1、,英语书面表达专项辅导,English Composition,新的课程标准中关于五级水平（即初中毕业要求达到的水平）的要求是： A.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材； B.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改； C.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系； D.能简单描述人物或事件； E.能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。,新课程标准中关于写的要求,1.审题 2.抓点 3.造句 4.成文 5.改错 6.抄写,书面表达六步法:,书面表达六步法,一、审题认真审题，确定时态人称，同时注意题材格式。时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现
2、在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。格式：掌握正确的应用文书写格式，如书信，日记等。,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点 根据试题内容，列出要表达的要点，找出能体现要点的词、短语和句型 。,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句造句时应做到尽量使用课本上常见的词汇、句型。句子宜短不宜长，句型宜简不宜繁，也要适当插入一些宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以增强短文的逻辑性。要拓宽遣词造句的思路，多运用一句多译。,掌握多种变通方式，可以用一句多译的练习来达成。,(1).I spent twenty yuan on my new watc
3、h.(2).The new watch cost me twenty yuan(3).I paid twenty yuan for the new watch.,如“我花二十元买了块新手表”可以译为：,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文写好之后，还应注意句与句之间、段与段之间的连接过渡，在需要的地方加上过渡词或短语.,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,英语书面表达常见错误： 1.单词拼写错误2.时态、语态错误3.句子结构错误4.单复数错误5.主谓一致错误6.中式英语,找出下列句子错误并订正：,Correction!,改正：Everyone in our class works hard.（主谓一致错误）
4、,1.Everyone in our class work hard.,Correction!,2.We can get many informations by reading newspapers.,改正：We can get much information by reading newspapers.（不可数名词由much修饰）,Correction!,3.There has many programs in TV.,改正：There are many programs on TV. （There be句型和介词短语）,Correction!,4.I think ride a bike
5、 can keep us healthy.,改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy. （动名词作主语）,Correction!,5.My school built in 1989.,改正：My school was built in 1989.（语态错误）,Correction!,改正：We planted trees in the park last weekend. （时态错误）,6.we plant trees in the park last weekend.,Correction!,第六步 誊写,格式对，人称吻；字数够，时态准；书写好
6、，立意高；好句多，关联妙；段落清，标点到。,Tips,书面表达六步法,六、抄写 检查后，将草稿抄写在纸上，注意书写要清晰、整洁！,书面表达六步法,He has short straight hair. He is of medium height. He wears glassesHe is a famous actor and singerHe is very popular. He loves telling jokes. He is funny.,Discussion： Lets describe the following person!,模拟训练,根据以下提示写一篇人物简介： 姓名：
7、小沈阳 生日：1981年5月7日 出生地：辽宁省铁岭市 职业：演员、歌手 喜欢的活动：游泳、看电影、唱歌 主要从艺经历：2006年拜师赵本山，2009年参加中央电视台春节联欢晚会，出演小品不差钱，从此成名。 提示词：Spring Festival Gala Evening 春节联欢晚会,Xiao Shenyang is a famous actor and singer. He is of medium height with short staight hair.On May 7th,1981,he was born in Tieling,Liaoning province.When he
8、was young,he was interested in acting plays.In 2006,he became a student of Zhao Benshan. Later,he took part in the Spring Festival Gala Evening in2009,and acted the short play Buchaqian .After that,he was well-known all over the country.Xiao Shenyang likes swimming and singing,as well as watching mo
9、vies. He also loves telling jokes.He is very funny.I like him very much.,小结：书面表达六步法,Homework:,模拟写作题目：The teacher I never forget 提示：1、老师的特点（长相、性格、爱好等）2、老师对你的帮助和影响3、表达你对老师的感激和祝福,How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and
10、 teachers. The teacher I never forget is.,Thank you,How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr Liu, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in
11、class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr Liu noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved. I must say many thanks to Mr Liu. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!,
