1、大学英语四六级,写作模式,石发德,Brian,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,I. 对比观点题 II. 社会热点题 III. 图表题 IV. 谚语/格言题 V. 应用文,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,I. 对比观点题提纲要求：1.有人认为；2.另外一些人认为；3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段）写作逻辑结构： Para I: 引出将要评论的事物或者观点。 Para II: 支持方的观点，分析原因 Para III: 转折过渡，提出反方观点，分析原因 Para IV: 强调个人态度或观点，总结全文,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,开篇1.Now, it is generally
2、 accepted that. 2.It is universally acknowledged that 3.Along with the advance of the society,.plays an important /an increasingly significant role in.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,主体(1)1.Peoples opinions of vary from person to person. 2.To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes. 3.Some pe
3、ople maintain that.,however others claim that. 4.When it comes to.,some people believe that., others argue that.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,主体（2）1.Every coin has two sides. 2.It has both pluses and minuses. 3.Although it brings people lots of benefits and conveniences, it has many disadvantages.,大 学 英 语 四 六
4、级 写 作,结尾1.As far as I am concerned，I stand on side of the latter opinion that. 2.Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the o
5、utline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students Rating of Their Teachers,Students Rating of Their TeachersNowadays, it is generally accepted that colleges students grade their teachers. In some universities students rating has even become the only source of information on
6、 teaching effectivenessTo this issue, different people come up with various attitudes. Some are in favor of the rating system, They maintain that students should have their opinion about their teachers effectiveness since they attend the teachers classes every day. Others, on the contrary, are stron
7、gly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which
8、is best left for the teachers colleagues.As far as I am concerned, students rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers performance. Instead of rating the teachers knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to e
9、stimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teachers ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students interest in the subject.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,II.社会热点话题 提纲要求： 1.社会普遍存在某一现象或问题 2.产生的根源 3.带来的危害 4.你
10、的结论写作逻辑结构： Para I: 提出这一现象或问题 Para II: 讨论产生的根源，给出支持性的细节论据 Para III: 讨论带来的影响或危害，给出细节论据 Para IV: 结合自身，总结全文，得出结论,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,开篇1.Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of 2.Recently, the problem of has been brought into focus. 3.It is conceivable that plays an important role in our li
11、fe.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,主体1.The reasons are presented below. Firstly, Secondly, Finally,. 或者 For one thing, ., For another.2.There are three important/ crucial causes as follows.(1) The first and most important reason is that(2) Second thing that must be taken into consideration is that.(3) The third,
12、 not the last, is that.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,结尾1.It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop . 2.It is necessary that steps should be taken to .,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students Job Hunting. You should write at least
13、120 words following the outline given below. 1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象 2. 产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等） 3. 如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等） College Students Job Hunting,College Students Job HuntingNowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of college students employment. People find it increasingly diffic
14、ult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?The reasons are presented below. firstly, nowadays college students aim too high. Al
15、l they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Secondly, there is a big gap between the majors some students study in
16、school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.It is necessary that steps should be taken to improve this phenomenon. Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students, talent and k
17、nowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-toearth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,III. 图表题写作逻辑结构： Para I: 概括描述图表：趋势描写（本段主题句）； 具体描述图表：必要数据支持（细
18、节性）. Para II: 提出自己理由和观点（本段主题句）；细节性分论点（提供理由支持自己的观点，至少 两点）. Para III: 预测未来和提出解决方法； 总结全文和表达作者观点.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,适用句型1.The chart/ graph shows/ displays/ reflect that 2.As we can see from the chart/ graph/table/diagram, (has) increased dramatically over the period from to ,Directions: For this part, y
19、ou are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. You should write at least 120 words based on the chart and outline given below: 下图是2010年1-10月中国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率，描述变化，说明原因。,BlogAs we can see from the chart, the number of people using blog services from January to October in 2010. Fro
20、m it we can see that the number of users increased monthly from January to August, except February. After two peak months, July and August, the number dropped slightly in September, while in October it picked up again.There are three crucial causes as follows. To start with, in February Chinese peop
21、le celebrated the most important festivalChinese New Year. This means more people spent more time with their families and friends, and therefore they didnt have as much time for surfing online. And then, college students are the main users of blog services. While in July and August，they had summer h
22、olidays, which enabled them to have more spare time reading and writing blogs. Finally, with improvements of blog services and the influence of some “star bloggers”, most of whom are celebrities, blogs are becoming an important way for people to express themselves and communicate with others. Theref
23、ore, more and more people are starting to use these services, which help explain the overall increase shown here.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,IV. 谚语格言题逻辑结构 Para I： 点明要阐释的谚语或名言, 解释其意思，有时有正反两面 的逻辑; Para II： 开门见山表明自己的观点态度，即文章的论点句；举例论证（至少两点，或正反面论证）； Para III：总结全文，定下结论（通常阐明现实或更深远意义）.,Directions:For this part, you
24、are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: No pains,no gains You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese. 1. 为什么说“不劳就无获” 2. 试举例说明,No pains, no gains Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb “ No pains, no gains.” It means that not
25、hing can be gained without painstaking efforts and that no knowledge or skill can be acquired without sweat or toil. You dont have to look very far too prove the truth of the proverb. Darwins great discovery was not the work of a moment but was preceded by years of patient, arduous observation. Moza
26、rt was not an accomplished pianist at the age of eight as the result of watching countless hours of TV. Nor did Edison make himself the greatest inventor in the modern world by spending his spare time on going to parties or bars. His words “Genius is 99 percent perspiration and one percent inspirati
27、on ,reveals the secret of thousands of successful men and women. All accomplishments and success come from sustained endeavor. Although it is an old saying,“ no pains no gains” has its profound and realistic significance in our college studies. To acquire knowledge in a particular field and to attai
28、n any academic goals, great exertion and persistent effort are undoubtedly required because we all know that “No pains, no gains.”,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,书信 一、开头 1. 告知收信人你的身份（假如对方不认识你）Dear / To whom it may concern,I am a at your college, enrolled in the course.My name is , I am 2. 问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear ,
29、 How are you? I hope everything is fine. How are things going with you?How are you getting along with ?,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,3. 开门见山解释写信的原因1）致谢：I am writing to thank you most sincerely for I would like to deeply appreciate you and I hope to,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,2）抱怨： I am writing to complain about the poo
30、r service3）致歉： I would like to express my apologies for4）询问： I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,二、正文( 主题句-支持句-总结句)三、结尾段：提供请求或帮助1）Please give this matter your immediate attention. 2）I would very much appreciate it if as soon as possible.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,2. 再次表示歉意或感激 Ple
31、ase accept my heartfelt thanks/apology3. 期盼回信： 1）Looking forward to a prompt reply. 2）I hope to receive your reply shortly.,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on
32、Campus. You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你是李明，请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。,A Letter to the President of the University Dear Mr. President,I am writing this letter to you to expre
33、ss my concern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.As we both know, sports are very important for the so
34、und growth of young people. If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with soc
35、cer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for your reading this letter. Yours faithfully, Li Ming,作文中转承语的使用,1. 表时间或
36、次序：(1). firstly (first of all), secondly, finally;(2). on one hand, on the other hand; (3). for one thing, for another, whats more, in a word;2. 表空间：close to, in front of, in the center of, next to, opposite to, above, against, behind, below3. 因果关系：accordingly, as a consequence, as a result, consequ
37、ently, due to, hence, in this way, so, therefore, thus,4. 表比较或对比：however, in contrast, in spite of, likewise, not onlybut also, on the contrary, similarly, whereas, nevertheless 5. 表举例或例证：as an illustration, for example, for instance, incidentally, namely, that is, such as. 6. 表强调：anyway, furthermor
38、e, in addition, in fact in particular, moreover 7. 表结论或摘要：as has been noted, in any event, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, therefore, to conclude, to sum up.,Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should w
39、rite at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1 一些学生赞成讲座式教学 2 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学 3 你的看法,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Aid Education in China. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese
40、: 1. 每年，高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教。 2. 支教活动的意义。 3. 我的看法。,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Drug Addicts . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1 上图所示为我国吸毒者年龄分布情况，请描述其变化 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 3 这一变化对社会和个人的影响,Thank Yo
41、u for Your Attention,大学英语四六级,写作模式,石发德,Brian,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,I. 对比观点题 II. 社会热点题 III. 图表题 IV. 谚语/格言题 V. 应用文,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,I. 对比观点题提纲要求：1.有人认为；2.另外一些人认为；3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段）写作逻辑结构： Para I: 引出将要评论的事物或者观点。 Para II: 支持方的观点，分析原因 Para III: 转折过渡，提出反方观点，分析原因 Para IV: 强调个人态度或观点，总结全文,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,开篇1
42、.Now, it is generally accepted that. 2.It is universally acknowledged that 3.Along with the advance of the society,.plays an important /an increasingly significant role in.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,主体(1)1.Peoples opinions of vary from person to person. 2.To this issue, different people come up with various
43、 attitudes. 3.Some people maintain that.,however others claim that. 4.When it comes to.,some people believe that., others argue that.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,主体（2）1.Every coin has two sides. 2.It has both pluses and minuses. 3.Although it brings people lots of benefits and conveniences, it has many disadv
44、antages.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,结尾1.As far as I am concerned，I stand on side of the latter opinion that. 2.Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120
45、words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students Rating of Their Teachers,Students Rating of Their TeachersNowadays, it is generally accepted that colleges students grade their teachers. In some universities students rating has even become the only sou
46、rce of information on teaching effectivenessTo this issue, different people come up with various attitudes. Some are in favor of the rating system, They maintain that students should have their opinion about their teachers effectiveness since they attend the teachers classes every day. Others, on th
47、e contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professio
48、nal knowledge, which is best left for the teachers colleagues.As far as I am concerned, students rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers performance. Instead of rating the teachers knowledge on the subject, students
49、 should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teachers ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students interest in the subject.,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,II.社会热点话题 提纲要求： 1.社会普遍存在某一现象或问
50、题 2.产生的根源 3.带来的危害 4.你的结论写作逻辑结构： Para I: 提出这一现象或问题 Para II: 讨论产生的根源，给出支持性的细节论据 Para III: 讨论带来的影响或危害，给出细节论据 Para IV: 结合自身，总结全文，得出结论,大 学 英 语 四 六 级 写 作,开篇1.Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of 2.Recently, the problem of has been brought into focus. 3.It is conceivable that plays an important role in our life.,
