1、大学英语四级,写作冲刺专项, 国内部 万云,四级写作基本概述,四级写作考查文体,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,TIPS,找“关键词”,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to wri
2、te an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 mi
3、nutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are a
4、llowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30
5、minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
6、 write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a s
7、hort essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay base
8、d on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
9、n essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute
10、s to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求,总结： 分值：15%（106.5分） 考试时间：30分钟 文体：议论文图画作文 字数：120-180字 题目：一
11、定要写（题干中自拟） 内容：根据提纲（三段式）,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On
12、 Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议, 现象描述段, 原因分析段, 建议措施段,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture be
13、low. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. Y
14、ou should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,图画描述,原因分析,建议措施,Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2.
15、谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,图画作文 第一段：图画描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,第一段：图画描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,(CET4-2015. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an
16、essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,图画描述,原因分析,建议措施,图画描述段,图画描述段一般写两句话。 1. 图画描述句：如图所示，我们可以看到（图画具体信息）。 2. 话题句或现象句：阐述图片信息代表的现象并顺
17、带引出话题。,图画描述句,公式：套话句+介词短语+stay+人+who+be+动作1，while+动作2.,套话句,从图画中我们可以明显地看出 It is obvious in the picture that 从图画中我们很容易看出 It can easily be seen that 正如图中生动描述出来的 As is vividly portrayed/depicted in the cartoon, ,图画描述句： It can be easily seen that in the picture stays a man, who is always hunching over a c
18、omputer, while dreaming of using computer.,思路： 找地点。 找两个动作。,话题句,这幅引人深思的图使我们想到了的积极消极的影响。 This thought-provoking picture reveals to us the positive/ negative impact of ,话题句： This thought-provoking picture reveals to us the negative impact of computer overuse.,图画描述段： It can be easily seen that in the pi
19、cture stays a man, who is always hunching over a computer, while dreaming of using computer. This thought-provoking picture reveals to us the negative impact of computer overuse. (36 words),图画描述段模版,It can be easily seen that in the picture stay/ stays + 人物, who + 动作1 (be + doing), while + 动作2 (doing
20、). This thought-provoking picture reveals to us the negative impact of （中心词）.,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,议论文 第一段：现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,第一段：现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,现象句正面话题模版,In ZZZ, XXX have/ has gained great/ wide popularity among/ in YYY. ZZZ是时间状语（现在）；XXX是文章中心词；YYY是人群或地点状语。,现象句负面话题模版,With
21、the development of (social economy), XXX has gradually become a serious problem in YYY. XXX是文章中心词；YYY是领域（地点状语）。,现象句中性话题模版,Owing to/ Due to the rapid social and economic development, the number of people who (are accustomed to XXX) has considerably/ substantially increased/ decreased. XXX是文章中心词。,Step
22、 3. 框架：选定适当模版,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议,Step 3. 框架：选定适
23、当模版,(CET4-2012. 06) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议, 现象描述段,现象句中性话题模版,Owing t
24、o the rapid social and economic development, the number of people who are accustomed to excessive packaging has considerably increased.,现象描述段,Owing to the rapid social and economic development, the number of people who are accustomed to excessive packaging has considerably increased. Specifically, i
25、t is generally accepted that packaging is necessary for products. (32 words),现象描述段中性话题模版,Owing to the rapid social and economic development, the number of people who are accustomed to （中心词）has considerably increased. Specifically, it is generally accepted that （中心词）is necessary for .,Step 3. 框架：选定适当
26、模版,第一段：图画描述现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,第一段：图画描述现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,原因分析段,原因分析段一般写六句话。 1. 主题句 2. 原因一 3. 原因1展开 4. 原因二 5. 原因2展开 6. 原因三,主题句,的原因有很多。 The reasons for this phenomenon are obvious. The cause of this phenomenon are various.,原因分析段,原因分析段一般写六句话。 1. 主题句 2. 原因一 3. 原因1展开 4. 原因二 5. 原
27、因2展开 6. 原因三, 1 从个人角度, 2 从社会角度, 3 从国家角度,原因分析段,原因分析段一般写六句话。 1. 主题句 2. 原因一 3. 原因1展开 4. 原因二 5. 原因2展开 6. 原因三, 调查法描述, 因果举例假设,原因分析段： The reasons for this phenomenon are obvious. To start with, the fact has a harmful effect on individuals. Based on a recent survey, a majority of teenagers may be intrigued b
28、y the various contents on computers. Additionally, it will ruin the development of our society. Because of this fact, people will spend much less time on face-to-face interaction with people around them. Furthermore, if this phenomenon continues, even it will be disastrous to our nation.( 75 words )
29、,原因分析段模版,The reasons for this phenomenon are obvious. To start with, the fact has a harmful effect on individuals. Based on a recent survey, a majority of 人物 . Additionally, it will ruin the development of our society. Because of this fact, （扩展句）. Furthermore, if this phenomenon continues, even it w
30、ill be disastrous to our nation.,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,危害分析段,危害分析段一般写六句话。 1. 主题句 2. 危害一 3. 危害1展开 4. 危害二 5. 危害2展开 6. 危害三,主题句,众所周知，这个问题会带来很多危害。 As everyone knows, this pr
31、oblem produces harmful effects in many aspects. As is well-known, XXX can result in various kinds of problems.XXX 是中心词,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,观点阐述段,观点阐述段一般写五句话。 1. 观点一（主
32、题句） 2. 观点1扩展句1 3. 观点1扩展句2 4. 观点二（转折句） 5. 观点2扩展句,观点一（主题句）,首先，大多数人认为。 To begin with, it is widely accepted that 2. 首先，XXX 有很多好处。 First of all, it is no doubt that XXX bring about many benefits to us.XXX 是中心词,观点二（转折句）,然而，有些人认为。 Nevertheless, some others maintain that 2. 然而，XXX 也有很多弊端。 Nevertheless, eve
33、ry coin has two sides, XXX are also harmful.XXX 是中心词,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,第一段：图画描述现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,第一段：图画描述现象描述 第二段：原因分析 第三段：建议措施,建议措施段,建议措施段一般写自己的观点和建议措施。 1. 主题句。表明我的观点。 2. 扩展句。阐述我的理由。 3. 建议句。提出建议。 4. 结尾句。总结方法，提出展望。,主题句,总而言之，我认为，XXX 。 All in all, XXX, as far as I am concerned,
34、2. 衡量两种观点之后，我支持前者。 Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. 3. 权衡利弊，我认为。 Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, as far as I am concerned, ,扩展句,拿我举例。 Take me as an example, 2. 一方面，另一方面，。 For one thing, , for another, ,建议句,考虑上述原因，我建议。 Taking above-mentioned factors into consid
35、eration, I suggest that 2. 因此，XXX做是很有必要的。 Therefore, it is necessary for XXX to XXX是主体,结尾句,只有某人才可以。 Only by doing sth. can sb. do sth. . Only in this way can sb. do sth. . Only through these ways can sb. do sth. .,结尾句,如果XXX得到解决，这将只是一个时间的问题。 Should XXX be solved, it will only be a matter of time befo
36、re it becomes a matter of past. XXX 是问题。,建议措施段： Therefore, weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I suggest that effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is urgent that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to regulate the Internet. For anoth
37、er thing, we should cultivate their awareness of computer overuse. Should this problem be solved, it will be a matter of time. ( 61 words),建议措施段模版,Therefore, weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I suggest that effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is urg
38、ent that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to regulate（中心词）. For another thing, （人物）should cultivate their awareness of （扩展部分）. Should this problem be solved, it will be a matter of time.,Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,Step 3. 框架：选定适
39、当模版,篇章规律 第一段：现象描述、图画（表）描述 第二段：原因分析、危害分析、观点阐述（利弊） 第三段：建议措施、意义阐述,意义阐述句,It is generally/ universally believed/ acknowledged that XXX play/ plays an important/ significant/ essential part/ role in YYY. XXX是文章中心词，YYY是领域（地点状语）,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写作
40、步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写你会写的， 而不是你想写的！,TIPS,不同人群的表达,中国人: Chinese people 全世界人民: people in the whole world 几乎每个人: almost everyone 年轻人: youngsters 学生: students 市民: citizens people的替换词individuals,常用的时间状语（“现在，如今”）,in the recent decade in recent decades
41、in the contemporary society in the present-day society in this day and age when it comes to our modern society,常用的地点状语,in our daily life in the economic and social fields on science and technology in universities and colleges in urban life,常用的方式状语（副词）,definitely 一定 virtually 事实上 gradually 逐渐地 obviou
42、sly 明显 apparently 显然,常用的非限定性定语从句,which deeply impressed me/ us/ people ，令人印象深刻。 which was more than we could expect. ，超出了我们的预料。 which is worthy of our attention. ，这值得我们引起重视。,句子变长的公式（扩展句的写法）,主语谓语宾语,句子变长的公式（扩展句的写法）,时间状语，主语方式状语谓语宾语 among 不同人群地点状语，非限制性定语从句.,高分句型,人们认为。 It is widely accepted that 不仅，而且。 N
43、ot merely + be/ do/ can + 主语， but as well.,逻辑词,1. 给出观点（Now/ First） 表“现在”的时间状语 to begin with generally speaking to some degree,逻辑词,2. 举例（For example/ for instance） such as be + as follows a case in point Specifically,逻辑词,3. 递进并列（and/ second） at the same time besides in addition whats more furthermore
44、 moreover,逻辑词,4. 强调（sure/ certainly/ of course） in fact indeed obviously particularly undoubtedly,逻辑词,5. 分类（on one hand, on the other hand, ） for one thing, for another, in the first place, in the second place, last but not (the) least first and foremost,逻辑词,6. 转折（but） yet nevertheless as a matter o
45、f fact on the contrary,逻辑词,7. 总结（so/ I think） therefore/ thus in conclusion all in all/ on the whole in my opinion/ as far as I am concerned,真题演练（图画作文）,(CET4-2013. 12) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay
46、 with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.,写作步
47、骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,写作步骤,Step 1. 审题：读懂题目要求 Step 2. 谋篇：布局三段结构 Step 3. 框架：选定适当模版 Step 4. 填充：完成自写内容,真题演练（图画作文）,(CET4-2013. 12) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start
48、your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order t
49、o see.,真题演练（图画作文）,(CET4-2013. 12) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.,
