1、衔接巧、过渡妙，阅卷老师无可挑剔创满分,书面表达：,第四讲,桂东一中李应深,第五档(很好)；(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,书面表达评分标准：,Step 1.Lead-in by comparing two passages.,思考：哪篇短文写得更好？为什么？,Recently a discussion has been or
2、ganized on whether the English class is to be taught in English only or in both English and Chinese.Some students think they like to be taught in English only in class. In their opinion, they think that it can improve their listening and speaking. It can create a good atmosphere, and it is good for
3、us to learn English well. But sixty percent of the students like to be taught in both Chinese and English in class. they think that they can understand the lesson well . They can know the difference between Chinese and English.I think that the second opinion is better . we should understand what the
4、 teacher says, if we dont know it , I think it hard to learn English well. we are Chinese students, we dont know many English words, so l like the second one.,Passage 1:,Recently a discussion has been organized on whether the English class is to be taught in English only or in both English and Chine
5、se. students differ in their opinions on the problem.40% of the students are in favour of being taught in English only in class. They hold the view that a good learning environment is vital if we want to learn English well. Whats more, they will have more opportunities to practise listening and spea
6、king. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly. However, the rest of the students point out that speaking both Chinese and English in class is easier for them to understand the lesson. In addition, It is beneficial to know the difference between Chinese and English.As far as Im concerned,
7、Its my opinion that learning English is a step-by-step process. If I want to learn a lesson well, I have to understand it first, Thus I can follow the teacher. All in all, I prefer my English class to be taught in both Chinese and English.,Passage 2:,一、“启”创造良好开端 常用表达“启”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)：first, firs
8、t of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately, currently等。,二、“承”顺势承上启下 常用表达“承”的过渡词语和词组：secondly, in addition, besides, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, in other words, especially,
9、particularly, obviously, at the same time, no doubt，in fact等。,Step2,三、“转”巧妙转折过渡 常用表达“转”的过渡词语和词组：but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, while, despite, in spite of, regardless of, instead等。,四、“合”完美结束全文 常用表达“合”的过渡词语和词组：in a word, in general, in short, above all, finally, in conclusion, at l
10、ast, in summary, as a result, on the whole， to sum up，to conclude等,3Obviously, we can (得出结论) good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 4Obviously, (该是的时候了) we took some measures to solve the problem.,draw the conclusion that,it is high time that,Step3,9.我在森林迷路了，更糟糕的是，天开始变黑了。,I lost
11、my way in the forest and , it became dark.,Whats worse,7.如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地， 我们就能精通英语。, there can be no doubt that we can master English.,If we can do as mentioned above,8.总而言之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。,8. , a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.,In conclusion,10.人们对这个问题有不同的看法。,11.最近我们班对中学生是否应该带智能手机展开
12、了热烈的讨论。,Attitudes to this issue vary from person to person.,Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether middle school students should have smart phones.,Every coin has two sides.,12.任何事要一分为二来看待。,There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）.But it is well known that the
13、 opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. Firstly, 原因一. Furthermore, 原因二. However, others hold the idea that 观点二. For one thing，原因一.For another thing ,原因二. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二. It is not only bec
14、ause _, but also because _.,观点对比模板：,某英文报就中学生在校使用智能手机这一话题进行讨论。请你根据提示用英语写一篇短文给该报投稿。,Sept 4 Composition writing,注意： 1短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3词数100左右。,Whether high school students should have smart phones,Part 1: (beginning),Part 2: (body) Some However ，others ,Part3: (conclusion) In my opin
15、ion /It is my opinion that/ I am in favor of the idea that,Structure(结构）,Show the topic,Spelling mistakes Capital letters (大小写) Structure( 结构框架) Singal /plural (单复数) Comma/ full stop (逗号/句号),Make corrections,Try your best to help your partner to improve some simple words ,phrases and sentences.,Thank you !,
