),(3),(4),(4),(5),2012年新课标全国卷书面表达,One Possible Version Dear
9、 Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, I the of the summer camp that you have on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.,a middle school student from,China
10、.,来自中国的一名中学生。,announcement,通告，告示,发布,posted,read,看到,2012年新课标全国卷书面表达, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply.Regards, Li Hua,What is more,此外,be accep
11、ted as,被接受成为,近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可说，有利于考生的自由发挥。,DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？How to catch the experts eye?,Beauty be attractive, completed in a limited time!,DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？Content: everything needed
12、 included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）,DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No
13、 Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),1)Use proper linking words(使用恰当的连接词）,How to write a good composition？,第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括： 优点： 1. 话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富；3.有助于提高 学习兴趣。 建议：适当降低词汇难度
14、。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯； 3. 开头语已你写好，不计入总词数。,2012年高考英语辽宁卷书面表达,As a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However,使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words,Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages._
15、 One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students.,To begin with,In my opinion; Therefore; However; whats more,_, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us
16、understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. _, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. _, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.,whats more,However,Therefore,Avoid Ching
17、lish! 1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete. 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will cost us much money to buy one.,Language,heavy.,left,is,take,改错,I cant understand them when I meet new wor
18、ds, so I have to refer to them in the dictionary. The ability to read English passages is slowly. There is no doubt that English Study need lots of time and efforts. Only by this way, can we keep up with other students. Im LiHua, a new student of you.,调研考试中部分同学写作中的语言错误,meet with,look up,low,learning
19、,in,Li Hua,yours,My English level is common and I cant speak very well. I believe we can get alone well with each other. Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. I study English for 12 years so I think I know English very well. There are some advice in teaching English.,
20、average,it,along,spoken,written,have studied,is,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式,1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign “No littering“ nearby. (使用V-ing形式),They even threw rubbish into the lake, _ the noticeable sign “No littering“ nearby.(12 福
21、建),totally ignoring,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式,Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_in our school.(12 山东),held,2. Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest. It was held in our school. (使用过去分词),3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many t
22、hings. (使用名词性从句)4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态),_ the little girl knows so many things.,What surprises him is that,_the conference be put off.,It is suggested that,5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)6. I passed the phys
23、ics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）,_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened.,_the physics exam _your help.,It was not until,I couldnt have passed,that,but for/without,7. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well writ
24、ten. (用定语从句),_he says, I wont believe.,The girl_ is spoken highly of.,No matter what/Whatever,whose composition was well written,9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),_he come back from Beijing _he was s
25、ent abroad.,_make rapid progress.,Study hard,and youll,No sooner had,Hardly/scarcely . when.,than,assess,Please learn to Your composition when you finish it from now.,书面表达评价表项目 自评 他评 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗? 3.有没有注意标点符号? 4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段? 5有单词拼写错误吗?几个? 6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态? 7.注意主谓一致了吗? 8.有没有语态的错误?
26、9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗? 10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种? 11.简单句表达正确吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗? 14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?,Enjoy it and you will make it!,Have a happy day!,first of all ,to begin with, to start with , in the first place,一：高中英语中表层次的连接词,in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover, on the other hand,
27、finally, eventually, in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, last but not least,because of, on account of , as a result /consequence of due to, owing to, thanks to,二.英语作文中表因果的连接词,therefore, thus, hence, consequently, since, as, because,however, but, nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand,三.英语作文中表转折的连接词,Bats are longlived creatures, some _a life span of 20 years. Bats are longlived creatures, some _a life span of 20 years. Bats are longlived creatures. Some _a life span of 20 years.,of them have,of which have,having,
