1、CET-4/6 作文颠峰讲座,2010英语四六级辅导课,一. 命题要求,1 .考试时间：半小时2 .考试题号： 第一道题3 .字数：at least 120/150 words4. 分值：154 .语言：规范，避免语法错误5 .内容：切题,二. 评分原则及标准,1.评分原则 （Global Scoring, Reward Scores) 2.评分标准: 五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其
2、中有一些是严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误，且多数为严重错误。 评分强调5项标准：内容切题,表达清楚，文字连贯，句式多变，语言规范,命题方式：1. 提纲式文字命题2. 提纲式图表命题3. 情景+提纲式命题应用文命题内容：主要涉及两类内容: 1. 关于大学生的学习,校园生活及对将来的工作，人生等方面的态度和看法； 2. 与日常生活息息相关或贴近社会变化，发展和进步的热点话题。着重测试考生用文字评论和说明事物的能力，因此体裁以说明文和议论文居多。,三.常见出题方式及内容,历年CET-4写作题分析,历年CE
3、T-6写作题分析,范文：On students selecting lecturers,Nowadays many universities entitle students to choose lecturers freely for some courses, which is welcomed by most students, and is becoming the focus of the students and lecturers concern.There are three main factors which will influence students selectin
4、g lecturers. First of all, it is generally accepted that a lecturers professional knowledge and ability is the most important factor, since students choose their courses to learn knowledge. Moreover, quite a few students think teachingmethods and skills are essential to a good lecturers. A lecturer
5、must know how to teach. In addition, a lecturers sense of humor is also an important factor many students will consider.,Undoubtedly, free choosing of lecturers is very beneficial to both lecturers and students. On the one hand, it can provide a good chance for a lecturer to prove and show his abili
6、ty. On the other hand, in this way, students can choose lectures they like and obtain more initiative in learning. However, since it is a free choice, a small number of excellent lecturers will become the focus of most students choosing, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence te
7、aching effect seriously. / This change can lead to both benefits and problems,四.高分作文要素：,1. 结构清晰2.句式多变3.出现亮点,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Digital Age, you should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1）如今数字化产品得到了越来越广泛的使用，例如：2）数字化产品的使用对人们工作
8、、学习、生活产生的影响。,范文点评：14分作文标准分100.5分,Nowadays, the digital products are widely used by a great number of individuals. Taking a look around, you can find too numerous examples to mention individually, and the best one may be the computers. In addition, other digital products, like digital camera, digital
9、 TVs, etc.,have gradually become indispensable part of our life.The spreading of digital products has a great effect on the work, study and life of the people in the modern society. First of all, we can clearly see that the office work can not be finished without these digital products. Whats more,
10、our study efficiency,is improved greatly by the computer, the Media player and many other digital products. Besides, thanks to the digital products, wherever you go, whatever you do, whenever it is, you can contact your family, friends and colleagues easily. It is far beyond any reasonable doubt tha
11、t the digital age hasarrived. Digital products are a signal of social progress. They do bring us great convenience and happiness. Therefore, everyone should learn to enjoy various digital products.,五. 识别题型,（仅供参考）1. 现象解释型 (03/6, 02/6, 98/1)2. 对比选择型 (00/6, 99/6)3. 问题解决型 (01/1)4. 观点论证型 (99/1,97/1)5. 应用
12、文,1.胸有千言万语，却无处落笔。,2. 审题不清，致使作文跑题,3. 枝节性论述过多，导致重点不突出。,4. 文章结构不清，布局混乱。,5.语言表达不符合英语的表达习惯,6.句型单一，无变化。,7.用词不当，语法错误多。,8.文章首尾不呼应或是虎头蛇尾,六. 考生写作中存在的问题,七. 写作步骤,1、精准审题 2、列提纲，定主题句 3、组织段落 4、修改完善,1.注意审题，列出提纲，以免跑题。,2.版面整洁，字迹工整，不要过大或过小。,3.开门见山，写好首段，段首句杜绝错误。,4.段落明朗，条理清楚，合理使用关联词。,5.适当设置闪光点。,6.时间允许，检查以减少文章中的语言错误。,七. 写
13、作成功要素：,十字箴言：,研究、,背诵、,勤写、,互译、,模仿,八. 提高英语写作水平根本方法,二. 遣词造句,（一）CET-4写作十大恶心语汇及替换,1. good/bad,positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect，pleasurable , excellent, outstanding /,dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse, harmful,2. Not onlybut also ,as well, as well as,3. make（使）: Hard work makes us su
14、cceed ,Our success stems from hard work. Hard work paves ways for our success. We find our way to success because of our hard work,4. in order to ,in an attempt to, with a view to, aim to aim at doing, for the purpose of doing for the sake of doing,5. I think ,I suppose/ assume/ maintain/argue/ clai
15、m/ point that,6. most ,majority, the considerable proportion of, the large percentage of,7. more and more people ,people in increasing/growing Expanding number,8. difficult ,puzzling, confusing, complicated, hard, tough,9.problem ,dispute, dilemma,trouble, headache,10. important,vital, critical, sig
16、nificant, crucial, indispensable,many ,an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most),some ,a slice of, quiet a few , several,think ,harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that,thing ,affair ,bu
17、siness ,matter,get much benefit ,reap huge fruits,hardly ,little if anything, little or nothing,helpful ,beneficial， rewarding,customer ,shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,very ,exceedingly,extremely, strikingly, greatly, highly , remarkably,attract ones attention,capture ones attention,aspect ,facet
18、,dimension,sphere,indicate, suggest ,fear ,be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of,cause ,give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger,reasons for sth ,There are several reasons behind sth,want ,pay attention to ,pour attention into,desire,remember ,bear in mind that,communication ,be against
19、 , disagree with sth ,for example ,nearly impossible ,interaction,frown on sth,to name only a few, as an example,next to/virtually impossible,（二）十大功能语汇,1. 表示“观点” - maintain/assume - emphasize/insist - argue/hold - in my point of view -when it comes to me -for my part -as for me,2.表示“重视” -attach impo
20、rtance to -give weight to -devote much attention to,3. 表示“强调” -lay(put/place) emphasis on -lay(put/place) stress on -lay(put/place) weight on -overemphasize,4. 表示“赞同”，“支持” -approve of 赞同 -stand by 支持 -vote for 投票支持 -hold with 赞成,5. 表示“反对” -disapprove of -object to -be opposed to,6. 表示“努力” -make(exer
21、t)every effort to do -many efforts should be madeto do -endeavor to do,7. 表示“建议” -propose -put forward -advance -suggest,8. 表示“原因” -owing to -thanks to（引出好原因） -for the sake of -(be) due to,9.表示“决心” -choose to do -resolve to do -be determined to do -be convinced to do,10.表示“结论” -come to the conclusio
22、n that -arrive at a conclusion that -conclude that,Computer and I,I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in goggling an army of useful information I had expected ,and
23、 enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a f
24、ashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!,For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Addit
25、ionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.,As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of th
26、e fruits and avoid the opposite facet.,1. 现象解释型模板一,(1)Recently,_.(2)What amazes us most is _.(3) It is true that_.(4)There are many reasons explaining_.(5) The main reason is_.(6) What is more,_.(7)Thirdly,_. (8)AS a result,_.(9) Considering all these,_. (10)For one thing,_. (11) For another,_. (12)
27、 In conclusion,_,现象解释型模板二,(1)As is known to all,_.(2) _seem to get accustomed to_.(3)In fact,_.(4) The reasons of _ lie in several aspects. (5)Firstly,_. (6)Secondly,_.(7) Thirdly,_.(8) Finally,_.(9) As a matter of fact, _. (10) On the one hand,_. (11) On the other hand,_ (12) Therefore,_.,范文一. Harm
28、fulness of Fake Commodities,Recently, more and more fake commodities are appearing on market. What amazes us most is a cure-all medicine report on TV. It is true that fake commodities can be easily found around us.,There are many reasons explaining this problem. The main reason is that fake commodit
29、ies may bring good profits for producers. What is more, our market supervision is still not powerful enough. Thirdly, many fake commodities are much cheaper than genuine ones. As a result, fake commodities are on the increase.,Considering all these, we should realize the seriousness of the problem.
30、For one thing, fake commodities have posed a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market. For another, many fake commodities may harm the consumers health even their lives. In conclusion, fake commodities should be eliminated as soon as possible.,范文二,As is known to all, there ar
31、e a lot of fake commodities in the market. People seem to get accustomed to fake commodities on market. In fact, more kinds and larger quantities of fake commodities are appearing around us.,The reasons of this phenomenon lie in several aspects. Firstly, Fake commodities may bring good profits for p
32、roducers. Secondly, our market supervision is still not powerful enough. Thirdly, many fake commodities are much cheaper than genuine One. Finally, many consumers find it difficult to identify fake Commodities.,As a matter of fact, fake commodities do great harm to people. On the other hand, fake co
33、mmodities have posed a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market. On the other hand, many fake commodities, such as fake medicines,may harm the consumers health even their lives. Therefore, some measures should be taken to eliminate fake commodities as soon as possible.,实践：It
34、Pays to Be Honest (03/1)Student Use of Computers (02/6),The Harm of PC Games 1. 现在电脑游戏在校园很流行 2.电脑游戏的危害 3. 怎样正确对待电脑游戏,Cheating in Exams 1. 学生作弊现象越来越严重 2. 作弊的原因 3. 如何杜绝作弊,现象解释型叙事类作文,The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(03/9) 1）简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况 2）同学，老师和我是如何帮助他/她的 3）人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,An Eye-witness Accoun
35、t of a Traffic Accident(03/6) 1)车祸发生的时间及地点 2）你所见到的车祸情况 3）你对车祸原因的分析,现象解释型叙事类作文模板,(1) It so happened that_.(2) Just at the moment,_. (3) It impressed me most because_.(4) What happened was_. (5) At first,_.(6) Almost at the same time, _.(7) Whats more,_. (8) As a result _(9)As I understand,_. (10) On
36、the one hand,_. (11) On the other hand,_.(12)Therefore,_.,An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident,It so happened that on the morning of last Sunday I was On the way to school. Just at the moment, a car was driving out of a street corner. It impressed me most because the driver drove so fast.,Wh
37、at happened next was a tragedy. At first, I saw a woman riding a bike with her eyes looking up at the sky. Almost at the same time, she was knocked off her bike by the speedy car. Whats more, the car got out of control and ran into a tree on the roadside. As a result, both the woman and the driver w
38、ere injured severely.,As I understand, both the driver and the passer-by are responsible for the accident. On the one hand, the driver was driving too fast. On the other hand, the woman was so careless. Therefore, had both of them been careful enough, the tragedy could have been avoided.,实践：The Day
39、My Classmate Fell Ill (03/9),2. 对比选择型作文,Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(05/12) 1）名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2）校园是否应对游客开放，人们观点不同 3）我认为 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?(98/6) Reading Selectively or Extensively? (99/6) Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?(00/6) 1）很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是 2）
40、也有人持不同意见 3）我的看法和打算,模板一,(1)There is a heated debate over_. (2) It is commonly accepted that_. (3) In contrast, others _.,(4) Those who hold the first opinion suggest _. (5) In their view,_. (6) However, others think _. (7) They argue that _.,(8) Considering one after another, I stand on the side of _
41、. (9) First of all, _. (10) Furthermore,_. (11) Thirdly,_. (12) Therefore,_.,模板二,(1) Recently, we may hear quite different opinions _.(2)Most people take it for granted that _.(3) However,others hold_.,(4) A dominant idea is that _. (5) In this opinion,_.(6) Nevertheless, the objectors think_.(7) Th
42、ey argue that _.,(8) As to me, I prefer _. (9) On the one hand,_.(10) On the other hand,_. (11) In conclusion,_.,范文一 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?,(1)There is a heated debate over whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous univer
43、sities as tourist attractions. (2) It is commonly accepted that university campus should embrace tourists from across the country. (3) In contrast, others think that the university campus should be closed to tourists.,(4)Those who hold the first opinion suggest that the university is mainly funded b
44、y the state and the taxpayers have the right to look around the university.(5) In their view,the tourists, both parents and prospective students, can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the academic, cultural and historical atmosphere during their visits. (6) However, others think that the intere
45、sts of the university and its students should be taken into account.(7) They argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university and destroy the quiet environment for the students to study effectively.,(8) Considering one after another, I stand on the side of
46、the former idea. (9) First of all, a university should be an open place and instill the spirit of openness in its students. (10) Furthermore, in our country, it is the people who pay the tax and support the university.(11) Thirdly,the university should improve itself to meet the increasing demands.
47、(12) Therefore, the university campus should welcome all tourists.,范文二,A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). (1) We may hearquite different comments on this idea. (2) Most people take it forgranted that such a test is necessary for coll
48、ege students. (3) However, others hold a different opinion.,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?,(4) A dominant idea is that English as a language is a tool for Oral communication. (5) In this opinion, such a test will make college student realize the importance of oral English. (5) Nevertheless,
49、the objectors think that many people need not use oral English at work. (7) They argue that the test may not reflect the true level.,(8) As to me, I prefer the former opinion. (9)On the one hand, I like exchanging ideas with foreigners. (10) On the other hand, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for us in the more open China. (11) Therefore, the test will give more incentive to our oral English. (12) In conclusion, the test of spoken English is necessary for us.,
