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10、her. (使用过去分词 )8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构） by many students, she walked out of the lab., a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.丰富的语法结构 (Ex.
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13、1978 .This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 .恰当的连接词 (Exercises)2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. All the school-age children can study here.
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16、ast Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace. They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice. Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace when they saw a box fall off a passing truck. With
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