1、高三英语写作练习,An English writing practice for the students of Senior Three,How to write a Composition According to Tables and Graphs,1.情景作文,某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。生词：图表chart,一、内容要点： 1. 图表1中六项活动及所用时间 2. 图表2中一个数据反映的情况 3. 自己的一个看法二、说明： 1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达
2、。 2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。,1. What is the main idea of chart 1 ?,the daily average amount of time , different after-class activities.,2. How long do students spend on homework?,93 minutes,3. How much time does it take them to watch TV?,46 minutes,4.How much time does listening music and working on the com
3、puter take up ?,34 minutes and 30 minutes each,5. Do they have much time left for sports ?,25 minutes,6. Do they still have time for housework?,12 minutes,7.Any comments on one of the data given in chart 2 ?,Little time for sports,8. Any suggestions ?,do more exercise,1.Chart 1 shows the daily avera
4、ge amount of time the students spend on different after-class activities.,2. The students put the most time93 minutesinto their homework,3. watching TV takes up 46 minutes.,1. the daily average amount of time different after-class activities.2. their homework 93 minutes3.watch TV 46 minutes,3. Join
5、the phrases into sentence,4. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each.,5. 25 minutes is spent on sports,6. 12 minutes goes into housework.,4. Listening to music and working on the computer 34 minutes and 30minutes each5.
6、 for sports 25 minutes6. housework 12 minutes,10% of the time is taken up with sports activities,encourage the students to do more exercise after class,7 . chart 2 :Little time for sports,8. suggestions,3.Demonstration and analysis of the example of good writingWhat do you appreciate most with the s
7、ample writing?Can you find out some good points?,Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time93 minutesinto their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in a
8、bout the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage
9、the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.,Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time93 minutesinto their homework, and next in line is watc
10、hing TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework., main idea spend Put into Take up Put in Go into 补充说明 inversion 同位语
11、contrast,As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic., 定语从句 concerning, as to comments and suggestions 形容词比较级,Step 2 Sum up the fe
12、ature: Introduction This kind of writing is an information interpretation processThe information may be given in numbers，lines or curves，etc，usually a few explanations are givenThe organization of the writing is essential to a good essay of tables and graphs Generally，it is as follows：,That is，in th
13、e first paragraph，you have to demonstrate the general situation of what has been reflected in the table or graph；Then，in the second paragraph，you have to analyze carefully the numbers，lines or curves，and point out the rate of increase or decrease；In the end，you have to write your own opinion or comm
14、entGeneral introductionAnalysisConclusion 概要介绍分析图表总结概括,Step 3: How to write a composition according to tables and graphs 图表作文,1. Sample ItemDirections： Write a composition based on the title and the following chart in no less than 120 wordsThe causes are given under the horizontal line and the perce
15、ntage of the total of 80 fire incidents is given in the vertical column on the leftwrite clearlyLeading Causes of Fires in China（1997）,2. Analysis of the Sample Item1). The main idea of the graph is：Fire causes2). From the graph，we know that there are three main causes of fires：aSmokers（nearly50）bDe
16、fective insulation（38）cChildren playing with matches（12）3). Thus，we can，by comparing the above information，make a comment of the main topic，then reach a conclusion,An analysis of the writings of the students,Model Essay From the graph above，we can see that fire，one of the most terrible killers in Ch
17、ina，is mainly caused by smokers，defective insulations or children playing with matches In 1997，80 fire incidents took place in ChinaWhile nearly 50were caused by smokers，38 were caused by defective insulation，and 12were caused by children playing with matchesNo matter what the type of the fire，we ca
18、n almost be sure that they were caused by carelessness,From the graph，we can conclude that smokers are the leading cause of fires，but we also need to educate our children，warning them of the dangers of playing with matches and instruct workers be more careful with insulation,Step 4. A Writing Practi
19、ce请根据下面曲线图（graph）“The number of car accidents in 2001”，写一篇文章。 1描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布（distribution）及总趋势。 2描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。 3词数：100左右。 4参考词汇：高峰peak；多雨的日子rainy days。,Main points: Part 1: demonstrate the general situation 1. two peaks in accidents in 20012. March ,number of accidents :353. August , number of
20、 accidents :424. accidents decrease from August to December5. the lowest point of the year :DecemberPart 2:Cause : rainy season , spring and summer your own opinion or comments,From the graph，we can see that there were two peaks in accidents in 2001One was in March with the number of accidents 35The
21、 other was in August with the number of accidents 42，which was the highest point on the distribution lineFrom August，the number of car accidents decreased till it reached the lowest point of the year in December,The two peaks occurred in spring and summer，the two seasons which had most of the years
22、rainDriving tends to be more dangerous on rainy daysMaybe the weather is the most important reason for car accidentsBe careful，when you drive a car on rainy days,Thanks for your attention!,； http:/ 体恒健官方商城 dvh39eyc 剑。”剑有双刃，不但对敌的那边会见血，对着自己人的这边，也有可能会见血。刀只有单刃，刃锋对着敌人，刀背则宽厚无害。柳少姨娘表明，她不敢亲近明秀，怕热脸贴上去，一不小心还是
23、被牺牲掉。她想攀附的，是一把刀，保证能拿无害的刀背对住她。“唯愿如少姨娘所祝。”宝音叹了一声。她们近了老太太院子，宝音忽问：“姨娘母亲如今还好么？”“她那次忽然病好之后，没过几年，忽然又意外死了。”柳少姨娘眉目不动。十月二十五，表姑娘来养病。十月二十六，石姑姑移花去寺祈福。十月二十七，大奶奶送参赞夫人同去太虚山别院玩秋。七姑娘来探病，妾身说表姑娘病还没好，怕要过人，七姑娘留下礼物，回去了。十一月三日，大老爷保荐学士，福家致贺。十一月四日，珞姑娘亲制汤饼奉老太太，老太太亲口称许。十一月八日，七姑娘住进四姑娘院子，帮做针线。十一月十四日，二老爷怒五少爷，碎盆，遁虫。表姑娘病渐好。十一月十八日，秋闱
24、放榜，大少爷高中桂榜第三名孝廉。十一月十九清晨，宝音一早梳洗整齐。乐韵、洛月左右侍候，连明雪也能帮上忙了。一头秀发，挽个双垂髻，榴红经纱在两侧抿成小小蝶形结，以玉珠嵌定，垂玳瑁梅花在眉梢，轻盈俏皮。她去给柳少姨娘请安。柳少姨娘在描画一双木屐，尺寸和明秀双足大小一样，圆头，高齿，黄桑木，彩帛系带，一只已经画好，是鹤，自由而优美的鹤，飞在青天中，曲过脖子来，似对什么恋恋不舍。柳少姨娘在画另一只。她画画从来不打草稿，落笔就是瓴子，很细致的翎子，硬而翘丽的话，是尾羽，披着细细绒毛的话，是胸羽。不管从尾、还是从胸开始画，她笔下的鸟儿都不会变形。宝音盈盈拜倒：“多承少姨娘照顾。”柳少姨娘放下笔，回拜给她，
25、头低到底，一点懒也没有偷：“姑娘今日大安了？”“是。”宝音道，“因此要去给奶奶请安。”“老太太见到姑娘康健，一定欢喜。”柳少姨娘道，“妾身正好这就出门给老太太请安，姑娘与妾身同去否？”“多谢少姨娘提契。笙儿愿与少姨娘同去。”宝音道。柳少姨娘起身整理裙裾。“少姨娘的字真不错。”宝音道。字？柳少姨娘现在画的是画，没有字。但柳少姨娘那寥寥数语的日记，在这二十多天里，“无意间”很方便的可以给宝音看见。一个写，一个看，达成了无声的默契。“妾的字是三少爷教的，妾临得不好。”柳少姨娘谦逊道，“说熟能生巧，我就每天随便写点身边琐事。”她记的是宝音身边的事。而且都是能勾出大事脉络的线索。石姑姑替明秀剔去了花卉，宝音的院子再度黯然了；大太太和唐静轩母亲处得不错，唐家婚事基本无虞；福家通过举荐苏大老爷学士，向苏家表明了姿态，福珞很可能进京陪伴明诗；明蕙在紧紧巴结明秀福,
