1、英语书面表达（二） 记叙文,记叙文,命题特点：借助图画、标题等形式, 内容的设计主题明确，贴近学生生活，符合学生的年龄特点，具有教育意义。,Discussion,Who do you like best? Could you please say something about him/her?,记叙文写作,一、写人,以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。,要求如下： 1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。,中考题展示,记叙文写作,解题步骤：,Read Think Write C
2、heck,1、Read 2、Think 3、Write 4、Check,文体 要点,词汇 时态 人称,句型 过渡语,格式 词数 拼写,一、人称代词 主格 I we you he she it they 宾格 me us you him her it them it 的特殊用法 指时间: What time is it? Its eight oclock now. 指天气: It is a fine day today. It is raining cats and dogs. 指距离: Its only 15 minutes drive. How far is it from here? 做笼
3、统主语: Whos is it? Oh, its you, Mary. 做形式主语 : Its no use crying loudly. Its important to learn English. 做形式宾语: Do you think it difficult to keep slim?,二、物主代词 形容词性 my your his her its our their 名词性 mine yours his hers its ours theirs 1名词性物主代词跟名词一样可充当主语、表语、宾语： 作主语 Mine is a new handbag. Hers was a small
4、 room. 作表语 That car is ours. These chairs are yours. 作宾语 Look at theirs. You may use mine.,2、形容词性物主代词严格来说不是代词，是形容词，因为他们不能作别的成分，只能作前置定语 My watch is quite old now. Cant you tell me your story ? Our chairs are different from their chairs? 三、指示代词this, these, that, those 作主语: This is a special present. 作
5、表语: What he wants is just this. 作宾语: Take these with you. 作定语: Have you visited those villages?,写人常用句型,外貌：Shes (with ). She is and She has . She is of. She looks 性格：Shes (but she is) She always/never,爱好 (When she is free,) She likes(doing/ to do) Her hobby is(doing) She is good at(doing), she always
6、 难忘之处 help strict,外貌,She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.).,What does she look like?,梳着盘头 She
7、 wears hair in a bun.水汪汪的眼睛 liquid eyes/ 会说话的眼睛 expressive eyes 四方脸 square face樱桃小嘴 cherry lips 红润的嘴唇 ruddy lips/ full lips高鼻梁 high nose浓眉毛 bushy/heavy/thick eyebrows 长睫毛 long eyelashes体态优雅 graceful/ 身材苗条 slender,皮肤白皙 She has a fair complexion.（一头）长长的直发 （a head of） long straight hair， 圆核脸 round face
8、明亮的眼睛 bright eyes/ 樱桃小嘴 cherry lips 丰润的嘴唇 full lips/高鼻梁 high nose秀眉 shapely/slender eyebrows 长睫毛 long eyelashes身材苗条 slender 中等身材 medium height,她留着两条辫子She wears her hair (braided) in long pigtails.丹凤眼 phoenix eye/ Single-edged eyelid 四方脸 square face丰润的嘴唇 full lips高颧骨 high cheek bones淡眉毛 thin eyebrows
9、 体态优雅 graceful/ 身材高挑苗条 pretty tall and slim,What does she look like?,他身材适中，有古铜色肌肤。 He is medium-built, with a permanent tan.寸头 short spiky hair浓眉大眼 have/with big eyes and bushy eyebrows 长方脸 long face高鼻梁 high nose留着胡子和八撇须 grow/wear/have/with a short beard and moustache,What does he look like?,他身材高大，健
10、壮，壮硕。 He is tall sturdy, and well-built.肌肉发达 have/with muscles/muscular浓眉大眼 have/with big eyes and bushy eyebrows 长方脸 long face薄唇 thin lips棱角分明 angular高鼻梁 high nose未留胡须 clean-shaven （adj.）,What sort of build is he? 身材如何 Will is tall and quite lanky. Will高高瘦瘦的。秃顶 bald眼部有皱纹 have wrinkles around the ey
11、es淡眉毛 thin eyebrows肿泡眼swollen-lidded eye长方脸 long face薄唇 thin lips未留胡须 clean-shaven （adj.）,What does he look like?,What does he/she look like?,Build身形:What sort of build is Philip?fat 肥胖的 thin 瘦的 slim 苗条的 plump 丰满的 medium- built 适中的，不胖不瘦的 well - built 健壮的 broad - shouldered 宽肩膀的 overweight 肥胖的 slende
12、r 苗条的，瘦长的 stout 结实的，矮胖的 stocky 粗壮的,性格,She is outgoing. She is good-looking but she is a littlebit quiet. She is always smiling. She never stops talking.,爱好,She likes reading and playing chess. Her hobby is playing the violin. When she is free, she likes singing and dancing. She is good at drawing. S
13、he always draws pictures on weekends.,难忘之处,She often helps us (to) do/with the laundry. She is helpful. She is ready to help others. She is very strict with us and we are usually tired after class. However, we have learned a lot from her.,范文欣赏,He is one of the cleaners in my school. He is ordinary,
14、but he is the person I will never forget.He looks really old and his skin is black. He is quiet and I heard that he liked singing very much. I remember that last year there was a big earthquake in Sichuan. Students donated money to help the poor people. He donated 500 yuan. It was a large amount of
15、money for him, I think. But in his mind, there must be something more important. That is called love.,写作参考答案,The person Ill never forget is my English teacher. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classe
16、s lively and interesting. Hes kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.,评分标准,1.（1315分）符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。2.（912分）基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。3.（48分）部分符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4.（03分）不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。,
