1、 叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：这一类的书面表达动词现率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:1.头绪分明，脉络清楚写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个W和一个H 来展开，分别是
2、why, what, when, where, who 及 how。2.突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。学优高考网3.用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。1. Among various ki
3、nds of things/persons in my mind, .is the most unforgettable one2. On a sunny/rainy morning， while I was.First of all. Then. After that. In the end.3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/experienced, I will remember him/in forever加分句
4、子：1. Sth. impressed me greatly.2. What impressed me most is that.经典句型：1. Last Sunday（Saturday. ） , it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy ） 2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus. 3. We enjoyed ourselves.4. We forgot the time. We didnt come back until 5 ocloc
5、k. 5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy. 6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays. 8. We visited a lot of places of interest. 9. We had a good time there. 10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap.
6、 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题，模版如下：叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。开门见山，引出要介绍的人物正文（时间、地点、人物）感想I will never forget my English teacherShe is a beautiful womanIt wasoclock, I didinI realize that写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总分总的结构或总分的结构，模版如下：典例一（2015黄冈）用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人，为同学们树立了一个
7、个积极向上的榜样这就是阳光少年。 某中学自开展向阳光少年学习的活动以来，我们的身边涌现了许许多多的阳光少年，请你以A Sunshine Teenager为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的阳光少年（假如这位阳光少年名叫Xiao Hui） 。 要点：1. 诚实善良、团结友爱、乐于助人；2. 热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上； 3. 热爱劳动、不怕困难、心怀感恩，积极为父母、师长分忧；4. 勤奋好学，积极参加各种文体活动。参考词汇：friendly; be ready; warm-hearted; outgoing; active; housework; be afraid; share; take a
8、n active part in要求：1. 词数不少于 90（开头已给出，不计入总数） ；2. 内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 A Sunshine TeenagerHello! My name is Xiao Hui. _介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受 is one of the most beautiful scenery spots.I volunteered a guide to introduceIt was a busy and tired day but I was very happy_【参考范文】Hello! My na
9、me is Xiao Hui. Im studying in No.1 Middle School. Our school had an activity.Learn from Sunshine Teenagers. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us. Xiao Hui is one of them. He is honest and kind. He gets on well with others. He is always ready to not only help others but also go
10、to the old peoples home to do something for the old. He reads newspapers for them, cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also he is warm-hearted, active and outgoing. He always shares all kinds of his parents housework, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and making dinner. He is never
11、afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports. After school, he plays football with his teammates. And he joins the school clubs, like music, art and chess clubs. He learns a lot from his all activities. 文章符合写作提示要求，思路清晰，
12、开门见山地引出介绍的对象。作者运用了很多巧妙的语句，使短文文采丰富，读后余味无穷，是一篇值得品味的佳作。1. He gets on well with others.他和其他同学相处都很好。学优高考网2. He is always ready to not only help others but also 他不仅准备好帮助其他人， 而且3. And he takes an active part in他参加典例二（2015上海）Write at least 60 words on the topic I want to invent _ .(以我想要发明_为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文
13、，标点符号不占格) 注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）1. It can be used to. 2. It will be exciting/necessary/helpful. 名师点评亮点回放I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot_【参考范文】I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot1. 全文巧用 first, furthermore, in short 等连接
14、词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。 2. 全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。3. 文中出现了 extremely, make contribution to这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。A（2016山东滨州双语中学）假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 上周刚过完生日，他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因。请根据他的问题回复邮件。不少于 80 字，邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入字数。提示词语：cake， noodles， sing song
15、s， make a wish， get presentsQuestions： 1. Who do you often celebrate your birthday with? Your parents? Your friends? Or. ?2. What do you usually do on your birthday?3. What is your favorite present? Why do you like it?亮点回放To TomFrom Li HuaSubject BirthdayHi, Tom,Im glad that you had a nice birthday
16、party last week._Yours,Li HuaB（2016江西临川十中）假如你校英语报一月份将开展校园之星(Star of the Campus)评选活动，请你根据图中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中校园之星李华的情况。提示词：helpwith, spare time, get along with, do housework要求：1文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；2文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；3词数 100 左右(文章首段已给出，不计入总词数 )。Our school will select(挑选)Star of the Campus(校园)in Januar
17、y. I think Li Hua is the most suitable one.AHi, Tom，Im glad that you had a nice birthday party last week.I often celebrate my birthday with my parents and friends. We usually spend it at my house with a big birthday cake，some delicious noodles，soft drinks and many fun games. After we sing songs toge
18、ther，I usually make a wish. I also get presents on this big day and my favourite gifts are video games. I just love to have friends over playing together.Yours，本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，按照写作要求，根据词语及问题提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。写作思路清晰。BOur school will select (挑选) Star of the Campus (校园) in January. I think Li Hu
19、a is the most suitable oneAt home, he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time. Besides, Li Hua gets along well with his neighbors. This is why Li Hua is so popular.In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need. He sets a good example for us.这是
20、一篇看图作文，图片中呈现的是李华在日常生活中所做的不同的事情，写作前要认真阅读图片信息，选择合适的短语来表达；在时态的运用上，要使用一般现在时态。主语为第三人称，并注意主谓一致，可适当使用连词，使文章更流畅。学优高考网名师点评名师点评文章简单介绍了李华在日常生活中所做的不同的事情。时态及动词短语的把握上非常到位。So, Whats more, Besides, In short 的使用，使文章语意连贯，条理清晰。最后一句总结 In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in nee
21、d. He sets a good example for us.增加了文章的感情色彩，起到画龙点晴的作用。Venice a city of great artVenice, a small, waterside city in northeast Italy. It has been known as City of Water, City of Bridgesand The Ctiy of Light. It is considered by many people to be one of the most beautiful cities in the world. Between F
22、ebruary 21 and March 4, carnival（狂欢节）hits the streets. For most people, carnival means large parties and feasts. But in Venice, it also means traditional masks and costumes. Today, people in Venice still dress up in the strangest ways as armed soldiers, butches and fishermen, for example.威尼斯，一个位于意大利东北部的水边小城。它被称为水之城，桥梁之城和光之城。它被许多人认为是世界上最美丽的城市之一。每年的 2 月 21 日至 3 月 4 日是这儿的嘉年华(狂欢节)。对大部分人来说，狂欢节意味着大型聚会和聚餐。但是在威尼斯，它还意味着传统面具和服装。今天的人们仍然会以最奇怪的方式乔装打扮，比如打扮成武装的士兵、粗鲁的男人或渔民。亮点回放
