1、1英语四级作文的要点:1 正文1)三段 。2)三到五个关联词,三到五个从句。第一段(三句话):第一句(主题句):改写提纲句。 第二句话:写介绍 。第三句话:写作目的。 第二段(四句话):第一句话:改写提纲二。 第二部分:写两点原因,或者两点情况。第三句话或第二段的第三部分:写一个小结。第三段(三句话):第一句话:改写提纲三。 第二句话:语言第一结构第二内容第三2、做到 7 个避免:1)低级的语法错误。 2)拼写错误。23)用词不当。(没有把握时要勤查词典)4)写大话、空话。要有具体内容,即实质性的东西。5)多次重复使用相同的词汇或句式 。6)用写好的中文作文硬译成英语。7)随意使用逗号。2、作
2、文要有闪光点,具体表现在:1)文章通顺,意思连贯,思维清晰。前一句为后一句作好铺垫。连接词使用恰到好处。2)尽量使用书面语,如:分词结构、复合句(宾、定、状、同位语、主语、表语从句等)、虚拟语气、倒装结构、被动语态、It is 句式等。3)句子结构尽可能多变,不能死板、单调。4)尽可能多地使用词组、习惯用语或表达法、俗语和谚语。5)段落之间要有机地联系起来,各段落既能自成体系,又能与其它段落相互关联,相得益彰。好的作文一般都能前后呼应,主题明确。3第一节 文章开头1开门见山法(1) 现在许多人谈论最多的问题。他们抱怨说。(One of the most popular topics many
3、people talk about now is )(2) 目前,我们面临的严重问题之一是(One of the serious problems facing us at present is )(3) 最近,问题已引起公众的广泛注意。(Recently the problem of has been brought to public attention.(4) 当被问及当今社会最大的问题是什么时, 许多人认为(When asked about the biggest problem today, many people say)(5) 现在许多人讨论的热门话题之一是(One of the
4、 hottest topics many people talk about now is ) (6) 最近,下岗工人成为人们议论的焦点。4(Recently the problem of the laid-off workers has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.)2引用不同或错误观点法(1) 人们普遍认为。他们觉得。但我认为。(It is commonly believed that. They argue that . But I doubt that)(2) 当论及时,一些人认为, 另一些人却认为(When
5、it comes to , some people believe that Others argue that )(3) 对人们的态度各不同。(Different people hold different attitudes toward )(4) 人们对的观点因人而异。有些人认为。 然而其他人却认为(Peoples views on vary from person to person. Some hold that However, others believe that )(5) 人们普遍存在一种误解,认为(There is a common misconception among
6、people that )(6) 或许,是该重新审视态度的时候了。5(Perhaps it is time to reexamine the attitude that )3. 引用被普遍接受的观点或事实法(1) 随着人们生活水平的提高,变得越来越普及了。(With the development of peoples living standard, is becoming more and more popular.)(2) 随着科学技术的发展,越来越多的人认为。(With the development of science and technology, more and more p
7、eople believe that )(3) 任何事情都有两方面, 也不例外。它既有好的一面,也有不好的一面。(Everything has two sides and is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.) (4) 虽然普遍的观点是,但最近的一项研究显示(Although the popular idea is that a recent study shows that )(5) 最近一项调查表明。所以有些人认为,另一些人却不这样认为。(A recent survey indicates that S
8、o some people take the view that Others, 6however, dont think so.)第二节 文章主体一、段落的组成1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。Harmfulness of Fake CommoditiesFake commodities do harm to individual consumers as well as our society in many ways. They can bring about great lo
9、ss in both properties and lives. A case in point is 7that if a consumer buys some fake medicines, the medicine wont cure him of his illness but probably kill him instead. Whats more, the production of fake commodities is a great danger to our society. Every one of us has the duty to fight against fa
10、ke commodities for our society and for ourselves.二、从主题句到推展句第三节图表作文一、图表写作的模式图表作文要求考生首先看懂图表展示的内容,然后准确地、条理清晰地进行描述、概括以及最后得出合乎情理的结论,通常模式为:1. 图表描述 2. 图表分析概括 3. 得出结论二、注意事项1. 图表中所给出的数据一般较多,考生不能在文中一一罗列,而要去繁就简,抓住重要信息加以描述。凡是印在考卷上的都可以使用。2. 对图表描述后的分析概括或议论要注意符合图表本意,不可泛泛而谈,要言之有理。83. 文章最后得出的结论要合乎情理。这一结论可以是归纳,也可以是对未
11、来的一种预测。Example:Family Bank Deposits RMB (yuan)YearAverage Family DepositsTotal Family Deposits1984 1338 130.5 billion1990 7869 757.3 billion1998 32000 2533.2 billion对图表描述:The period 1984-1998 saw a great increase in family bank deposits in Chinas cities and towns. In 1984, the average family deposit
12、s were 1338 yuan while in 1998 it rose to 32000 yuan. Compared with the total bank deposits in 1984, the amount in 1998 was 19.4 times as much as that year.对图表分析:Several factors may contribute to this change. First, with the development of reform and open up, the family income has greatly increased
13、and people have more spare money to put in the bank. Second, people are no longer content to buy small items and they save money to purchase more expensive things such as cars and houses. Third, it seems 9that to put money in banks is still a main investment for most families. Families are willing t
14、o deposit money in banks to gain interests as well as to contribute to the construction of our country.得出结论:From above analysis, we can see clearly as long as we adhere to reform and open-up policy, the family income will continue to increase and meanwhile the family will have more spare money to pu
15、t in the bank.图表作文常用句型 1. The table/diagram/bar chart/pie graph/tree diagram/curve graph /column chart shows/illustrates/reveals/describes/depicts/reflects that/how. 2. The graph provides some interesting data regarding. 3. The data/statistics/figures / number can be interpreted as follows: 4. The d
16、ata/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that. 5. As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table, . 106. It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/figures that. 7. The vertical/horizontal axis stands for. 8. There was rapid/noticeable/great/sharp/steep/remarkable
17、/slow/little/slight/gradual rise/increase/decrease/fall/decline/drop/change in development in . 9. The percentage remained steady/stable at. 10. The figures stayed the same. 11. The figures bottomed out/peaked at. 12. The figures reached the bottom/a peak/a plateau during.信函写作一、 信函格式Heading(address,
18、 Date)Salutation,BodyComplimentary CloseSignature11二、各部分写作方法Heading: 信头部分,每行末尾无标点,行内用逗号隔开,位置靠右,先地址(可省)后日期,地址从小到大。Salutation: 称呼,Dear, Dear Sir/Madam,Body: 正文部分,要求语言简练、明确、有礼貌。Complimentary Close: 结束礼语,信函右下方,根据写信人与收信人的关系不同,需选择不同的礼语,如: Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Yours respectfully,
19、 Yours ever, Yours ever son, Yours 等Signature: 签名,通常签全名。议论文常用句型 1. It is a fact that. 2. It is well-known that. 3. There is no doubt that. 4. I think that. 5. Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer. 6. Some people say/believe/claim that. 7. It is generally believed that. 128. It is widely accepte
20、d that. 9. It is argued/held that. 10. While it is commonly believed that, I believe. 11. It can be concluded that. 12. Peoples views vary from person to person. 第二部分 常用于正文段的句型的 4 类表达方式 一、A、B 型作文段落常用句型和表达方式 1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B. 2. A and B are different in some/ev
21、ery way / respect / aspect. 3. A and B differ in. 4. A differs from B in. 5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in. 6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B. 7. A, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B. 8. While it is generally believed that A , I believe B. 9. Despite the
22、ir similarities, A and B are also different. 10. Both A and B . However, A; on the other hand, B. 11. The most striking difference is that A, while B. 二、原因分析性段落常用的句型和表达方式 131 There are several reasons for, but in general, they come down to three major ones. 2 There are many factors that may account
23、for, but the following are the most typical ones. 3 Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective. 4 Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. 5 The reasons are as follows. 三、因果推理性段落常用句型和表达方式 1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learne
24、d a lot. 2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 5. The cause of/reason for/ov
25、erweight is eating too much. 6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much. 7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight. 8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 14四、举例型段落常用句型和表达方式 1. Here is one more example. 2. Take for example. 3. The same is
26、true of. 4. This offers a typical instance of. 5. We may quote a common example of. 6. Just think of.第三部分 常用于结尾段的句型的 3 类表达方式 一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型 1 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that. 2 Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that.
27、3 Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that. 4 All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that 5 From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that 6 To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that. 7 In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it
28、is. 8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that. 159. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that. 10. It is believed that.第四节 文章结尾1. 得出结论性结尾句(1) 上面讨论的情况看,我们可以有把握地得出的结论。(From what has been discussed above, we
29、may safely arrive at/come to the conclusion that)(2) 所有证据都支持一个毫无疑问的结论(All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that )(3) 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论(Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that )2. 号召性结尾句(1) 有必要采取有效行动来结束这种局面。(It is necessary that effect
30、ive actions should be taken to end the situation.)16(2) 是我们结束的时候了。(It is time that we put/urged an immediate end to / It is high time for us to end)(3) 很有必要采取适当措施来纠正这一倾向,即(It is necessary that proper steps should be taken to correct the tendency that)3. 建议性结尾句(1) 总而言之, 我们应该/必须。我们应该。(In short, we sho
31、uld/must; we should/ought to.)(2) 当我们寻求做某事的方法时,我们必须意识到(As we look for ways to do something, we must realize that)(3) 毫无疑问,需要对问题加以特殊关注。(There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of )(4) 意识到这一问题只是在解决这一问题上向前迈出的第一步。我们还应该)(Realizing the problem is the first step toward the solution to the problem, we shouldalso.)17(5) 无论在什么时候,什么情况下,我们都应该 (At no time and in no circumstance should we.)