1、Learning aim:,Introduce the steps to write a composition.Lead the students to write a compostion following the steps,Revision,我要强调的是自信在我们的成功中起着重要的作用。我不仅学会了要欣赏自己而且还要同情别人。不管未来遇到多么大的困难，我们都应该尽力去克服。不管你进行哪种运动，你都可以通过用环保设备或购买回收材料制品来使它变得更环保。,1. 我要强调的是自信在我们的成功中起着重要的作用。2. 我不仅学会了要欣赏自己而且还要同情别人。3. 不管未来遇到多么大的困难，我们
2、都应该尽力去克服。4.不管你从事哪种运动，你都可以通过用环保设备或购买回收材料制品来使它变得更环保。,What I want to stress is that confidence plays an important role in our success,I learned not only to appreciate myself but to have deep sympathy for others.,No matter what difficulties we meet with in future, we should also try to overcome them.,Wh
3、atever sport you take up, you can make it greener by using environment-friendly equipment and buying products made from recycled materials.,高考英语作文评分标准,第五档(很好)；(25-30分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达
4、到了预期的写作目的。,Step1 Decide on the structure,假如你是地球，人类对你的过度开发和破坏使你现在对自己和人类的未来感到担忧。请给人类写一封信表示你的担忧并就如何保护地球提出有效的建议。,Para1 Para2 Para3,Show your worry and the purpose of your letter.Give your suggestions.Write a summary to end your letter,Im the Earth, who are suffering from your destruction seriously now.
5、Long long ago, with no life on me I felt very lonely. But later, some plants developed in the water and provided the oxygen to the development of all kinds of animal. Finally, about 2.6 million years ago, it is your turn to spread over the world. Although you are developing so fast, more and more in
6、fluence you have made to make me weak. So, here I want to give you some suggestions to protect myself as well as to make sure of your existence in the years to come.,Long long ago, with no life on me I felt very lonely. But later, some plants developed in the water and provided the oxygen to the dev
7、elopment of all kinds of animal. Finally, about 2.6 million years ago, it is your turn to spread over the world. Although you are developing so fast, more and more influence you have made to make me weak. So,Tips :Make it clear how many paragraphs you will write and avoid missing any point.2. Make s
8、ure there is no sentence that has nothing to do with the topic.,Step2 Do your brainstorming about the topic,What can we do to protect the Earth? (Group work),Tip :Pay attention to the hot topics in your daily reading. Youd better have the materials classified(整理分类) in your notebook.,假如你是地球，人类对你的过度开发
9、和破坏使你现在对自己和人类的未来感到担忧。请给人类写一封信表示你的担忧并就如何保护地球提出有效的建议。,My suggestions 1 save water, electricity, paper.2 walk intead of driving3 plant trees4 avoid using plastic bags5 buy product made by recycled material. 6 protect animals to keep natural balance,Step3 Pay attention to linking words,Most families are
10、 poor and cant afford their education. They have no choice but to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters neednt go to school. They dont let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies. Some wouldnt like to go to school.,In addition， To make matters worse，
11、To begin with， As a result， Therefore， Finally，,_Most families are poor and cant afford their education. _They have no choice but to stay at home and make money. _Some parents think daughters neednt go to school. _They dont let them go to school._Some children are not interested in their studies. _S
12、ome wouldnt like to go to school.,To begin with，,As a result，,In addition，,Therefore，,Finally，,To make matters worse，,并列 1 In the first place.，in the second place.，lastly. 2 To begin/Start with / Above all.，then/next/besides.，furthermore/in addition/moreover.，finally. 3 On the one hand.，on the other
13、 hand. 4 For one thing., and for another thing. 5 as well as; not onlybut also,Tip :The linking words you can use in your composition,因果 therefore, so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result,转折 but, however, still, yet, after all, for all that, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other
14、 hand,总结 To sum up, In brief, In short, On the whole, To conclude，All in all,递进 even； whats worse; to make things worse,Step4 Polish your article with words and sentence patterns of high level,Words,It is a good way. He does it well.,helpful; useful; effective; beneficial,try to do; try his best to
15、do; make efforts to do; spare no effort to do; take measures to do,Tips :Try to use some concrete words instead of general ones.Phrases are better than words.,Sentence pattern,Tip: Avoid using the same sentence pattern in a whole para.,There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There
16、 used to be a playground on the other side before. But there is a library now. There is a new playground in front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school.,There is There used to be But there is There is There are,On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On
17、the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building - our library. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.,On one side of the road there is On the other side, where now stands a The playground is,We have
18、 also planted a lot of trees in,Useful patterns to help youWhat we should do is We should make it our duty toIt is generally believed that as a result of whichIt is high time that we shouldOnly when we can weIt is that/who (强调句)To, wed better,使我吃惊的是这次他得了满分。What surprised me was that he got full mark
19、s this time.It made me surprised that he got full marks this time.It was surprising that he got full marks this time.He got full marks this time, which made me surprised.I was surprised that he got full marks this time.To my surprise, he got full marks this time.,Tip:To acquire this skill, you shoul
20、d practice translating one sentence in different ways. (一句多译),Step5 Correct mistakes,1.Liu Jiajia is a girl who study in Xin Hua middle school.2.But she also treat the life active and optimistic. 3.They were try their best to help you.4. Help her out is our duty.5.Last week, my teacher told us that
21、there is a nice girl in our school.,主谓一致,词性,双谓语,时态一致,动词原形作主语,Time for appreciation,Share your letter.Show your star sentences,如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,Summary,Step1 Decide on the structureStep2 Do your brainstorming about the topicStep3 Pay attention to linking wordsStep4 Polish your article Step5 Correct mistakes Handwriting,Homework,假如你是地球，人类对你的过度开发和破坏使你现在对自己和人类的未来感到担忧。请给人类写一封信表示你的担忧并就如何保护地球提出有效的建议。,
