1、,IELTS Academic Writing 雅思学术写作Unit Fourteen,April 14th, 2010,IELTS Academic Writing Education& Diagram,Think for a while,学生评价教师：提倡 vs. 禁止？ In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate their teachers but others think it will result in the loss of
2、 respect and discipline in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use your own experience and give an example to support your idea.,Introduction: Thesis statementMain body: Subtopic 1 Subtopic 2 Subtopic 3Conclusion:,Points to Note 审题要点,Locations of S1 and S2 Zonescountryside, town
3、center, housing, industry Transport linksmain roads and railways Important: Town center is a no-traffic zone. Distance to other towns Population of Garlsdon and other towns,Main features and comparisons,S1 is in the countryside NW of Garlsdon. S2 is in the town center. The town center is surrounded
4、by a housing zone. The two industrious zones are in the north and south of Garlsdon. Transport links run near both S1 and S2.,Think for a while,快餐食品有巨大危害 In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societi
5、es. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use your own experience and give an example to support your idea. (Textbook, pp.33-38),Outline of a Sample Essay,Opening-up: fast food as a symbol of progress/status; offering fast, relatively inexpensive food. Butideal and helpful for people and our society? Body Paragraphs: Negative Impacts P1 a recent documentary, Super-size Me P2having no high nutritional value, but high in oil and fast food P3(children) without much knowledge of nutrition & communication breakdown Concluding remarks:The best way to keep families and societies together .,
