1、雅思写作Task 1 表格 Table,表格 Table,过于抽象 数字（比例）太多，难以取舍 趋势不明显,今昔对比,The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 剑6P52,对于不同时间同一事物的比较,先相减/相除，后分组哪些是增加，哪些是减少幅度大的与幅度小的分组,增加的 Car, Long distance bus, Train, Taxi幅度大的 Car +1607减少的 Walking, Bicycle, Local bus幅度大
2、的 Local bus -155,The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000. 题目改写In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
3、不同点,P1,P2,The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others. Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000. Long distance buses and taxis seemed t
4、o be warmly welcomed by travelers, so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled,Travels by walking, bicycles and local buses lost travelers favor in the one and a half decade.Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease, dropping from 429 to 274, while the n
5、umber of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively.,P3,P4,Overall, the number of miles travelled by the average per person rose from 4,740 miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000, with the increase of cars accounting for almost all of that increase.,各自为战,The
6、table below gives information about underground railway systems in six cities.剑5P98,排高高称重重来比较,P1,The table demonstrates the data regarding the subway system in six cities, including Date opened, kilometers of route and passengers per year (in millions),P2,In terms of Date opened, London has the most
7、 time-honored (1863) subway system among the six cities while subway system in Los Angeles is the newest one opened in 2001. （最老，最新） Systems in Paris and Tokyo are opened in 1900 and 1927, respectively. 时间顺序 After that, systems in Washington DC and Kyoto are opened in 1976 and 1981 differently.,As f
8、or the size of the railway system, London still ranks the first, meaning it has the longest subway system (384 kilometers) among the six cities, which is roughly twice as large as the system in Paris. （最长）By contrast, subway system in Kyoto is shorter (11 kilometers) than the others even thought it
9、opened in relatively recent year. （最短） The kilometers of route in Tokyo, Washington DC and Los Angeles are 155, 126 and 28 differently. 排长长,The third part is passengers per year in millions. More exactly, the top three are Tokyo (1927), Paris (1191) and London (775). Underground railway system in Wa
10、shington DCs has 144 millions passengers per year. Systems in Los Angeless and Kyotos carry fewer passengers per year (50 and 45, respectively).,Thus, it can be clearly seen from the table that the subway systems in Tokyo and Paris serves for more passengers whereas the systems in Los Angeles and Kyoto carry fewer passengers mainly because of the short route.,
