1、 太傻面授教师教案 IELTS大作文讲解：cause + solution 类作文学生 面授老师时间 本次课时 IELTS写作第六课时教学思路1.作文简介、写作技巧2.实例讲解3.课后作业教学目标1. causes+solutions类作文理论分析2. causes+solutions类写作技巧及写作方法3. 学习写作思路讲解重点写作理论分析范文学习常用句式总结备考资料 剑桥真题、雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全教学详细内容：一、 分析雅思写作causes + solutions 类理论1. 题目特点及解题思路1） 题目特点：Give your opinions and give some reco
2、mmendations.Give reasons and make some suggestions. What are the main reason of this phenomenon？ What measures should be taken to solve this phenomenon？ 2） 解题思路：在分析事情原因的基础上，提出解决方案或建议。3) 文章结构包括：a: 开头段，背景阐述，引出论题b: 分析事情的原因c: 提出解决方案或建议d: 对于原因以及解决措施进行简要的总结或者太傻面授教师教案 a:开头段，背景阐述，引出论题b:分析原因一并提出相应的解决方案或建议c:分
3、析原因二并提出相应的解决方案或建议d:对于原因以及解决措施进行简要的总结相比较，后者更有逻辑性。在此推荐后者。2. 常用句型及模板：常用句型：1) 我们绝对不能. On no account can we do 2) 那就是.的原因 That is the reason why 3) 我相信这个不是最好或者唯一的方法做 I do not believe it is the best or only way to4) 这意味着每个人都必须知道他在世界上所造成的影响和他们在世界上所扮演的唯一 角色。 What is meant by this is that each individual mus
4、t be aware of the impact he or she has in the world and their unique part to play in this world.5) 越多，似乎越少 As more and more, there would seem to be less and less6）但是对于这个问题的解决，在世界范围内毫无进展 Yet little has been done to solve this problem worldwide.7） 伴随着的第一个并且是最明显的问题是 The first and most obvious problems
5、associated with are 8） 更严重的问题是 A further problem is9） 这个解决所需要的是 What is required of this situation is 10） 需要记住的重要的一件事情是 What is important to remember is that11）需要考虑到很多因素 Many factors should be taken into consideration.12）关于的争论是不会有结果的 Disputes about are fruitless.太傻面授教师教案 13）使之间达到平衡 ensure the balanc
6、e between and 词组:1) 不遗余力地做 Spare no effort to do sth2) 让.明白 bring home to sb. sth.3)养成.的习惯 Get into the habit of doing sth. = make it a rule to do sth.4)令人不满意 leave much to be desired5)使之间达到平衡 ensure the balance between and 模板：开头段：According to a(n) survey (/investigation/analysis/statistics/report)
7、released (/conducted/made) by _, there is a growing (/increasing/declining) number of _ who (/which) _.To be specific, _. (What amazes us most is that _.) Among countless factors which directly and indirectly influence _, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.主体段一：The reasons (/causes/fac
8、tors) for _ are complex (/varied/profound). Some attribute it to _. Others put it down to _. Still others owe it to _. In my opinion, however, three (/some) factors shout louder than others (/weigh heavier than others/stand out from others). The most critical reason lies in _. Moreover, _. Another i
9、mportant factor should not be ignored. 主体段二：Among a myriad of suggested solutions to _ (/measures against _ 太傻面授教师教案 /plans for _ /moves toward _ /ideas on _), three have begun to stand (/stick) out. First of all, _. An equally effective measure (/solution/recipe) is _. Last but not least, _.结尾段：To
10、promote (/suppress/cultivate/popularize/curb/enhance/root up) the issue in question, the public attention (/more stress/more emphasis) should be placed (/put/focused) upon two proposals (/moves/measures/solutions).二、 实例分析题目: 剑桥真题 4 TEST4 In many countries， schools have severe problems with student b
11、ehavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?1. 题目分析 题目意思：在许多国家，学生的行为有很严重的问题。指出其原因并给出解决建议。 审题关键： 严重注意写作指引，写作过程中一定要体现出 causes and solutions. 从结构上来看：这篇文章的题型是 causes + solutions，因此文章可以分为三个部分：首段引入话题，正文第一段指出这一现象的原因，正文第二段对于这一现象的解决建议，结尾段对于原因和解决措施进行总结。 2. 范文分析太傻面授教师教案 Th
12、ere is a general belief that the behavior of school students is deteriorating, but the reasons given for this and solutions suggested vary considerably. I shall look briefly at two aspects in this essay. 引入背景信息。并且值得借鉴的是作者对于题目的改写很到位。 severe problems with student behavior改写为 the behavior of school stu
13、dents is deteriorating. 简要概括主体段的内容。 引出主体段对 reasons 和 solutions 的讨论。I think that one of the key reasons is a lack of discipline, both at school and at home. There seems to be more time and energy devoted to explaining poor behavior than to dealing with it. As a result, the poor behavior of students i
14、s tolerated and not corrected. Using discipline does not mean using physical punishment, though this might prove necessary in certain cases. Punishments should be given as immediately as possible and not “reduced” because of “special” circumstance. Parents and teachers are far too quick to blame soc
15、ial ills for poor behavior rather than the students. This can lead to situations where the poor behavior becomes secondary to other consideration. 中心句总结概括指出原因之一-学校大部分时间用在 explain poor behavior而不是 deal with it. 提出解决原因一的措施- Using discipline. 进一步拓展解决措施。I think that another reason for poor student behav
16、ior is a lack of attention. I t seems that the modern world encourages poor attention spans. 太傻面授教师教案 The lack of attention (and even thought) required outside the classroom can conflict with the requirements of a class, where students might have to sit through two hours of information. I think that
17、 society in general needs to consider the effects of short attention spans, but teachers could also consider new ways of presenting lessons-perhaps using multimedia and increasing student participation. 解释原因之二。- a lack of attention. 对应原因二的解决措施。To summarize, I believe that there are other possible re
18、asons for the deterioration of student behavior, but that these are the main two, in my opinion at least. I also believe that reversing the trend is possible without major cost.结尾段不止提及主体段的两个主要原因并指出依然有其他的原因。最后一句概括指出解决这一措施并不难。呼应写作指引原因及解决措施。3. 范文写作思路总结作者在首段引出背景信息，并概括指出本篇文章的内容。在介绍部分，作者表达很清楚，导致这一行为的原因有很多
19、，但是作者主要阐述了两个原因。作者在每一段都给出理由，阐述原因以及给出建议。这个方法正属于上述理论部分的后者推荐写法。三、课后练习：剑桥真题 8 TEST4In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?You should write at least 250 words.太傻面授教师教案 Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
