1、教学内容及安排,1. 简介(改革) 2. 图表作文的写法开头段(原因结果建议) 3. 图画作文的写法开头段(原因结果建议) 4. 议论文的分类-观点及论证 4. 议论文基本词汇、词组、句型 6. 范文写作,大学英语四级,写作,听力,阅读,翻译,考场规则和流程,规则:流程: 8:45 进场 8:50 宣读考场指令 9:00 禁止考生入场 9:10 考生开始考试 9:40 写作结束 9:55 收答题卡I 10:00 听力开始 11:20 考试结束,段,句,词,篇,大学英语四级考核标准,1.审题准确,2.连贯性,3.词汇,4.句法,(1)内容切题 (2)观点明确 (3)论据充分 (4)字数达到,(1
2、)分段合理 (2)内容连贯 (3)语言衔接-逻辑词-词汇-语法,(1)拼写正确 (2)使用准确 (3)词汇级别 (4)丰富性,(1)语法正确 (2)句法丰富,写作部分简介,评分原则? 评分标准? 涉及题材? 常考话题? 关于模版?,(二)评分标准,1本题满分为15分。 2阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。 4评分标准 2分-条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且
3、多数为严重错误。 5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。 注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分,5字数不足应酌情扣分。(见下表),注:1题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。 2只写一段者:04分;只写两段者:09分(指规定三段的作文)长度计分标准:91100词: 扣1分 8190词
4、: 扣2.5分 7180词: 扣4分6170词: 扣6分 60词以下: 扣8分为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准,现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分,列表如下,称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60(相当于百分制的60分)。作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7,写作部分简介,评分原则? 评分标准? 涉及题型? 常考话题? 关于模版?,书信写作: 投诉,道歉,感谢,邀请,演讲图表作文: pie bar table 议论文: 现象阐释型: 问题对策型: 观点对比型 观点论证
5、型:,写作,写作部分简介,评分原则? 评分标准? 涉及题材? 常考话题? 关于模版?,常考话题,1. 校园生活 2. 社会热点 3. 日常生活 4. 读书学习一定要掌握相关的核心词汇,Sales of Computers 1995,v.+adv.,increased slightly,The sales of computers increased slightly from 10 in Jan to 20 in Feb. And then, there was a dramatic growth in the sales of computers from 20 to about 90 du
6、ring the next month, which was followed by a rapid decrease with over 60 units.,UK Book Sales,England was where by far the most books were brought, which accounted for 81% of the market. The book sales of Wales came next making up 10% ,closely followed by Scotland (8%). Northern Ireland ranked last
7、with 1%.,E take the fifth position with about,升序或降序,A is the largest, which is, followed by B accounting for,C come next , which makes up,F lies last, which comprises,D rank fourth( ),more than,There are more boys than girls in class A.,Class A has fewer girls than boys.,fewer than,表示比较的实例 1,the num
8、ber of,The number of boys is (much/considerably) larger/greater/higher than that of girls in class A.,表示比较的实例 2,the percentage of,The percentage of boys is (much/considerably) larger/greater/higher than that of girls in class A (67% and 33% respectively).,表示比较的实例 3,outnumber,Boys outnumber girls in
9、class A.,exceed,The number of boys exceeds that of girls in class A.,表示比较的实例 4,as _as,The number of boys is twice as many as that of girls in class A.,表示比较的实例 5,The table gives information about the female workforce and female managers in five countries., 现象阐释型:分析现象,阐述其成因利弊,题目实例如下: 2003年1月四级作文考题: Di
10、rections: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象;2. 诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实。,写作, 问题对策型:分析问题,找出成因,提出解决办法,题目实例如下: 1997年6月四级英语作文真题:Directions: Fo
11、r this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 大学生了解社会的必要性; 2. 了解社会的途径(大众媒介、社会服务等);3. 我打算怎么做。,写作,观点对比型:辨
12、析两种对立观点,题目实例如下:1995年1月四级作文真题:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)2.也有人
13、认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil) 3.我的看法,写作,观点论证型:支持或驳斥一种观点,题目实例如下: 1998年6月四级作文真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline
14、(given in Chinese) below:,写作,基本表达,一些人:millions of people, a number of people, an increasing number of people, people in growing numbers认为:think, claim, maintain, insist, suppose, tend to believe, firmly believe, hold the view that, are of the opinion that, hold the belief that, harbor the idea that
15、,然而:while / meanwhile, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, by contrast 另外一些人:many others 反对者:objectors 理论 / 争论:reason / argue,基本表达,在我看来:in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, from my own perspective / point of view, speaking for myself, as I see it, my own view is that 总而言之:to sum up, in
16、summary, to conclude, to draw a conclusion, in short / brief 基于以上列出的论据:based on all the arguments offered above 综上所述,我们可以很自然地得出如下结论:Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration, we can naturally come to the conclusion that 利大于弊:benefits outweigh drawbacks / do more good than harm,基本表达,写
17、作套路 ,第一段:引出话题There is a public controversy nowadays about the issue ofThe question arouses great concern / a heated debate among people. Nowadays, a great number of people are discussing whether we need to ,most / many people believe that ., but other people,There is no consensus of opinions among p
18、eople as to the,of Some people claim that ., while others believe that,第二段:观点一 + 论据The first group has their arguments as follows. In the first place, (1) _. Secondly, (2) _. Moreover, (3) _. What is more, (4) _.Convincing arguments can be made that _. To start with, (1) _, therefore _; In addition,
19、 (2) _, specially, _; Last but not the least, (3) _, in other words, _.,观点二 + 论据Other people, however, are disapproval of it. First of all, (1) _ Furthermore, (2) _. Besides, (3) _.On the contrary, there are some people that are not in favor of _. On one hand, (1) _; On the other, (2) _; Furthermore
20、, (3) _.,第三段:个人观点In short, there is some truth in both arguments. But as far as I am concerned, I hold that _. Considering one after another, I agree with the former / latter opinion.,reading selectively or extensively? 1. 有人认为我们应该广泛阅读? 2. 然后,另外一些人则认为我们应该有选择的精读? 3. 你的观点,When it comes to the choice b
21、etween reading selectively or extensively, different people have different opinions. Some argue that we should be careful in choosing reading materials, while others maintain that we can benefit more from reading as many kinds of books as possible.,The first group has their arguments as follows. On
22、one hand, our time is limited, therefore, we have to put our efforts in the most important books. On the other hand, we need specialized knowledge in order to find a good job.,However, other people believe we should read extensively. For one thing, extensive reading can enlarge our scope of knowledg
23、e. For another, we need a broad education to better understand the world around us.,As far as I am concerned, I prefer to read extensively because I have a wide range of interests, such as in literature, in computer science and so on. As a result, extensive reading may satisfy my need and make me happy.,