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1、学案八 吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式,写作运用探究,写作时,如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次,只选用一些普通的词,或一律使用简单句平铺直叙,那么习作就会显得呆板、单调,没有可读性。要想写出高分作文,不仅要把要求表述清楚,而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。如能运用恰当,哪怕只用上一、两处,也会为习作增添色彩,给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。,一、运用高级词汇三原则 1.标新立异,恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇,会彰显自己的水平。 高考佳句 Ill thank you if you think about my suggestion. Ill appreciate it i

2、f you take my suggestion into consi-deration.(福建高考满分作文),I received your email last week,but I am busy preparing for my final exam,which is important for me,so I didnt reply to you without delay. I received your email last week,but I am busy preparing for my final exam,which is vital for me,so I didn

3、t reply to you without delay.(山东高考满分作文) As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.(辽宁高考标准范文) Well try our best to improve the working conditions. Well spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山东高考标准范文),2.短语优先,写作中,要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力,多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,会使短文内容丰

4、富,表达更有力度,增添文采。 高考佳句 To achieve ones dream,one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. To achieve ones dream,one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考满分作文),Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we face,and

5、 release our pressure from different aspects. Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we are faced with,and release our pressure from different aspects.(重庆高考满分作文) To tell you the truth,I dont really like your new novel. To tell you the truth,I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考满分作文),3.手

6、法多样,在表达相同或相近的意思时,要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词,用其他相应的词或短语来代替,这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。实在找不到,可以变更说法,“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。 高考佳句 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.(江西高考满分作文),It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite d

7、ifferent from the way of education of China. It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考满分作文),【即时演练】 用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语 1.We all have the same opportunity. 2.More and more visitors have been attracted to this place. 3.The teacher directed the gifted stu

8、dents towards the more difficult courses. 4.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. 5.I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. 6.Would you please help me to turn down the radio? 答案 1.possess 2.An increasing number of 3.challenging 4.promote 5.put up with 6.do me a fa

9、vor,二、运用高级句式的七大策略 1.运用被动语态,重点更鲜明,高考佳句 We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015. About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(广东高考书面表达),Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art e

10、xhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ideas. Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to se

11、lecting the location for the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(上海高考满分作文),2.运用强调句,重点更突出,高考佳句 The people who obey the rules matter. It is the people who obey the rules that matter.(2015江苏,书面表达) Without hesitation,I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day. With

12、out hesitation,I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.(2015浙江,标准范文),Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us,which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us,which indeed deserves our appreciation

13、 and reward.(重庆高考满分作文),3.运用倒装句,语言更活泼,高考佳句 It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples lives. Not only does it affect our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives.(2015江苏,书面表达),I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. So excited was I that I

14、couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.(2014福建,满分作文) The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way. Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(福建高考满分作文),4.运用省略句,行文更简洁,高考佳句 Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel

15、 bad. Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when feeling bad.(2014安徽,满分作文) Are you looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15:00 to 17:00. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15:00 to 17:00.(2014辽宁,满分作文),As it is schedule

16、d,English Talent Show will be held today. As scheduled,English Talent Show will be held today.(2014陕西,满分作文) Although they were faced with many problems,they didnt lose heart. Although faced with many problems,they didnt lose heart.(山东高考满分作文),5.运用感叹句,感情更强烈,高考佳句 From the expression on the face,I knew

17、my math teacher was surprised. What a surprised expression was on my math teachers face!(2015湖南,满分作文) It is a very splendid moment. How splendid a moment it is!(辽宁高考满分作文),6.运用with复合结构、分词(短语)等,结构更简明,高考佳句 Our school lies at the foot of a mountain,there is a river flowing in front of it. At the foot of

18、 a mountain lies our school,with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考满分作文) The teacher came into the lecture hall,many students followed him. The teacher came into the lecture hall,followed by many students.(广东高考满分作文),I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode awa

19、y. After picking up the case,I shouted at the man loudly,but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考满分作文),7.运用虚拟语气,表达更传神,高考佳句 I missed being hit by the car with your help. Without your help,I would have been hit by the car.(安徽高考满分作文) It is high time for both local government and residents to take effectiv

20、e measures. It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考满分作文),8.运用复合句,句式更多变,高考佳句 To our surprise,the little girl knows so many things. What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重庆高考满分作文) It was quite an experience for both of us,an

21、d I will never forget it for the rest of my life. It was quite an experience for both of us,which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.(陕西高考满分作文),9.运用it句式,表达更丰富,高考佳句 Personally,drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary. I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled wate

22、r every day.(陕西高考满分作文) 我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。,Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital. Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏,满分作文) 更糟糕的是,一些司机,骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性。,You should provide so

23、me money to fund our program,as well as offer us some practical suggestions.Thats our desire. Its our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program,as well as offer us some practical suggestions.(重庆高考满分作文) 我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金,还能提供一些实用的建议。,【即时演练】 按要求转换下列句子 7.Above all,we must do someth

24、ing to stop pollution.(用被动语态)_ 8.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用强调句)_ 9.We dont know its value until we lose health.(用倒装句)_,10.If it isnt well organized,the meeting will be a failure.(用省略句)_ 11.We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(用感叹句)_ 12.Be

25、cause there was too much noise,I couldnt go on studying.(用with复合结构)_,答案 7.Above all,something must be done to stop pollution. 8.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 9.Not until we lose health do we know its value. 10.If not well organized,the meeting wi

26、ll be a failure. 11.What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 12.With the noise going on,I couldnt go on studying.,单句跟踪演练,.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的画线部分 1.He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. 2.Developing very quickly,the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication. 3.When

27、 you are bored with the people sometimes,youd better find a quiet place,listening to some classical music. 4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class.,5.Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house. 6.As soon as he arrived,he began his research. 答案 1.determined/made up his

28、mind 2.gives rise to 3.fed up with 4.turned a deaf ear to 5.I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me 6.On/Upon his arrival,.按要求转换下列句子 1.I didnt take his advice,so I failed in the exam.(用虚拟语气)_ 2.If it is so,I hope you will have a wonderful time.(用省略句)_ 3.We can achieve our goal in this way.(用倒装

29、句)_,4.Much to our surprise,Mary failed in the final exam.(用名词性从句)_ 5.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(用短语代替从句)_ 6.If you go through the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(用并列句)_,答案 1.If I had taken his advice,I wouldnt have failed in the exam. 2.If so,I hope you w

30、ill have a wonderful time. 3.Only in this way can we achieve our goal. 4.What surprised us most is that Mary failed in the final exam. 5.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable. 6.Go through the gate,and youll find the entrance to Bear Country.,.根据汉语提示完成句子 1._ if you could teach me ho

31、w to use the computer.(陕西高考满分作文)如果你能教我如何用电脑,我将不胜感激。 2._ I wont believe him.无论他说什么,我都不会相信他了。(安徽高考满分作文) 3._,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits,sharing our stories.(辽宁高考满分作文)美丽的月亮高挂在天空,我们坐在一起吃着月饼和水果,一块分享我们的故事。 4._ about his condition.我是多么担心他的境况呀!(湖北高考满分作文),5._,they didnt lose heart.(江苏高考满分作文

32、)虽然面对那么多的问题,他们并没有灰心丧气。 6._ words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(湖北高考标准范文)直到那时我才意识到话语在积极和消极这两种方式上是很有力量的。 7.From this experience,I realized that _.(2014新课标全国,满分作文)从这次经历,我意识到是热情导致了我的成功。 8._ to solve the problem as soon as possible.(广东高考标准范文)应当尽快采取措施来解决这个问题。,答案 1.Id appreciate it 2.Whatever/No matter what he says 3.With the beautiful moon up in the sky 4.How worried I am 5.Although/Though faced with so many problems 6.Not until then did I realize 7.it was enthusiasm that led to my success 8.Effective measures should be taken,

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