1、,Task writing -Summary,Welcome,Summary (about 30 words),Your opinion, argument and conclusion (about 120 words),What is a summary?,A shortened version of the text Main points of the text Written in your own words,A summary is a brief account of the main points of an article in your own words .,Quest
2、ion: What should be paid attention to to write a good summary of an article?,Can we mainly use our own words or the sentences in the original passage? Can we judge the writing style? 3. Can we write it in the first person or the third person? 4. Can we express our opinion?,Discussion,understanding,t
3、opic sentences,key words,set sentence patterns,summarize/rewrite,the writing style,the 3rd person,Styles of passage,narration,the six elements of a narrative passage,Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a
4、very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough
5、 for me at first and I got badly homesick.Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love itgood facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nigh
6、ts in pubs and clubs.One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that wayit was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.,the six elements of a narrative passage,Mike,His first year of college,toughesta
7、djustment,got used to it,love the college life,Get himself active in things,套用语句,1.摘要的开头语(第一段开头语),(1)记叙文的摘要开头语: The story/passage is about The writer/author tells us about. The story mainly tells us that .,_ first year of college life. At first he _, but after getting active in things for one semest
8、er, he _ and_ .,didnt adjust himself well,adapted to it,enjoyed himself,congratulations!,Try it!,本题为2008年广东高考读写任务,The passage tells us about Toms,(1) Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, the
9、y received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.,三、超级仿写 1概要写作,The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who rec
10、eived 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.,参考答案
11、： (某人做了某事) Three brothers, who worked for the same company, received different wages (原因)due to their different attitudes towards their work, (意义)which shows a right attitude is of great help to ones life.,(2) I hired a carpenter to help me repair an old farmhouse. After he just finished a tiring da
12、y on the job, a flat tire made him lose an hour of work. Worse still, his ancient truck refused to start. When I drove him home, he sat in stony silence. On arriving, he invited me in to meet his family. As we walked toward the front door, he stopped for a short time at a small tree, touching the br
13、anches with both hands.,When opening the door, his brown face was covered with smiles and he hugged his two small children and gave his wife a kiss.After supper, he walked me to the car. When we passed the tree and my curiosity drove me to ask him, “Before we went in, why did you stop by the tree?”
14、“Oh, thats my trouble tree,” he replied, “I know I cant help having troubles on the job and in my life, but those troubles dont belong in the house with my wife and children.,I can hang them up on the tree every night before I come home. But it turned out that the next morning there werent as many t
15、roubles as I remembered the night before. Put down our worries for a moment and we will be relieved for ever.”,参考答案：In order not to worry his family, (某人做了某事)he didnt bring his trouble home, and to his surprise, he forgot the trouble the next day. (启示)Therefore, we are advised to put down our worrie
16、s and relieve our pressure.,How to write a good summary of an article,1.An argumentation : The topic sentences the supporting sentences the writers conclusion summarize them. 2.A narrative passage : Get the information of six elements combine them smoothly form a summary.,Argumentation,Methods: 1. F
17、ind out the topic sentences/ key phrases 2. Find out the supporting evidences or facts. 3. Find out the words or phrases that appear most frequently.,How to summarize an argumentation well?,Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if w
18、e went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that
19、 we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or st
20、udy of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.,1. A strong stateme
21、nt of opinion. (the key idea):,Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance,2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences),a better memorya healthier bodya better preparation for the day,3. Conclusion/suggestions.,a good habit / benefit a lot,The passage says getting up early in the mornin
22、g is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.,some set sentence patterns. The passage says/This passage states that In the writers opinion, The writer thinks that,要想在考场写作的紧张时刻用30个词概括短文的内容要点，我们需要谨记下面的六种技巧skill1:
23、 省略细节Skill2:省略重复了的内容Skill3: 省略例子Skill4: 用概括性的语言而不是精确的语言Skill5:使用短而精的连词，如but, and, besidesSkill6:用间接引语表达对话内容。 误区警示：考生往往犯以下的错误：主题大意概括不清，抄袭原文或表达了自己的意见 这都会大大影响得分。,2.摘要后过渡语:在写完摘要之后,要有过渡词或过渡句,才使上下文自然衔接,记叙文的过渡语(引出类似的经历) This story reminds me of another story that happened to This story reminds me of a similar experience of I also went through such an experience. I have a similar experience. .have/has a similar experience as.,
