1、 中小学个性化辅导专家 新目标八年级英语下书面表达复习指导第1单元本单元的考点：运用将来时预测未来，如未来的家乡，未来人们或是你的生活。一定要注意将来时的运用。写地方你可以用以下句子开头I am from Its a beautiful city with green mountains and two big river.I think in ten years, the road will be wider and cleaner. (我想十年后，.的马路会更宽、更干净)，There will be more tree in the mountains.(山上会有更多的树)，The peo
2、ple in will be much happier.等等范文： In the future I think my life will be more interesting and our world will become more beautiful. Maybe I will be a teacher and make friends with my students. Also I will live in an apartment with my parents. Of course I will have a lovely pet dog, because I think do
3、gs are friendly to people. During the week I will wear a suit to look smart. But on the weekend Ill dress more casually. Oh, I will travel a lot . I would like to visit many English-speaking countries like America and Australiaa.第2单元本单元的考点：谈论遇到的问题或困扰，或者回复求助信，当人家遇到困难时，给别人真诚的建议。主要用到 could do 和 should
4、do 一般以There are a lot of things you could do.(你有很多可以做的事情) 开头。然后以 I think you should (could)来组织整篇文章。常见的建议有：(1)you should say sorry. (2) you should write a letter. (3) you could buy him a gift. (4) you should have a talk with him to communicate better. (5) you should find a part-time job.等等最后，别忘了在信的结尾
5、写上 Good luck. 祝人家好运。范文：假如你叫王磊，你和同桌李明发生了争吵，事后你很后悔，想和他从归于好，但又不知道该怎么做。请给你的笔友发一封电子邮件，寻求他的建议。Dear Tom, Im very upset. I need your help. Li Ming is my deskmate. We get on well all the time. But yesterday I argued with him for an unimportant thing. And I shouted at him. After that he didnt talk to me . I h
6、ope he will get over it. I want to be friends with him again. But I dont know what to do . Could you give me some advice please？Many thanks. Yours sincerely Wang Lei第3单元本单元的考点：谈论过去的事情，是一定要用过去进行时，来表示当过去某事发生的时候，某某正在做某事。而同学们千万不要忘了过去进行时的格式 was (were) + doing，而且过去发生的短暂的动作一定要到一般过去时。 （注意以下句子划线处）例如：When the
7、 accident happened, Sam was taking a shower, Nick was watching TV. Then they helped the injured people together. (当事故发生时，山姆正在洗澡，尼克正在看电视，然后他们一起去帮助伤者)范文：昨晚七点开始下雨，请你描述一下当时你和你的家人分别在做些什么。 It began to rain at about 7:00 yeaterdat evening. At that time I was doing my homework in my bedroom. And my sister w
8、as playing with her favorite toy doll. My father was watching TV. He was watching CCTV news.My mother was washing dishes in the kitchen.第4单元本单元的考点是 转述 （直接引语转为间接引语）他人的话。其作文的考察要点一般是转述别人的话或评价。课本30页上的课文可能对你会有很大的帮助。 但是请一定要注意：转述时，如果前面的是过去时，后面从句部分切记用和过去相关的时态！I got my report card. I did OK this time. My Chi
9、nese teacher said I could do better. My math teacher said I was clever. MY English teacher said I was hard-working.(我接到我的成绩册了。我这次做得不错。我语文老师说我可以做得更好，数学老师说我聪明，用语老师说我很努力)等等范文：Dear aunt I got my report card yeaterday. I did OK in some subjects. My math teacher said I was hard-working. My Spanish teacher
10、 said I was good at speaking. And another good news is that my geography teacher said I did well in writing. I found science very difficult this term. So my worst report was from my science teacher. He said I was a lazy student. But its not true. Well, thats all for now.第5单元 本单元的考点 假设if （真实性条件状语从句）。
11、 而这单元作文的考察要点，往往和1单元的 一般将来时 相结合。特别是命题为：你长大了、毕业了想当什么？如果你成了，你将会。（特别注意，主句将来时，从句一般现在时） 例如： I want to be a pilot after leaving school. If I become a pilot, I will visit different places in the world and make different friends. It will open up my eyes to the outside world. （我毕业以后想当一名飞行员。 如果我成了飞行员，我会参观不同的地方
12、，交不同的朋友，开拓我的眼界） 等等。范文： 如果将来你很有钱，你会如何帮助他人 If I have a lot of money ,I will buy what I need and do what I always want to do. For example traveling around the world.studying outside China,buying my parents a big apartment. I hope my dream will come true. Of course I will do something helpful to others.
13、 I will give away money to charities. I will help those kids who are too poor to go to school. Unit 2 书面表达 如何写有关提建议的短文在英语学习中，我们常常会遇到针对某人，某事或某种活动提出建议的写作要求。写作时，首先要弄清楚题目提出的问题是什么，根据问题应提出哪些合理的建议，再用常用的提建议的句型进行写作。 以下为提建议的常用句型：1. You could do. 你可以做.2. Maybe you should do.也许你应该.3. I think you should do.我认为你应
14、该.4. You shouldnt do.你不应该做.5. I think youd better do .我认为你最好做.6. Why dont you do.? =Why not do.?你为什么不做.？写这类文章时要注意语气委婉,有礼貌且有条理。首先对提建议的对象所表达的观点表示赞同或反对，然后可采用列点式的方法将自己的观点一条条列出。无论采用哪种方式，都要将自己的观点有条理的呈现。最后，应用总结性的语言陈述自己的观点。典型例题分析：一，假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们该为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。请你根据下列的表格提示，将同学们的建议写一封信告诉你的笔友David,并谈谈你的
15、想法及理由。一些同学建议全班筹钱为学校图书馆买书或为学校买其他东西。另外一些同学建议无需花钱，好好学习，让学校以我们为荣。你的想法及理由.注意：不少于80词。 Dear David, Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate.TheStudents in our class have different suggestions. Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for t
16、he school library or something else for our school. Others think that its not necessary to spend money.We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us.In my opinion ,we dont have to spend money.We can do something meaningful without money. For example,we can do some voluntary work to beautify
17、 the schools environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us.Id like to know your idea.Could you give me some advice? I look forward to hearing from you.Best wishes! Li Ming2 格林先生由于工作压力大，生活上遇到了一个难题，下面是他给心理专家Dr.John Smith 写的一封信，你能帮他写封回信，给他提出一些合理的建议，
18、使他重新恢复健康吗？要求80 词左右。提示：1.尽量不想白天的工作： 2. 睡前适当做些运动； 3.听一些音乐Dear Dr.Smith , I was healthy before,but these days I cant sleep very well.I always cant stop thinking about the work in the daytime.I dont know what I should do. Could you help me,please? Thanks a lot! Yours, Jim GreenDear Mr.Green, Im sorry to
19、 hear that you cant sleep well.There are a lot of things you could do.I can give you some advice about that. First,you should try not to think about the work in the daytime after you go to bed.Next,Youd better do some sports before you go to bed. Then ,it is good gor your sleep to listen to some mus
20、ic when you go to bed. I hope you will get better soon. Yours, John Smith书面表达：假如你叫王磊，你和同桌李明发生了争吵，事后你很后悔，想和他从归于好，但又不知道该怎么做。请给你的笔友发一封电子邮件，寻求他的建议。Dear Tom, Im very upset. I need your help. Li Ming is my classmate. We get on well all the time. But yesterday I argued with him for an unimportant thing. An
21、d I shouted at him. After that he didnt talk to me . I hope he will get over it. I want to be friends with him again. But I dont know what to do . Could you give me some advice please？Many thanks. Yours sincerely Wang Lei_ Unit 3 书面表达 如何写描述过去经历的短文对过去的事情进行描述，属于叙事记叙文。该类短文主要是记述事件，描写见闻等。写叙事记述文时，一般是开门见山地
22、直接交代时间，地点，人物，事件等。然后详细叙述事情发生的原因，过程和结果等。一个事件的组成包括许多因素，写作时要选择与题目意思相关的主要材料。 以下为描述过去经历的常用句型。1. On Sunday, I had a picnic with my parents. 星期六，我和父母一起去野餐了。2. We planned to climb the mountain on weekends.我们打算周末去爬山。3. Although we were all tired ,we enjoyed ourselves this day.今天尽管很累，但是我们玩得很高兴。4. What a terrib
23、le /happy day!多么糟糕的/快乐的一天！写叙事记叙文要注意以下几点：此类短文要求写出过去的经历，在写作时，主题要明确，文中所有的内容都要围绕主题展开；要正确运用所给词汇或提示，勿漏五要素：即时间，地点，人物，事件和结果，要正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时。注意人称和数的变化。典型例题： 在你成长的历程中，有些日子是会让你开心，经久难忘。请以“My pleasant day”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80 词左右的短文，以记叙你那天的活动和感受。提示：ways to relax TV,computer ,sports,music,shopping work homework,hous
24、ework(cooking/cleaning.) other things enough sleep,delicious food要求：（1）参考所给提示，可适当发挥 （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整 My pleasant dayI had a wonderful day yesterday.I got up very early and cleaned the room with my sister.We had breakfast,we went shopping by bike.And we bought many kinds of fruit and food.We had del
25、icious food for lunch at the restaurant.We ate hamburgers and had some drink,but I knew they were not healthy and not good for us.And it took me the whole afternoon to do my homework and wash my clothes.We felt tired,but we were very happy! It was great fun!练习： 假设有一天你和你的朋友Ted 在放学的路上看到了一个不明飞行物。你想把这一情
26、况告诉给当地一家英语报社，请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。时间：下午5点地点：大街上物体：发白光的圆形物体_ Unit 4 书面表达 如何写提纲作文提纲作文又称材料作文或提示作文，它是根据所提供的场景或材料进行写作的一种短文，它具有提醒灵活，内容易于控制，简单易写等特征，因此中考英语书面表达题多数都以这种形式出现。写这类作文时要把握以下几点：1. 仔细阅读有关提示，对题目所提供的信息一定要认真分析，明确有哪些要点，题目究竟要表达什么；2. 提示的内容是文章的总体框架，要在提示内容的范围内进行分析，构思和想像。要根据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。3. 语言表达要准确，可以适当
27、发挥，不能拘于原文要点。不能简单的只把要点翻译出来。4. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态，语言表达要符合英语习惯。典型例题分析： 假如你是王华，你的朋友张明写信向你诉苦：他的朋友刘刚喜欢花很多时间玩电脑游戏，并经常上课迟到。昨天刘刚叫他一起去玩电脑游戏，但他说要做作业，没有和刘刚一起去，于是刘刚就生他的气了。 请你根据上诉提示给张明回信，并给张明提些处理这件事的意见或建议。80 词左右。Dear Zhang Ming,Thank you for you e-mail.Im sorry to have learned that your friend Liu Gang became ang
28、ry with you.In my opinion,it was not right for Liu Gang to be mad at you when you refused to play computer games with him, I think you should have a good talk with him.First ,you should tell him it is not right for a student to be late for class.Second ,you should tell him the importance of study.As students,we should concentrate more on our studies than computer games,because theyre not only had for our studies but also bad for our health.I am sure he will understand you. Yours, Li Hua7
