1、 四级真题议论文作文范文及点评 (2000 字)2008年 6月份四级作文真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Apology according to the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1.娱乐活动多种多样2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3.作为大学生，我的看法。范文一：恩波版Recreati
2、onal activities and study do not contradict each other, in fact, they complement each onter. As the saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. A life burdened with study and work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work. On the other hand, prope
3、r recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotion.What I usually do to relax after school is jogging and seeing movies. Uaually I don?t spare time for exercise ,but I value the physical education class at sc
4、hool. Jogging several rounds in field certainly relieves the days pressure. On weekends,. I?ll catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel a vived and energetic for another week?s work-load.To sum up, I strongly voice all the evidence justifies an unshakable view that our trans-century c
5、ollege students should choose recreational activities appropriately. Therefore, in a sense , only when we pay close attention to it can we see a meaningful extraordinary and harmonious future sooner or later.范文二：昂立版Recreational activityIn people?s daily life, there are various recreational activitie
6、s apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately. On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communic
7、ation and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far
8、as I?m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.范文三:江涛版Recreational ActivitiesIn the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people thi
9、nk those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such ashiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.However, some
10、people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work.In my opinion, we should pay more a
11、ttention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.范文四:交大外院版Recreational Activities21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of re
12、creational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation. So I?d like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities.It goes without saying that various activitie
13、s brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us. With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them - a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web ca
14、m. The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships.As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice and
15、 exert more discipline. We?d better take advantage of good online recreationalactivities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.Recreational ActivitiesW
16、ith the development of living standard, people spend more time on various forms of recreational activities. People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.Recreational activities are good to people?s health, both physically
17、 and mentally. Sports and dancing can keep people fit. Singing karaoke, playing video games or online games can satisfy people?s imagination. Surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge.However, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted. Spending to
18、o much time on recreational activities will seriously influence people?s normal lives, especially work and study. Therefore, people will benefit from recreational activities only if they take part in them properly.范文五: 新东方版Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational act
19、ivities can by no means be ignored. It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, that help to make campus life colorful and diversified.Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have tr
20、ouble to choose the proper ones. As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students? clubs to recruit new members. There are two opposite viewsabout recreational activities. One says they exert positive influence on a student?s physical and mental development, for they can explore a s
21、tudent?s talent, develop a students ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent. While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.As for me, I hold a belief t
22、hat recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development. Recreational activities do give us a good ch
23、ance. And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.作文考试类型在具体分析此次四级作文题目之前，笔者先对历年四级作文考题的类型做个共性的研究。从类型上讲，历年考题大致可以分成四大类：1正反对比论证2现象原因，问题解决3图表4应用文(书信、演讲、海报等)在上述四类题型中，最后一类是最近几年才出现在四、六级考试中的文体，主要考查考生的英语表达基本功和写作实力，很难有固定模式可言。但是另外三类是四级考
24、试的传统题型，出现频率非常高，可以把握的规律性很强。这次四级作文题目明显属于第一类，是历次作文中比较简单的一次，即针对某种社会问题，提出两种对立观点，最后要求作者阐述自己的观点。这类题型最早是从美国的托福作文题型借鉴而来，后来被四、六级考试广泛借鉴。但是自 2005年 6月份之后，由于其自身的古老性和模板化，该题型曾一度让位于其他题型，而今它再次活跃于四级作文考试的舞台。真题评析2008年 6月份四级作文的标题和提纲如下：Recreational Activities1娱乐活动多种多样2娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3作为大学生我的看法从结构上看，此次四级考试作文提纲还是那种既经典又保
25、守的“三段式”：第一段是一个非常典型的现象引入段，阐述背景，交代需要分析的一种现象；第二段列举两种对立观点，进行正反对比论证；第三段是传统的“我的看法”段，即表明作者自己的观点和态度。就此次作文题目而言，我们可以在第一段中大致地介绍一下如今的信息社会。第一句可以用一个标准的现象引入句，第二句开始说明如今娱乐活动的多种多样。在文章第二段，先阐释正面的观点，列举娱乐活动带来的好处。这其中考生们要注意自己的立场，同时要注意各个理由之间的逻辑关系，适当地运用表示层次关系的词语。正面观点阐述完毕后，对娱乐活动可能带来的危害性，可以用一两句话略写，同时附以一两条理由作为理论支持。最后，在结尾段中，用简单明
26、了的语言表明作者的态度即可。对于正反对比论证结构的作文，笔者建议写的时候把握好以下三个要点 (以本次四级考试作文题目为例)：第一，在作为引言的第一段中，我们一般要通过各种方法为第二段的主体讨论作铺垫。这些方法主要包括：背景介绍法、大意总结法、引用名言法、场景描写法、设问法等。其中最通用也最好用的方法就是背景介绍法。切忌在文章一开始就进行深入分析，要先简单地引入介绍，然后循序渐进地转入分析。简言之，首句引出话题，如：娱乐活动在社会上引起了热烈讨论(The issue of recreational activities has triggered a heated discussion in t
27、he society)；第二句具体说明现状，如：越来越多的人热衷于参加娱乐活动(Increasing numbers of people are fond of taking part in various recreational activities)。常见问题：用词匮乏。如：more and more, join 等。基本对策：改词换词。如：an increasing number of, take part in等。第二，在第二段进行正反两方面论述的时候，考生要注意保持客观的态度，把两方面的观点表达清楚。论述的侧重点可以落在多数群体的观点上。在展开论证的时候，提倡具体形象地论证说明，反
28、对笼统抽象地论述观点，所以可以通过说原因或举例子的方式使文章显得生动。常见问题：结构不清，缺乏层次感。基本对策：利用“总分”结构，分如下三个层次进行论证。层次 1：将中文提纲句“娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性”翻译成英文放在第二段段首作为总起句，做到开门见山：No one could fail to notice both the favorable and unfavorable influence that recreational activities bring to people. 层次2：接下来说明“娱乐活动的益处” ，然后用一到两条理由去支持该观点：Recreationa
29、l activities are good to peoples health, both physically and mentally.这其中考生要注意自己所站的立场，以及各理由之间的逻辑关系，在必要的地方添加表示层次关系的连接词。层次 3：接着考生要大胆地推翻前面所述的一些人的观点，用转折性的词语引出另一些人的观点，即“娱乐活动的危害性” 。在这个层次中我们同样遵循前文的标准，给出一到两条理由作为理论支持，如：Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously affect peoples normal liv
30、es, especially work and study.第三，第三段要求考生表明个人看法，这里考生可以围绕“取其精华，去其糟粕”的论点，表明针对多样的娱乐活动，可以利用其好处，对不好的地方避而远之：We might as well learn how to avoid some negative effects of recreational activities, when making the most of them.常见问题：用语过于直白或极端。如：We must.基本对策：要站在中庸的立场上，客观地评价。如：From my perspective, we should pay m
31、ore attention to the advantages of various recreational activities.“Rome was not built in a day.”要写出好的英语作文不是一朝一夕能够做到的，需要循序渐进和长期的训练。相信只要各位考生扎实训练基本功，必能在四级写作考试中取得好成绩。最后，附上四级写作范文一篇，供大家参考。 范文Recreational ActivitiesIt is a striking fact that the issue of recreational activities has triggered a heated disc
32、ussion. In the era of information and technology, increasing numbers of people are fond of taking part in various recreational activities (ranging from watching TV, playing cards to surfing the Internet and so on).Yet, no one could fail to notice both the favorable and unfavorable influence that rec
33、reational activities bring to people, because even Achilles has his weakness. On the one hand, recreational activities are good to peoples health, both physically and mentally. For instance, sports and dancing can keep people fit, and surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and kn
34、owledge. On the other hand, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously affect peoples normal lives, especially work and study.From my perspective, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreati
35、onal activities. Meanwhile, we might as well learn how to avoid some negative effects of recreational activities when making the most of them.上海理工大学外语学院 贾从永转载自大学英语杂志2008年 6月 21日的大学英语四级考试已落下帷幕。这次考试的作文题目又是密切联系生活的大众话题相信同学们都有话可说。出题的形式又是最常用的汉语提纲式，暗示了文章的框架，只需按照提纲顺序写就可敷衍成文。但如何安排文章内容，还需斟酌，印勿匆匆厂笔，离题万里。从这次作文的
36、要求可看出第一点宜扩展成文章的引言段。最力便的写法是以描述现象开头，即先用一、两句话简要叙述娱乐活动的多样性，然后顺势引出主题。提纲第二点可扩展为主体段。虽然提纲中提到了“受益”和“危害”两个方面，但笔者以为：由于本文应阐明人们该如何娱乐或者参加怎样的娱乐活动，故不妨把较多笔墨花在阐述 ：?危害?上。因为将不当娱乐的危害讲清，文章的主旨就水到渠成：大学生应该选择有利于身心的娱乐活动。主体段是文章的核心，最能展示考生的英语功底，既要内容详实，沦证有力，又要在结构上有层次感、连贯性。首先，要有内在逻辑性。比如，在分析原因时，可沿着由表及里、由浅人深、由远而近的顺序；在分析后果叫，可按照由小到大、由
37、轻到重、由直接到间接的顺序。在英语写作中，要 write in and in，不要 write on and on.此外，适当地使用过渡词语是加强文章的连贯性和层次感的外在手段。过渡词语就像粘 合剂，起着承上启下、穿针引线的作用，可以使内容联系更为紧密，层次更为分明。比如，本文主体段的第三句中使用了转折副词 however，就顺畅地从第一、二句的益处转到对危害的阐述。再如，本段从论述对身体的危害过渡到论述对思想的危害时用了worse，二者之间的层递关系便一目了然。按照提纲的要求，第三点宜：扩展成文章的结尾段。结尾段要紧扣提纲，即从大学生自身的角度简要说明自己的看法和做法，注意人称要转为第一人称
38、“我” 。从文章引言段末尾的反问，经过主体段的分析论证，文章的主题已呼之欲山，结尾段用一句话点明主题即可。其次，结尾段还要注意与主体段内容的呼应，在结尾段中作者认为娱乐活动应该“既使人轻松又富有教益” ，暗含主体段中的不当娱乐刘人身心的危害。总之，结尾段的写作要取豹尾之势，宜干脆利落，忌拖泥带水，一般不要超过二句话。下面是笔者撰写的例文。2008年 6月 21日大学英语四级考试作文试题：1，娱乐活动各种各样。2，娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。3作为大学生，我认为-Recreational ActivitiesWith booming economy and rising living
39、 standard of its people, China is now home to a vas array of recreational activities. Clamorous merrymakers flock to bars, internet cafes, dancing hall and nightclubs on weekend nights. Some claim that the Chinese are happier than ever before. But are they?It is no doubt that recreational activities
40、, if well chosen, play an indispensable part in our lives. They provide an outlet for our pent-up frustrations and energies, an occasion for networking and a showcase for our acting talent. However, recreations that are poorly chosen could bring harm to us, either physically or ideologically; or bot
41、h. For example, over-night internet surfing or online chatting among some college students may cause difficulties for them to stay focused in class the next day. Worse are those who frequent nightclubs or bars that charge high fees for indecent performances such as kissing competition or even strip
42、show.As a college student, I believe that recreational activities should be both relaxing and enlightening. For me, a weekend dance on campus, a one-day excursion to the beach, or a trip to a painting exhibition will leave me fresh as a daisy.2008年 6月 21日四级考试的写作部分考查的依旧是熟悉的老题型，而且是最古老的题型。从话题上看，今年的题目延续
43、了往年的校园生活以及与考生们息息相关的娱乐活动话题，而并非众多考生押题时准备的社会时事话题，如奥运志愿者倡议书、汶川地震等。这一命题思路也提醒着广大考生，四、六级考试的写作题目还是和考研写作一样，关注的往往是社会的“次热点”话题。因此，在备考四、六级作文时，考生们不要把复习重点放在猜题、押题上，而应该扎扎实实地提高自己的语言水平、丰富自己的词汇量、积累经典句型，并把这些作为提升写作水平的根本途径。其他类似结构的作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the top
44、ic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习3. 你对于网络的看法The InternetIn the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society. With the Internet, its easy to g
45、et the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We cant deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teen
46、agers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet. Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers
47、how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.2008年 12月四级作文真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the o
48、utline given below:1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义范文Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic BagsDisposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. When we wentshopping at supermarkets and departments stores, shopping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while, l
49、ife without them seemed unimaginable for most of us.However, disposable plastic bags do bring severe damage to our environment. Costumers usually threw them away after use, and because they are thin and hard to decompose, these plastic products will exist for a long time. This is an immediate threat to our earth and water.Nowadays, the government has passed relevant regulations for limiting the use of disposable plastic bags: they are not free any more. In some shopping places, in order to invoke the public awareness of environmental protection, plastic bags are offered in a
