1、,Writing,高考英语写作高分策略,Which composition feels more attractive, why?,考场作文TIPS,取悦评卷人润色文章原则,有清晰的整体脉络有自然的段间衔接经典的用词用句有整齐美观的书写用词“老辣”用句经典: 倒装、强调、虚拟名人名言,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?,1.The character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives,2.The most str
2、iking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.,3.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.,4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.,_,_,_,_,影响给分的因素
3、之二：文中所采用的语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；,B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;,Practice,Find some similar words or phrases of the followings,good2. think3.clever,perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent,in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that ,wise bright smart intel
4、ligent cute,改变句子结构,与众不同,1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。,A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s.,There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.,A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.,2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.,I received your letter which was written on August 15th this
5、 morning.,Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.,改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化,1.He got excited when he heard the news._ the news, he got excited.2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty._, the girl went home.3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school._include Chinese,
6、 English and Physics .4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers._, Mr. Smith was watering _.,Hearing,Hungry and thirsty,The main subjects I studied at school,Early in the morning,in the garden,使用强势句式，增强语句表现力,1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing
7、 well._we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!2. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.It was_.3.He never speaks about his own family.Never_.4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall.On the wall_.5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot._.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broa
8、dcasts began,does he speak about his own family,is a notice saying ”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is, he knows a lot,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？,Many houses and schools were destroyed. More than five million people are living a hard life now. Th
9、e students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.,A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。,e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !,感叹句,强调句,e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old
10、 granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.,e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly
11、in the street with a handbag in her hand.,倒装句,省略句,with短语,e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.,定语从句,e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to who
12、ever needs help at present.,各种名词性从句,e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.,各种状语从句,-学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a spo
13、rt only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming
14、 more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,句子表达有何亮点？,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm., The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long
15、 time, could keep calm in the storm.,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子, The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face., The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet
16、 next Sunday., Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass., The old man thought of his son, with tears coming down from his face.,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息, We were driving out into the count
17、ry, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing., As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crow
18、ded bus.,My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult
19、as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.,B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.,C) Compound sentence B: Wha
20、t he is doing has nothing to do with me.,=When he heard the news, he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，20岁，1993年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li, a boy of 20, was born in Guangdong in 1993.,2)借助介词短语做定语,如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short b
21、rown hair and a white jacket.,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.,3)借助介词短语做状语,II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：他给我钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when
22、 I saw you.,如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。,He gave me a lot money but I refused.,III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1) 名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.,2) 定语从句,如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and populatio
23、n as well as rich natural resources.,3) 状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new st
24、udent from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at
25、the same time., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at
26、the same time will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary schoo
27、l start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,情景说明 通知： 新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。 体检地点：第一人民医院 体检时间：9月9日，星期六 注意：1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往；2、体检前空腹；3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。,实战练习,1. To his surprise, the little gir
28、l knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice
29、 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they w
30、ent back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and
31、 youll make rapid progress.,9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more),No sooner had he come back fr
32、om Beijing than he was sent abroad.,We all think highly of him .,The plan turned out to be a failure.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Summary:,A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,A good paragraph is one that consis
33、ts of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.,Lets improve it:,Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in
34、 School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should
35、practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they
36、 do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解,如何遣词造句,表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this. 2）The reasons for this are as follows. 3）The reason for thi
37、s is obvious. 4）The reason for this is not far to seek. 5）The reason for this is that. 6）We have good reason to believe that.,表示好处 1）It has the following advantages. 2）It does us a lot of good. 3）It benefits us quite a lot. 4）It is beneficial to us. 5）It is of great benefit to us.,表示坏处 1）It has more
38、 disadvantages than advantages. 2）It does us much harm. 3）It is harmful to us.,如何遣词造句,表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb.to do sth. 2）We think it necessary to do sth. 3）It plays an important role in our life.,表示措施 1）We should take some effective measur
39、es. 2）We should try our best to overcome （conquer） the difficulties. 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.,如何遣词造句,表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that. 2）No one can deny the fact that. 3）There is no denying the fact that. 4）This
40、 is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5）However，thats not the case.,表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth. 2）People have different opinions on this problem. 3）People take different views of（on）the question. 4）Some people believe that.Others argue that.,如
41、何遣词造句,表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that . 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that .,套语 1）Its well known to us that . 2）As is known to us，. 3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4）From the graph（table，chart）lis
42、ted above，it can be seen that . 5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will， there is a way”.,and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.,1.表递进.表转折.表因果.表目的.表归纳,but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.,in order that,so that,for the purpose of.,in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.,Thanks,
