1、Writing Health,八年级英语备课组,话题复习和写作,2014-11-08,复 习 目 标,根据本单元学过的词汇和短语，会写关于如何保持健康的短文。 学会培养良好的生活习惯。,写作与课程标准和教材的关系 对写作的任务、形式、范围等方面作了具体的规定：,体裁、题材不脱离课本万变不离其宗，这个“宗”就是课本。把 握教材学好教材是提高我们英语写作水平的根本和基础。,Jacks daily life,health,2. have a healthy eating habits,1. take exercise,3.relax ourselves,Topic,(important)ZXXK,(
2、helpful),(necessary),Have a healthy eating habits is important.,1.How do you have a healthy eating habits？,2.What kind of sports do you usually do?,3.How do you relax yourself when you are stressed out（压力过大）?,Group work,Please discuss the following questions in groups.学科网Z.X.X.K Z.X.X.K,Please write
3、 a small passage for each question. Use 10 to 20 words.,healthy food,healthy drink,unhealthy food,unhealthy drink,eating habits,take exercise,go skateboarding,go skating,play baseball,play basketball,play volleyball,play tennis,play soccer,run,take a walk,swim,go hiking,relax yourself,listen to musi
4、c,play computer games,do some sports,get eight hours sleep (get enough sleep),talk to others,You can relax yourself by listening to some music.,作文六步法,作文六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,作文六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,作文六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语句,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书
5、面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、抄写,卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面不整洁一定会扣分！,课堂练习,请用六步法写一篇短文,Writing,健康对于任何人来说都是重要的。春风学校除了早操和阳光大课间外，孙校长还特别强调每一个学生必须每天喝两杯开水来保持健康。为了保持健康，我们应该注意什么呢？根据表格提示写一篇不少于80词的短文。,have more healthy food and drink,have less unhealthy food and drink,play basketball,take a walk,run,swim,get enough sleep,
6、listen to music,watch TV,do some sports,talk to others,words： first， second， finally，in a word,Tips（小贴士）： 仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项 列出可能用到的句型，注意关联词的使用，如： in order to, and, but, because, 等 语法方面：时态，人称的准确使用 形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾”（发表议论，谈感受） 适当分段 写完后要通读检查,Writing,健康对于任何人来说都是重要的。春风学校除了早操和阳光大课间外，孙校长还特别强调每一个学生必须每天喝两
7、杯开水来保持健康。为了保持健康，我们应该注意什么呢？根据表格提示写一篇不少于80词的短文。,have more healthy food and drink,have less unhealthy food and drink,play basketball,take a walk,run,swim,get enough sleep,listen to music,watch TV,do some sports,talk to others,words： first， second， finally，in a word,How to keep healthyHealth is importan
8、t for us. So we need to know how to keep healthy.First, having a healthy eating habits.We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. Because they are good for our health. Eating little meat and drinking more milk are good for us, too. Dont eat junk food .Second, taking exercise is helpful. Regular exe
9、rcise can help build us up. We can play basketball, take a walk, run or swim. Finally, relaxing ourselves is necessary. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Whats more, we can relax ourselves by listening to some music, watching TV, doing sports or talking to others.In a word, keep healthy, and we can study better, work better and live a happier life.,Thank you for your listening!,Bye-bye!,
