1、专题十五 书面表达,高考英语 (课标卷区),A组 统一命题课标卷题组 Writing 1(2018课标全国) 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回 复邮件,内容包括: 1.到达时间; 2.合适的礼物; 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,五年高考,答案 写作提示 1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。 2.文章要点:到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪。 One possible version: Dear Terry, I am delighted when rece
2、iving your letter, asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you. First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap- pointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally,
3、to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, its vital that you,should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom. In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do ho
4、pe you will have great fun at your friends home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 punctually adv.准时地 be of great significance 很重要 appropriate adj.合适的 2.出彩结构 First of all, bear mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time,which is of great significance to
5、 show your politeness.(that引导宾语从句, which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 2(2018课标全国) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing To- gether,内容包括: 1.短片内容:学校的发展; 2.放映时间、地点; 3.欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。 第一步 审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题: 在学校宣传栏“英语天地”
6、发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态: 以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。 第二步 确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意 段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容 学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望希望大家对短片提意 见。 第三步 紧扣主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧 扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句 式的使用。,One possible version: No
7、tice Dear schoolmates, It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite you to see an Eng- lish short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school. We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theat
8、er to- morrow. Dont miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity. I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feed- back in time and contact us at your convenience. Students Union 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 on behalf of代表 take part in参加;参与 feedback n. 反馈
9、 at ones convenience 在某人方便的时候 be eager to do sth.渴望做某事 2.出彩结构 It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite you to see an English short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.(that引导宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 3(2018课标全国) 假定你是李华,
10、你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括: 1.学校的体育场馆; 2.主要的运动项目; 3.你喜欢的项目。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态 以一般现在时为主。 2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要 点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢 这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。 One possible version: Dea
11、r Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch. To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our,school. Moreover,
12、 with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life. All in all, I s
13、incerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 exceedingly adv.非常,极其 give sb. a rough sketch向某人做简单的陈述 enjoy great popularity受到了热烈欢迎 2.出彩结构 Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football,
14、 as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.(with的复 合结构作状语,of which引导定语从句),Writing 4(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内 容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.内容:学习唐诗; 3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。 2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点; 上课的内容
15、:学习唐诗;课前要求:简要了解唐朝的历 史。 One possible version: Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better,you need to do the following things before
16、the next class.,At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit fo
17、r you to understand the background of the poems. You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 extremely adv.极其 play a role in在起作用 2.出彩结构 At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, whic
18、h plays an extremely significant role in our literature.(which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 5(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括: 1.展览时间、地点; 2.展览内容。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将 来时为主体时态。 2.文章要点: 1)展览时间、地点; 2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的
19、历史和作品。 One possible version: Dear Henry, Im Li Hua, one of your students. Im writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and Im sure you will like it. The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artist
20、s will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the,country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. Im looking forward to hearing from yo
21、u. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 exhibition n.展览 unforgettable adj.难忘的 2.出彩结构 If you like, you can also join in.(if引导条件状语从句) Writing 6(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀 请他加入,内容包括: 1.球队活动; 2.报名方式及截止日期。,注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。
22、2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消 息;介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在 截止日期前完成报名。 One possible version: Dear Eric, Im writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing ta
23、ble tennis, I wonder if youd like to join.,Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which benefit me most. What do you think of it? If you are in- terested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up.
24、The closing date is 15th June. I hope to meet you in the school team. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 recruit v.吸收;招募 be keen on酷爱,对着迷 2.出彩结构 Knowing that you are.I wonder if(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder后 的if引导宾语从句),Writing 7(2016课标全国) 假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(f
25、ormat)。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。 2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简 历)。 One possible version: Dear Ms Jenkins, Im one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. Im writing to ask for your help. This summer I intend to take up a part-time
26、job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and,resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, Im wonder- ing if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there
27、are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 精彩语句 take up a par
28、t-time job从事兼职工作 broaden ones horizons拓展视野 I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.(if引导宾语从句,it作形式 宾语),Writing 8(2016课标全国) 假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国 朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 1.主题:环境保护; 2.展览时间; 3.投稿邮箱:。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作
29、提示 1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。 2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。 One possible version: Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last fo
30、r three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pic- tures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more
31、 people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphoto- . Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school(the last time引导时间状语从句) Writing 9(2016课标全国) 假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,
32、内容包括: 1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现 在时。 2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出要点, 但重在适当地发挥。 One possible version: Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found
33、that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and,select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If
34、 not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 cause sb. too much trouble带给某人太多麻烦 be convenient for sb.对某人来 说方便 Writing 10(2015课标) 假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短 文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下: 1.栏目介绍; 2.稿件内容; 3.稿件长度:约400词; 4.交稿日期:
35、6月28日前。,注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.,答案 写作提示 本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注意要 点要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和 过渡词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。 One possible version: Dear Pet
36、er, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries ar- ticles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the cultur
37、e in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high,school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your
38、 article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 be popular among sb.受到某人欢迎 You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.(so long as引导条件状语从句) Writing 11(2015课标) 假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festi- val)。请给外教露西
39、写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括: 1.出发及返回时间; 2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。,注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.结语已为你写好。Looking forward to your reply.,答案 写作提示 1.本文为应用文电子邮件的写作,属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要 为一般现在时和一般将来时。 2.内容要点:(1)出发及返回时间;(2)在敬老院的活动:包饺子、表演节目等。 One possible version: Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit
40、 to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We shoul
41、d be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us,please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 .,which we hope will make them happy(which引导非限制性定语从句),注意:1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇
42、:住宿accommodation,Writing 12(2014课标全国) 假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该 校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。,Dear Sir/Madam,Yours faithfully, Li Hua 答案 写作提示 1.本文属于图表类作文,在写作时主要用第一人称,基本时态以现在时为主。 2.内容要点: 说明写信的目的; 开课时间和每周上课时间;,班级大小; 收费情况; 住宿类型。 3.参考词汇: 住宿 accommodation 宿舍 dormitory One possible version: Dear S
43、ir/Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would n
44、ot be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be a host family or a university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 精彩语句 pay for the course付课程费用 host family寄宿家庭,
45、Writing 13(2014课标全国) 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短 文。 1.家庭; 2.工作; 3.业余生活。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲式作文,注意不要遗漏内容要点,注意上下文的连贯性。 2.人称需用第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主。 3.注意结尾要有总结性语句。 One possible version: I often imagi
46、ne what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer.Ill enjoy my work and get a- long well with my co
47、lleagues.Ill do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,Ill continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,Ill travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful. 精彩语句 get along well with sb.与某人相处得好 take regular exerc
48、ise经常锻炼,B组 自主命题省(区、市)卷题组 Writing 1(2018天津) 61.假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学 校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举 行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。 (1)比赛的时间、地点; (2)邀请他的原因; (3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。 注意: (1)词数不少于100; (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the Wor
49、ld Adolescent Robotics Competition,Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin 答案 写作提示 1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来 时。,2.文章要点: 说明写邮件的目的;介绍比赛的时间和地点;邀请他的原因;告知Chris训练计划将发 送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。 One possible version: Dear Chris, I have good news to
50、tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held at the end of July in Tianjin. Im writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it. As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition. Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for yo
51、u to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition. Our training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box. I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice af- ter reading it. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin,
