1、【英语】英语书面表达专项及解析一、英语书面表达1 面表达假 你是某英文 “Teenagers栏”目的 Betty ，日前收到了Lucy 的来信。她在信中 了她的 ， 你根据Lucy 的来信，用英 写一封90 左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。Dear Lucy,I m sorry to know that you aren t allowed to read eBooks._All the best!Betty【答案】 Dear Lucy,I m sorry to know that you aren t allowed to read eBooks.In recen
2、t years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.How
3、ever, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product.
4、 I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. All the best!Betty【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如in recent years ，as a productof， live in ， more and more ， so that， for example ， do harm to ， be harmful to ，in my opinion ， take the place of ， inste
5、ad of 等。同 For one thing, / For another,/ However, 等使短文的叙述很有条理，而 It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are soconvenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation whichis harmful to peoples body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read corr
6、ectly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school ）和走读（ a d
7、ay school）两类学校的选择。请你以 “A boarding school or a day school为题。”写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意： 1. 词数 ;100 词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We are going to
8、graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day
9、school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（ a boar
10、ding school ）和走读（ a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of 、I
11、f we choose a boarding school 、 At the same time 、 As for me, I prefer a boarding school 、 payattention to 、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。3诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。
12、因此，Lingling 很生气，并且不愿接受Daming 的道歉。请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise 为题”，内容要点如下：1、简述事件； 2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming 一些建议。注意：1、词数 80100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people wh
13、o break their promise.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people whobut ， so，break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was rea
14、lly his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling s an
15、ger, but also made her lo trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. WhatDaming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文 一篇稿件，需要学生通 大明和玲玲之 ，
16、大明没有信守承 的事情， 自己的看法。信守承 是中 民族的 美德，在写作 程中，注意文章 构，先写出大明和玲玲之 的事情，然后再 自己 此的看法。【 解】首先，第一句 直接点明作者的 点，大明是犯 了的。然后仔 述了事情 生的 。接下来 出自己 此事件的看法，不信守承 会 致失去 人的信任， 大明的建 是除了 之外， 需要再次保 永不再犯。【点睛】文章 构清晰，符合 ，先表明自己 点，然后 述事情，提出自己的 点和建 。整篇文章在 篇布局上，比 密。除此之外，中 也使用了一些 接 ，例如because of 等，使文章更加通 。4 面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇 Changes in Our
17、 Hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章内容必 包含所 的所有信息开 已 出，不 入 数内容要点： 去 在1旧房1高楼2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狭窄（ narrow ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5居住条件（ living conditions ）差5生活越来越好， 境（ environment ）越来越舒适6 你的感想 （写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our h
18、ometown 【答案】 Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. Bu
19、t now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by
20、car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life. s still important to remembe【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，betteran
21、d better ， more and more 等。而 I think its still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life. 等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5书面表达难忘的初中
22、三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意 :1. 数 90 左右。短文的开 已 你写好，不 入 数;2.短文 包括所有要点，并 充相关信息，可适当 。 言 、通 ;3.短文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself
23、.【答案】 How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared ha
24、ppiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn t havegooda sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore
25、, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】 分析：本篇 面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life ，” 合本 所 的写作信息， 述自己 忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般 去 和一般将来 ，注意一些常 句式的 用。写作中注意 、固定短 的交
26、替使用，使文意 接 密， 要注意使用丰富的 句，注意叙述 序，符合 关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文 构 凑，要点 全， 言 。文中not onlybut also，help a lot ，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, usedto, make sb.+adj.， therefore, be proud of 等 （ ）恰当使用，使上下文意 接 密；文章的最后 I hope one day, my school and t
27、eachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少， 得学 。6 境保 人人有 ，如果我 每一个人都能珍 美 地球保 自然 源，相信我 的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为”主 的征文活 。假如你是李 ， 用英 写一篇短文投稿， 我 面 的主要 境 是什么， 改善 境我 能做什么，以及你的期望。提示 ：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示 ： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can w
28、e do in ourdaily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems._【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on. I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot
29、. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we canmake a big difference
30、. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：save energy； brush our teeth； put it into different bins；take action ； make a bigdifference 。句型： When we see
31、litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different binsAlthough each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。；【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction ； make a big diffe
32、rence 。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。7假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提
33、示问题：When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing._Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【答案】
34、Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy th
35、e special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. Youd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：这
36、是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。3. 高分亮点：短语： school gate； invite sb. to do ； a lot of ； plan to do 。句型： not onlybut also； Youd better；Im looking forward to。8 面表达假如你是英 俱 部的
37、Cathy,上周五你 收到了外教Angel 同学 网 的英文 籍。俱 部的同学 很喜 网 种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流 后的感受。 你根据以下信息 , 给 Angel 写一封 子 件，告 她俱 部的活 情况，并 网 的好 。写作要点：1 表达收到 后的喜悦与感激之情。2 介 活 的情况：（ l ）上周五，俱 部成 一起 英文 。（ 2）本周五的下午 3 点，大家将共同交流 的体会。（ 3）同学 将在下个月网 其他的英文 。3 一 网上 有什么好 。写作要求：1 不得使用真 的姓名和学校名。2 可适当加入 ，使内容充 ，行文 。3 字迹工整、 言精 、表达准确、条理清晰。4 至少 80 。D
38、ear Angel,How are you doing?Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】 Dear Angel,How are you doing? I m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. Weare grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。Last Friday， we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then
39、 we aregoing to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us arefond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet nextmonth. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper thanthose in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we n
