1、3A教育2010中考英语书面表达（一） 记叙文,记叙文,命题特点：借助图画、标题等形式, 内容的设计主题明确，贴近学生生活，符合学生的年龄特点，具有教育意义。,Discussion,Who do you like best? Could you please say something about him/her?,记叙文写作,一、写人,以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。,要求如下： 1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。,中考题展示,记叙文写作,解题步骤：,Read Thi
2、nk Write Check,1、Read 2、Think 3、Write 4、Check,文体 要点,词汇 时态 人称,句型 过渡语,格式 词数 拼写,一、人称代词 主格 I we you he she it they 宾格 me us you him her it them it 的特殊用法 指时间: What time is it? Its eight oclock now. 指天气: It is a fine day today. It is raining cats and dogs. 指距离: Its only 15 minutes drive. How far is it fro
3、m here? 做笼统主语: Whos is it? Oh, its you, Mary. 做形式主语 : Its no use crying loudly. Its important to learn English. 做形式宾语: Do you think it difficult to keep slim?,二、物主代词 形容词性 my your his her its our their 名词性 mine yours his hers its ours theirs 1名词性物主代词跟名词一样可充当主语、表语、宾语： 作主语 Mine is a new handbag. Hers w
4、as a small room. 作表语 That car is ours. These chairs are yours. 作宾语 Look at theirs. You may use mine.,2、形容词性物主代词严格来说不是代词，是形容词，因为他们不能作别的成分，只能作前置定语 My watch is quite old now. Cant you tell me your story ? Our chairs are different from their chairs? 三、指示代词this, these, that, those 作主语: This is a special
5、present. 作表语: What he wants is just this. 作宾语: Take these with you. 作定语: Have you visited those villages?,写人常用句型,外貌：Shes (with ). She is and She has . She is of. She looks 性格：Shes (but she is) She always/never,爱好 (When she is free,) She likes(doing/ to do) Her hobby is(doing) She is good at(doing),
6、she always 难忘之处 help strict,外貌,She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.).,性格,She is outgoing. She
7、 is good-looking but she is a littlebit quiet. She is always smiling. She never stops talking.,爱好,She likes reading and playing chess. Her hobby is playing the violin. When she is free, she likes singing and dancing. She is good at drawing. She always draws pictures on weekends.,难忘之处,She often helps
8、 us (to) do/with the laundry. She is helpful. She is ready to help others. She is very strict with us and we are usually tired after class. However, we have learned a lot from her.,范文欣赏,He is one of the cleaners in my school. He is ordinary, but he is the person I will never forget.He looks really o
9、ld and his skin is black. He is quiet and I heard that he liked singing very much. I remember that last year there was a big earthquake in Sichuan. Students donated money to help the poor people. He donated 500 yuan. It was a large amount of money for him, I think. But in his mind, there must be som
10、ething more important. That is called love.,写作参考答案,The person Ill never forget is my English teacher. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. Hes kind but is strict with us.
11、He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.,评分标准,1.（1315分）符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。2.（912分）基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。3.（48分）部分符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4.（03分）不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。,
