1、Unit1 Women of achievement-writing 素材WRITING TIPS彰显个性,突出本色如何介绍人物文体介绍人物介绍属记叙文体,主要以人物为中心组织材料,围绕这个人物写一件事,也可以写几件事。人和事往往交织在一起,通过具体的事来反映人物的特征、品质。写作时,语言要简练,逻辑要严密,选材要有重点、真实。时态选用时要注意“瞻前顾后”,写人或叙述当前事件常用一般现在时,以“现在”为基准点。 “瞻前”有一般过去时或现在完成时, “顾后”用一般将来时。写作顺序可以用顺叙、倒叙、插叙和平叙等。 任务聚焦最近,你校正在举办“了解名著,走近名人”的读书活动。请你给学校英语报写一篇关
2、于学者于丹的介绍,以便让同学们更多地了解她。内容如下:于丹,北京师范大学著名教授。她的电视讲座让人们了解了博大精深的中国古代文化,喜欢她的人越来越多。受父亲的影响,她从小就很喜欢中国文学。作为教师的她,不仅课讲得生动有趣,而且还出版了许多书,所以,她又是一名成功的作家。 要求:语句通顺,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。词数:100 左右。激活大脑常见写作结构:1 开门见山,直奔主题。点明全文主题,说明要写什么。2 扩展细节,支持主题。用典型事例来烘托人物的特点、品质。3 评价概括,画龙点睛。用一两句话总结全文,前后呼应。常用表达外貌:good-looking, ordinary-looking,
3、 handsome, beautiful, pretty, graceful, slim, etc.性格:out-going, easy-going, talkative, introvert (内向的), etc.品质:honest, polite, kind, loyal, straightforward, brave, friendly, generous, hard-working, etc. She is famous as a / an . She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much. Her wond
4、erful career inspires many people to believe that success and happiness in life are within reach for everyone. She set a good example to us. Despite the fact that ., he devoted himself to . He put all of his time and effort into .范文参考Yu Dan, a famous professor in Beijing Normal University, has alrea
5、dy given millions of Chinese lots of wonderful lectures on CCTV. In this special way she introduces traditional Chinese literature to make it more popular. Her words are so interesting and humorous that many people admire her very much and become her fans. In their mind, Professor Yu makes understanding Chinese literature easy.Influenced by her father, she began to enjoy Chinese literature when she was a child. She is now a very experienced teacher, who has also published a number of books. She is said to be an excellent teacher, a great lecturer and a successful writer.