1、高考应试作文 写作训练,正反观点对比class 1 Teacher:Jiang Hui,假如你是李华，作为一个高三学生,自习课的利用效率问题备受教师和学生的关注。上周你班召开了“教师是否应该在自习课讲课”的班级讨论会。请你用英语把下面的讨论结果写出来，并写出你的观点。,Bad sample,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,对比鲜明,写作基本要求,1.字数达到要求。2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。 4.标点正确。 5.文章内容是否切题 。6.格式正确。,高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（很好）（2125分） 完全完成了试题规定的
2、任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考书面表达评分标准,How to polish your Writing,审,抄,列,四步,How to polish your Writing,润,润,本文属于_，基本时态是_，人称用_,议论文,一般现在时,第一和第三人称,审题,抓要点，列提纲-文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,构思-文章结构,Last week, our c
3、lass held a discussion about whether teachers should teach in free class.Different people have different opinions对自习课讲课有两种态度. (2) 态度一: .26%的学生赞同原因（1）原因（2） (3)态度二: 74%的学生反对。原因（1） 原因（2）， (4)我的观点: 学生应该形成自己的学习习惯 ,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,表示不同观点的套语,Paragraph1 总起:Different people hold/ have different opinions.P
4、eople have taken different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.There are two opposite opinions about it.,paragrap 2表达赞同观点of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for the idea think Some people believe that ,表达反对的观点:On the contrary, of them hold a different vie
5、w. of them hold the opposite opinion. However, each coin has two sides. On the other hand, people that .,object,(4)你的观点: ,in my view / opinion, I agree with, As for me, As far as Im concerned,总结： in brief, in a word, in summary,How to polish your Writing,构思-短语,watch overcant control themselves have
6、no control over themselves dont know how to study be poor at schoolwork be weak in subjects,观点一（1）教师讲课能帮助监督自控能力较差的学生. （2）教师讲课对于不知怎么学习并且成绩差的学生是个帮助,构思-短语,观点二(1) 学生应该利用自习课复习，练习和预习 。 （2）教师占用时间讲课不公平。,make use of take advantage of go over their lessons/reviewdo exercises previewprepare ones lessonstake up
7、 so much free class Its unfair for students,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,what is more; in addition；besides, more over,however; on the contrary,therefore; as a result; because,like; unlike, on the other hand,to sum up ; all in all,1. 表示递进,2. 表示转折,How to polish your Writing,3. 表示因果,4. 表示对比,5. 表示总结,:,26% of the student
8、s _ the opinion. (赞同） They are _ weak in subjects _ they cant control themselves.（不但而且） * _, （与之相反） 74% of them _. (持有不同/相反的观点）,小试牛刀：衔接词,are in favour of,are for,not only,but also,On the contrary,hold a different view.,hold the opposite opinion,_, (在我看来）students should form a good habit of studying
9、by themselves _ (而不是） depending on teachers.,In my opinion,Personally speaking,As far as Im concerned,instead of,句式-化腐朽为神奇,They think that teachers teach in free class is not suitable. They thought teachers take time to speak lessons is unfair to them,It is + adj /n+(for sb). to do when If,take up,t
10、each,*,Teachers teach in free class is a good idea.,Students have time to check their lessons . .,句式-化腐朽为神奇 名词性从句,We should value what we have,句式：强调句和倒装句,I,Only in this way can you solve this problem.,Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,It was in the streeet that we met L
11、ily.,小试牛刀：句式 (强调, 倒装, ),Students can have time to check their lessons in free class.,词汇层面,1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。 2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。,使用较高级的词汇,. 读书对心灵有益。,Reading is good for our mind. Reading does good to our mind Reading is beneficial to our mind. Readingis of great benefit t
12、o our mind.,Students can enrich their knowledge Stuents can have a good command of their knowledge,Students can learn their knowledge,Homework,仿写文,How to polish your Writing,2018/9/16,假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该容易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。 30%赞成偏难，反对偏易 1喜欢挑战，越难越好； 2有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。 反方观点 70%赞成偏易，反对偏难 1题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考； 2题目容易，易获高分，有自信。 注意：1词数120左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,
