1、,Writing,高考英语写作高分策略,Which composition feels more attractive, why?,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?,1.The character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives,2.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peop
2、les lives.,3.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.,4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.,_,_,_,_,影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；,B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;,Practice,Find some
3、similar words or phrases of the followings,good2. think3.clever,perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent,in ones opinion/view hold the view that it is widely shared that ,wise bright smart intelligent cute,改变句子结构,与众不同,1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。,A strong/big earthquake happ
4、ened in Tangshan in the 1980s.,There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.,A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.,2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.,I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.,Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.,改变句子语序，
5、实现句子形式多样化,1.He got excited when he heard the news. _ the news, he got excited. 2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. _, the girl went home. 3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school. _include Chinese, English and Physics . 4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in
6、his garden. He was watering flowers. _, Mr. Smith was watering_.,Hearing,Hungry and thirsty,The main subjects I studied at school,Early in the morning,in the garden,使用强势句式，增强语句表现力,1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. _we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! 2. Radio bro
7、adcasts didnt begin until 1920. It was_. 3.He never speaks about his own family. Never_. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. On the wall_. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. _.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began,does he speak about his own family,is a notice s
8、aying ”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is, he knows a lot,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.,1.表递进.表转折 .表因果.表目的.表归纳,but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand.,b
9、ecause,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.,in order that,so that,for the purpose of.,in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole.,如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？,Many houses and schools were destroyed. More than five million p
10、eople are living a hard life now. The students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.,William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达) Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite En
11、glish writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the E
12、nglish language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well., _,影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想,小结：1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解,Homework,Build a Harmonious Society-建立和谐社会 假设你是李晓平，是湖南某中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封100词左右的倡议书。 1人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心； 2人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助； 3人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护； 4你的态度：内容由自己拟定。,
