1、12015 年 6 月大学英语四级写作必备范文1.On Open PolicyThe open policy means that our country is open to investment, trade and technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. The purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology, management skills to serve
2、 our socialist construction so as to promote the realization of the four modernizations.We must adhere to the open policy. Because economic relations between states today have become increasingly close, and no country can possibly advance behind close doors. Only in this way, can we gradually close
3、the gap between our country and the developed countries.Through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern civi
4、lization; and broaden our views and raise our level of competence.The place of Science and Technology in Modern Life.Human life can not continue without science and technology. For many years, human society has developed with the advance of science and technology while the development of science and
5、 technology has in turn brought the process to mankind. So the life we are living now is more civilized than that of our fore fathers.The development of science and technology have brought about many changes in peoples life. For example, the invention of television and space rocket have opened a new
6、 era for mankind. Through the use of TV people can hear the sound and learn the events happening thousands of miles away. Owing to the invention of spaceship and rocket, the dream of mans landing on the moon has now come true.Science and technology also play an important role in our socialist constr
7、uction. We may say, our socialist construction is just like a skyscraper, while science and technology are its base. Without the base, the skyscraper cant be built. Therefore, we should try our best to contribute to the development of science and technology so as to provide a more solid base to buil
8、d our country.Importance of EducationChina, as a developing country, is determined to catch up with and even surpass the developed ones. I think that one of the best possible ways to do so is to give first priority(优先)to the development of culture, science and especially education.In modern times, w
9、hen science and technology are making great progress, the education of the work force is of primary importance. Moreover, many of the success in advanced countries have demonstrated that a nation s prosperity mainly depends on the quality of its labour force, namely those who have been well educated
10、.In a developing country such as China, our investment in culture, education and science, and especially elementary education, must enjoy top priority. This is crucial(决定性的)for China 2to catch up with the developed nations in todays surging(汹涌的) waves of technological revolution. Otherwise, the gap
11、between China and advanced countries will be widened rather than bridged.2015 年 6 月大学英语四级写作标准及评分原则一.写作的目的及要求目的：测试学生用英语书面表达思想的能力，能够直接有效地测出考生综合使用语言的能力，较准确地反映考生的英语水平。要求： 大学英语作文测试要求考生能够运用学到的语言知识，按规定的题目要求，在30 分钟内写出一篇 120 个词左右的短文，语义连贯，表达正确，无重大语法错误。题目的内容包括科技，社会，文化，或日常生活等方面的一般常识。题目形式多种多样，有提纲作文，段首句作文，关键词作文，图
12、表作文，书信作文，和规定情景作文等。二.评分原则1.四级作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切的表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍三.写作的标准14(99)分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。11(78)分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。8(56)分 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误
13、相当多，有些是严重错误5(35)分 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。2(14)分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误1 作文话题：1、中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日却日益升温;2、形成这种现象的原因;3、你对这种现象的态度。范文：The Prevalence of Western HolidaysIt is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are
14、being somewhat neglected. Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning. To their astonishment, young people in China who are ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays are crazy about Christmas or Valentines Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon. Fi
15、rst, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect. Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people. Second, the 3prevalenceof English as a world language and the development of globalization enable we
16、stern culture to prevail in China. Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture. Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while miss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend. China boasts a brilliant history
17、 and splendid traditions. In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted. But it seems that young people no longer treasure the traditions. On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture. If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless
18、 heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions. Nobody expects such a consequence. So lets join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition, especially traditional holidays.2 作文话题：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration E
19、ducation should be Strengthened among College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline：1)加强挫折教育十分重要，2)举例说明你的观点，3)为了加强挫折教育，我们应该范文：Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College StudentsIt is universally acknowledged that college students shou
20、ld be guided correctly to face frustrations in life. Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities. The truth of it is deep and profound.A great many remarkable illustrations contribute to this argument. A case in point is
21、that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration. This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay. As a matter of fact, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing wi
22、th frustrations. Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students. But what is worth noting is colleges sh
23、ould also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education. To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.参考译文：普遍公认我们应该正确引导大学生面对生活中的挫折。挫折在我们生活中必不可少，而挫折教育应该在学生和大学中展开。其中的道理非常深刻。很多值得注意的例子支持上述论证。一个恰当的例子就是当面对某种挫折的时候，每年自杀的大学生
24、越来越多。这充分证明了加强挫折教育刻不容缓。事实上，成功人士似乎倾向于擅长面对挫折。此外，大多数学生经常被挫折所烦恼和沮丧，而非吸取教训。根据上述论证，我们可以得出结论：挫折教育对于大学生十分重要。但值得注意的是，在进行挫折教育的同时，大学也应为学生提供心理服务。总之，在面对生活中的挫折时，4我们应该对大学生给与正确引导。3 作文话题：On Cosmetic Surgeries1. 近年来，整容现象屡见不鲜2. 出现这一现象的原因3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议范文：On Cosmetic SurgeriesIn recent years, there have appeared more an
25、d more artificial beauties around us. Not only those actresses but also many ordinary women are crazy about cosmetic surgeries. They fail to resist the temptation of becoming more beautiful by changing some parts of their bodies within a few hours surgery.What are responsible for the prevalence of c
26、osmetic surgeries? Firstly, thanks to the development of shaping techniques, the chances of successful surgeries have increased greatly, which makes more people begin to believe and accept cosmetic surgeries. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, people have more money to satisfy their
27、nature of pursuing beauty.From my point of view, cosmetic surgeries have their necessity of existence in modern society. They do help some people build confidence by giving them a beautiful face or figure. However, cosmetic surgeries cannot bring permanent beauty and might be dangerous. Besides, I t
28、hink ones inner beauty is more important. Therefore, I suggest that people should think twice before deciding to accept cosmetic surgeries.4Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should1) describe the picture,2) interpret its meaning, and3) make a comment on
29、 the phenomena.范文 1：As autumn winds blow, leaves fall. Having separated from a tree, leaves decompose into the earth and eventually return to a trees original roots. Hence the saying: “fallen leaves are destined to return to the root.”The picture above depicts the motion of leaves towards the root,
30、which in turn can be interpreted as the intense bond Chinese feel towards their motherland.More and more overseas Chinese are returning or have already returned to China. Despite the length of time they have spent abroad, or regardless of the life they may have lead, they are often disposed to retur
31、n to their roots, to come home. It is commonly said that blood is thicker than water. Because they are grateful for their homelands nourishment and support, they return to contribute to the construction of their country with the knowledge, experience and wealth acquired abroad. This inclination is a
32、n expression of peoples attachment to, and love of, their homeland. Patriotism is a prevailing emotion among the overseas Chinese. The Chinese still living in China should also cherish and love their country, and give back with their knowledge and 5actions in order to cultivate the countrys present
33、and future.译文：秋风萧萧，落叶凋零。从树上飘落后，落叶在土壤里腐烂，最终又返回到了树根里。因此谚语说：“叶落归根”。上面这幅图描绘了树叶向根部落去。这也可以比喻为中华儿女内心感受到的对祖国的深深眷恋。越来越多的海外华人已经或即将返回祖国，无论他们在海外生活了多久，过的是什么样的生活，他们总是要回到他们的根，即回家。人们常说：血浓于水。因为他们感谢祖国对他们的养育和支持，他们贡献出自己在国外获得的知识、经验和财产回来建设祖国。这种趋势是人们对祖国的忠诚和依恋的流露。爱国主义是海外华人的主流情感。国内的中华儿女也应该珍视和热爱祖国，用自己的知识和行动回报祖国，为了建设好祖国的今天和未来
34、。范文 2：The picture conveys a strong patriotic meaning. It portrays a common natural phenomenon: when autumn arrives, leaves from trees will fall to the ground. The fallen leaves will not abandon the tree that they came from. On the contrary, the leaves fall down around the tree in order to cultivate
35、the trees roots, which symbolize ones motherland.Patriotism implies a love for ones mother country. It is the noblest of human sentiments. Every citizen should possess some spirit of patriotism. Patriotism, however, is not to be testified by the tongue; it should be manifested in action. With this d
36、efinite object in view, one must do his best for his motherland, and, at any moment, be ready to make sacrifices for her. The man who possesses such will is a real patriot at heart.Patriotism may be shown in various ways: soldiers display it by fighting for or defending their country; scientists exp
37、ress it by doing constant research work so that more advanced technology can be introduced and utilized in the construction of their motherland; those overseas demonstrate it by doing whatever they can to help their motherland and fall into its embrace without hesitation whenever they are needed.The
38、 true patriot desires righteousness and uprightness for ones own land. He puts love of his country before the love of himself, and is willing to makeany sacrifice for it.译文：图片表达了一种强烈的爱国主义情怀。它描绘了一个非常普通的自然现象：秋天来临，落叶归根。落叶不会远离大树而去，相反，它们落在树的周围来滋养大树的根基，树根象征着祖国母亲。 爱国主义意味着人们对祖国的热爱。它是人类最高尚的情感。每一个公民都应当具有爱国主义精
39、神。爱国主义不能停留在口头上，而应当落实在行动上。有了这个明确的目标，人们必须尽力报效祖国并时刻准备为祖国牺牲一切。在内心里具有这样精神的人才是真正的爱国主义者。爱国主义表现在各个方面：士兵的爱国主义精神体现在为保卫祖国而战;科学家的爱国主义精神体现在孜孜不倦的科研工作，把更先进的技术引进并应用在祖国的建设中; 海外华人的爱国主义精神则体现在尽其最大努力帮助建设自己的祖国，并且在祖国需要的时候毫不犹豫地投入祖国母亲的怀抱。真正的爱国主义者对自己的祖国是正直无私和忠心耿耿的。他把祖国的利益放在个人利益之上，并且为了祖国的利益甘愿牺牲自己的一切。5Directions:Study the foll
40、owing drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should61) describe the drawing,2) interpret its meaning, and3) support your view with examples.范文 1：Groups of bees work together to produce honey. Their great efforts are not selfish, however, as the amount of honey they produce is for an entir
41、e group rather than a single individual.The drawing above suggests that people should selflessly dedicate themselvesto their community as a whole. This spirit of dedication requires faith. Selfless hard work is an embodiment of responsibility and strength.The health of nations requires a spirit of d
42、evotion. Chinese teachers, doctors and athletes who all work for the benefit of their country, for example, aredevoting themselves regardless of fame or fortune. They are dedicated to the society they live within. No matter what type of job one holds, one should work hard and in earnest to improve o
43、nes community.The results of dedication, however, depend not only on ones willingness to give but also on ones ability. If you are enthusiastic about devoting yourself to your country, but do not have the skills it takes to do so, you cannot effect much change. The more competent, one is, the greate
44、r ones contribution. Therefore, it is essential that students focus on their studies and enhance their skills in order to properly give back to society.译文：成群结队的蜜蜂在一起酿蜜，它们付出这样大的辛劳并不是为自己，而是因为它们酿出的蜜可以为整个群体而非个人所享用。上面的这幅画启发人们应该无私地把自己奉献给整个社会。奉献精神要求人们拥有信念，忘我的工作是责任和力量的化身。国家的兴旺需要奉献精神。例如我国的教师、医生或是运动员，他们都在为祖国利
45、益而操劳，他们奉献出自己不是为了出名或得利。 他们献身于自己的社会。不管一个人从事什么样的工作，他都应该为了改善社会而努力积极地工作。但一个人的奉献所能取得的成效，并不仅仅只取决于他乐于奉献，还取决于他自身的能力。如果你满腔热忱地想献身于祖国，但却没有所需的技能，那你也不会做出大的贡献。一个人的能力越大，那他能做出的贡献就越大。所以，对学生来说最主要的是要把注意力集中到学习上，增强自己的技能，以待有朝一日能以适当的方式报效社会。范文 2：We can see from the drawing, a swarm of bees flying here and there busily worki
46、ng to produce honey, which will be enjoyed by human beings rather than themselves.Human beings show more respect to bees than to other animals, not for their diligence, but for their dedication to others. We live in a materialistic society and are trained from our earliest years to be greedy. We are
47、 taught early on to be materialistic and taught to consider things, or to be exact, money, “mine” or “yours”. It seems impossible to live in the modern society without money. Money is even regarded as a symbol of wealth and social position. There is a saying that goes, “money makes a mare go.” Peopl
48、e seem to look more highly upon ones possession of money rather than ones dedication to society.Some people pursue their own personal benefits at the cost of others. Some people always ask for payment after their “dedication”. Dedication and expecting nothing in return is the highest level of devoti
49、on. Lei Fengs spirit of dedication is such a typical example. Bees produce honey as a result of their hard work to the human beings without asking for any 7repayment. That is why we respect bees. Dedication can bring us happiness and a sense of fulfillment. One who devotes himself to society and people will have a lot of enjoyment from the process of dedication.译文：我们从这幅画中可以看到，一群蜜蜂飞来飞去忙着采蜜，它们不是为了自己享受，而是为了给人类酿造甜美的蜂蜜。比起其他动物人们更加尊重蜜蜂，不是因为它们的勤劳，而是因为它们的奉献精神。我们生活在一个物质社会，从小就受到了贪婪索取的训练。早期物质方面的教育使我们从小就对 “你的”和“我的”东西，或者具体一点，也就是金钱，泾渭分明。在当今社会，没有钱是不能生存的。金钱甚至被看作是财富和社会地位的象征。俗话说，“有钱能使鬼推
