1、12017-2018初三二模考作文汇编专题一：书信类One徐汇区VII. Writing(作文):(共20分)You are graduating from Middle school soon.Your parents will give you a gift to celebrate the important time.Write a letter with at least 60 words to your mun and dad.Tell what you want and how useful and important it is to you.The beginning par
2、t of the letter is given.你即将初中毕业，父母准备一份礼物给你庆祝这一重要时刻，写一篇至少60字的信给你的父母。告诉他们你想要什么礼物，它对你的重要性以及用处。信的开头已给出。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，标点符号不占格）Dear mum and dad,Thank you for your great love for me. As for the gift, Id like to haveYours trulyMichelle【答案】Dear mum and dad,Thank you for your great love
3、for me. As for the gift, Id like to have such a special gift that it is unique for me. The best gift, I believe, is to embrace the nature alone. When it comes to graduation, the majority of students suppose that graduation is free of hardworking.Having spent about 9 years in study, I gradually lose
4、the ability to stay alone.Both at school and at home, I spend the whole day with my parents and classmates. So it is high time that I should take the time to see the outside world alone. There is no doubt that travelling alone provides a chance for me to live more independently.A proverb says“Travel
5、 can cultivate peoples endurance.” For me, travel is a part of education. In the course of travelling, I may be faced with new challenges, which is beneficial to me. I never know what will happen on the road. Maybe that is the point of life!In a word, nothing is more important than to travel alone a
6、nd meet the unexpected 2challenges!Yours trulyTwo 闵行区94. Write an e-mail in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景写一封不少于 60 词的电子邮件，邮件开头已给。）假如你是 Sunny，你们班级将要在教室里举行一次毕业派对，班主任 Susan 正在征求大家的金点子。请给 Susan 写一封电子邮件，介绍你设计的一个或几个有意义的毕业派对活动。（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Keys:Subject Gradua
7、tion PartyTo Dear Susan,I am really excited about the coming graduation party.Yours,SunnySubject Graduation Party3专题类：观点及措施类One 松江区Write at least 60 words on the topic “A personal habit Id like to change”.（以“我想改变的一个个人习惯”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following points
8、are only for reference:1. 简述你想改变的这个个人习惯；2. 说明你想改变这一习惯的理由及措施。【范文】In real life, there are many people who have trouble finding themselves. So Im not an exception. To Dear Susan,I am really excited about the coming graduation party. And I couldnt help but be eager to share my some of my ideas with you.
9、 First and foremost, considering we are going to enter different high schools and may not see each other as often as now, a video display of the various activities which we have taken part in before is suggested. Whenever we review the past happy moments after graduation, I believe every student wil
10、l feel precious. In addition, a students talent show, in my view, will make the party much more interesting, which not only deepen our understanding about each other, but also add more confidence to ourselves.Hope my advice is helpful to you, and best wishes!Yours,Sunny4For me, worry seems to be a h
11、abit, which has been a personal habit Id like to change. To tell the truth, I often feel tired. In fact, I am not so unlucky, but my inner sadness, and there is a one-sided understanding of life. A wise man, even in a troubled environment, often finds pleasure in himself. There is no denying that I
12、have to find the reason to get rid of the bad habit before it destroys me.To get rid of a bad habit, it is important that I first get to know how harmful the habit really is. Take the habit of worry as an example. Obviously, worry is harmful to my health. It can result in anxiety and nervousness. Be
13、sides, worry is a waste of time. A depressed person spends almost as much time a day as I can thinking about some unnecessary little things. Since I can realize the danger and waste, it is likely that I may stop worrying slowly. To get rid of a bad habit, it is essential that I also have a strong wi
14、ll. Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I am able to change this bad habit in the near future.Two 普陀区Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend”【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢?请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自
15、身经历进行阐述。(注意短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)When I have trouble with my best friendSimilar as we are to our friends, we are distinct and independent individuals. Sometimes we may differ in views and have trouble with each other. However, it is communication and understanding that really matter.When I h
16、ave trouble with my best friend, I wont withdraw but contact him timely, figure out what has gone wrong and work out a plan to rebuild friendship. To some degree, I owe a permanent, steady and dynamic relationship to mutual understanding. Attention should be paid to similarities rather than hovering
17、 over differences if I am to cultivate our friendship. Furthermore, as I have chosen him to be an intimate friend, I should never be conquered by obstacles that are meant to test my heart and advance relationship.5To conclude, whatever trouble I have with my friends, I will reserve differences, seek
18、 common ground.专题三：评论类One 静安区Write a review of a novel in 60-120 words.(从你平时看过的小说中选取一本，写一篇 60-120个词的书评，标点符合不占格)You can use the following points to help you: What is the novel about? Give your opinions and your conclusion. Would you recommend this novel to others? Why or why not?(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他
19、相关信息，否则不予评分。)The Old Man and the Sea was the work of fiction produced by Hemingway , which is about an old fisherman named Santiago. The story is that Santiago fight with the sharks on the return voyage. From the story, we can see how brave the old man is.In the face of these sharks, he never still
20、gave up killing them and protecting his prey. In my opinion, the old fisherman did his best to fight with fate although he was in the face of challenges of aging and death. It told us that we all should have a brave heart.So I would recommend this novel to others ,for it is amazing and inspiring.Two
21、 杨浦区95. In 60 to 120 words,write a review about a hotel you stayed at.（根据所给提示，针对你曾经住过的宾馆，写一篇60-120个词的评论，标点符号不占格） In your review,you may include:-the name of hotel -the price-what you like about it -what do you didnt like about it6-where you got the information about it -your recommendation（推荐）（注意：短文
22、中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）【答案】As a travel buff,I have been to many tourist attractions as well as various hotels.Last National Day,I visited Chengdu with my parents and stayed at a hotel,which was named Blue Sky.My father booked it on line in advance.The first reason why we chose the Blue Sky wa
23、s that its price was reasonable.Whats more,the waiter serviced us patiently,keeping friendly smile on his face from beginning to end,which made us feel at home.Last but not the least,the environment of the hotel was as clean and quiet as its promise.Small as it was,we all felt satisfied in general.A
24、s far as I am concerned,Blue Sky hotel is suitable for a short vocation with your family.Three 长宁区Write at least 60 words about the topic “The_I want to recommend” (请以“我想推荐_”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 )在你的日常生活中，肯定有很多给你留下了深刻的印象，如观看过一部电影，阅读过一本书，欣赏过一个表演。请你从以上三个方面选取其中一个内容，向你的朋友作推荐，并说明推荐理由。(注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名
25、、校名及其仲相关信息，否则不子评分。)The Book Called The BFG I want to recommendI want to recommend a book called The BFG . It was written by the remarkable British novelist Roald Dahl. In the book the writer tells us a story about how a giant called BFG and a little girl met, went on an adventure and saved human bei
26、ngs by working together.The lesson we can learn from the book is cooperation. Without cooperation, the BFG and the girl couldnt run 7away from the village of evil giants, find the way to Buckingham or save the world in the end. In our daily life,as long as we help each other and fight for one goal,
27、we can achieve a great success. I believe that you can understand the importance of cooperation from this book. 专题四：经历经验类One 黄浦区In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ and l”.(以“我和 ” 为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）每一个生命个体都和这个世界发生着联系，你也不例外。请分享一个你和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，
28、否则不予评分。）Music and IMusic to me is what water to fish. On one hand, music can bring me relaxation. As a Junior 3 student, to reduce the pressure of heavy study, I usually make full use of time to listen to music in spare time. On the other hand, music is really good to my mental health. It can refres
29、h my brain after long time hard work.It also enables me to forget sadness .In music , I have found the virtue of human being , the value of ourselves and the beauty of nature.Music and I are so closely connected that we can not separate forever.Two 奉贤区Write at least 60 words on the topic “That day,
30、I made a/an_”(以“那天,我(做) 了一（个）_”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格) (注意: 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。) 生活中的每一次体验、每一段经历都为你的成长助力。你或许交了一个新朋友、许了一个新愿望、作了一次新选择， 请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。范文：8That day, I made a friendLast Saturday was my birthday. My parents opened a birthday party for me. They invited many people
31、to the wonderful party. I was very happy. The happiest thing was I made a new friend. She was a beautiful girl, wearing a yellow dress. When we ate cake, a piece of cake fell on her dress. I lent my own dress to her, she thanked me many times. We talked a lot and became friends that day. I learned t
32、hat we would feel happy when we help others.Three 嘉定区Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A New Skill I have Learned”(以“我学会的一种新技能” 为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)生活中，我们不断学习新本领，新技能。请简单描述你学会某一种新技能的过程，并谈谈它给你的学习或生活带来了什么变化。The new skill I have learned recently is skating,which is the most popula
33、r activity during winter.And I am always having a great affection for ice and snow.When I was little,my cousins liked to hang out and they loved to chase each other on ice,which seemed a great fun.Sadly, they didnt allow me to join them because they thought I was too young.After I have been a middle
34、 school student, I got the chance to skate.However,it was not as easy as I assumed it would be.When I put on the ice skates,I could barely stand on the ice.But I really wanted to learn this skill. Later on, I would start practising early in the morning.I know that practice makes perfect.And I am cap
35、able of gliding on the ice after practicing.The learning process tells me that we will confront various difficulties in our life.What we can do is never give up and we will succeed someday in the future.Four 金山区Write at least 60 words about the topic “A precious photo”. ( 以“一张珍贵的照片”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标
36、点符号不占格。)There are many precious photos in our life which leave us some good memories. Some are interesting, some are funny and others are impressive. There is one photo which is very special for me. When I was in grade six, I was very shy and timid. My class teacher encouraged me to make a 9speech i
37、n front of the class. I tried my best to prepare for it and practiced it many times. Finally, I succeeded in making it and all the classmates cheered for me. My teacher took a photo when I was making the speech. This photo was so precious that it changed my life. It made me become more confident.专题五
38、：畅想类One 崇明区Writing a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ I have grown up”. (请以“我已经长大了”为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意： 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息， 否则不予评分。）提示：我们经过了四年的初中学习生活，或多或少在某些方面长大了、成熟了。请结合自己的1-2 个经历，谈谈你在哪个方面体现出长大了、成熟了，并有何感悟。I have grown up_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
39、_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _【范文】I have grown upAfter three years life in the junior high school, I has changed a lot and felt that I have grown up. On one hand, I learn to study by myself by finding my own ways. I start to realize the importance of study in the class and a
40、fter the class. On the other hand, I become more patient to my family and other people around me. I will consider things in their shoes and try to treasure kinship and friendship. Growth is a process of challenges and changes, but I will face it bravely.10Two 青浦区Write a passage of at least 60 words
41、on the topic “My hometown in ten years”(以“十年后的家乡”为题，写一篇短文，不少于 60词，标点符号不占格。)提示：十年后，你希望家乡会有哪些变化？是希望她成为一格时尚之都，还是一个山清水静的现代化农村？请展开你的想象，围绕一个嗯中心简单阐述一下。【答案】My hometown in ten yearsShanghai has been developing at an amazing speed in recent years, and as the rural part of the city, Qingpu, I expect it to take
42、 over its advantages of being a place with green water and pure air to attract people around the world.In ten years time, my hometown must be more beautiful with trees standing along the widened roads, cleaner water with fish in it and purer air. There will be fewer hazy days and people will live a happier life.All in all, I hope what I expected will come true.
