1、作文指导,1.审题，明确题目要求。通过审题明确文章主题、写作内容、主要时态和主体人称等问题。其中主体人称，就是要确定以第几人称进行写作。主要时态指文章主要使用什么时态来写作。 2.阅读，抓住内容要点。阅读短文，找出文章的内容要点。(1)议论文：找出论点、论据和结论。其关键是找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。(2)记叙文：找出时间(when),地点(where),什么人(who)，做了什么事(what),结果怎么样(how)等五要素。其中,最重要的要点是某人(who)做了何事(what)。若是夹叙夹议的文章,还要加上作者的看法、观点、经验或感悟
2、。,3.概括，转述作者观点。在找出文章的内容要点后，就要用自己的话转述原文内容要点。要注意在用词或句式上做到同义替换，避免抄袭之嫌。4.过渡，引出自己观点。写了摘要后，用句过渡的话，再引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的故事。5.例证，论证自己观点。议论文在提出自己的观点后，就用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。记叙文编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事(亲身经历或虚构)。6.结论，注意前后呼应。,7.润色，使其锦上添花。一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法方面的问题，包括用词、时态等方面的错误等，确保“语言规范”；三查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致；四查是否使用一些较为高级的句型，如非谓语动词结构、
3、with 短语结构、定语从句、倒装句型、恰当的连接词、短语动词等。分段：第一段：用一两句话概括所给短文内容要点，约30词。建议控制在2535词之间。第二段：议论文过渡词引出主题句自己的观点例证，约100词。记叙文过渡词+与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事，约100词。,第三段：即总结句，套语配名言来进行点题，要前后呼应，三位一体，约30词。以上结构模式仅供参考，下列两点却是非常重要的：(1)概括一般单独成一自然段；(2)发表看法或议论时，依照试题所给内容要点本身的顺序，原则上每个要点单独写一个自然段，这不但保证写作内容覆盖所有写作点，而且层次清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。以此次的作文为例：,练习：
4、阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Teenagers secrets should be kept to themselves and no one else, their parents included, has the right to stick their nose into their private life. As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically. They are curiou
5、s and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their bodies and minds. Whats more, exposed to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin imitating adults behaviors in secret.,Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair and care more about what to wear. Some even b
6、egin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without letting their parents know. They are doing all this in secret because they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that, if found out by their parents, they will get misunderstood and even punished. In fact, in many cases, parents
7、cannot deal with such a matter well but hurt their childrens feelings badly, making children unwilling to communicate with them any more.,When this happens, it sounds reasonable and acceptable that teenagers should keep their secrets to themselves instead of sharing them with their parents, who shou
8、ld give them the freedom in dealing with secrets.【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“青少年的秘密该不该与父母分享”这一话题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容：(1)你是支持还是反对与父母分享秘密?(2)你支持或反对的理由是什么?(3)结合你的实际，谈谈你具体是怎么做的。,【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。,第一段 概述： The passage st
9、ates that teenagers, who are at a special stage of life both in body and mind, should have the freedom to keep their secrets to themselves rather than share with their parents, which can help them avoid being hurt emotionally. / According to the passage, we know many teenagers have their own secrets
10、 but their parents always want to know them , which will probably hurt childrens feelings . As a result , they wont like to share their secrets with their parents.概括部分的开头语(1)According to the passage, we know. (2)The writer states that. (3)The story/passage is about. (4)The writer/author tells us abo
11、ut. (5)The passage mainly tells us that.,第二段 个人观点：你是支持还是反对？理由？ I hold the view that teenagers secrets, if not all, should be shared by their parents.On the one hand, parents are the dearest relatives in the world, who, trying every possible means to do good to the young, should be respected and trus
12、ted. On the other hand, lack of experience, teenagers need some help and support in making decisions or solving problems. If many of the secrets are kept to children themselves, they may do unimaginable harm in the long run.,表达自己观点(1)As for me,. (2)On a personal note, . (3)As far as I am concerned,.
13、 (4)From my point of view. (5)I hold the view/belief that. (6)Personally, I believe that. (7)According to my experience, I think that.,第三段 个人经历 Speaking from my experience , I always let my parents know my secrets , like a close friend . In return, they appreciate my attitude so much that they are a
14、lways ready to offer me valuable advice , which benefits me a lot in this special time of development.(1)Take. for example. 以为例吧 (2)For example/instance,. 例如， (3)Such as比如说，诸如之类的(4)What impresses me most is that. 我印象最为深的是,第四段 结尾呼应Taking all the factors into account, we can draw a conclusion that we
15、should share our secrets with our parents. Only in this way can the relationship between parents and us become more harmonious.,总结句(1)To sum up/In short/In conclusion/ In a word/All in all, . 总之，(2)Taking all the factors into account, we can draw a conclusion that. 考虑到以上因素，我们可以得出这样的结论：(3)From the discussion above, it can be safely concluded that. (4)To be brief, we should be aware of the importance of. 总之，我们应当明白的重要性。(5)Therefore, it is necessary for us to . (6)Only /in this way /when we. can we. 只有用这种方法/当时，我们才能,
