1、There is no one but longs to go to college. Any government， which is blind to this point， may pay a heavy price. Nowadays， many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately， for most young people， it is not pleasant
2、experience on their first day on campus. It is indisputable that The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle， it is not without its problem. Part of the explanations for
3、 it is that . One of the most common factors (causes .is that . Another contributing factor (cause .is . Perhaps the primary factor is that But the fundamental cause is that,The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that. For all th
4、e disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. However, the same is not applicable to B. Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks. It will exercise a profound influence upon. As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ describedin the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table, Such a statement mainl
5、y rests on the assumption that . Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that .,Learned words and Popular words,Fame Prestige Complex intricate Dislike Abhor, loathe Dangerous Perilous, hazardous,1、individuals，characters，folks代替people ，persons2、positive，favorable，rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，p
6、erfect，pleasurable ，excellent，outstanding代替good 3、dreadful，unfavorable，poor，adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替。 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games，enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduati
7、on ，as a result，they find their academic records are less impressive. 4、(an army of，an ocean of，a sea of，a multitude of ，many，if not most)代替many 注：用many，if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词eg. Many individuals，if not most，harbor the idea that.同理用most，if not all ，代替most,5、a slice of，quiet a few 代替some6、harbor
8、 the idea that， take the attitude that， hold the view that， it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think因为是书面语，所以要加that 7、 unique, distinctive代替 only 8、shared代common 9、reap huge fruits代替get much benefit10、from my standpoint，from my own perspective代替in my opinion,11、Increasing(
9、ly)，growing代替more and more。（注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly）eg. Sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12、little if anything，或little or nothing代替hardly。13、beneficial rewarding代替helpful, be beneficial of。14、invar
10、iably，代替always。15、exceedingly，extremely代替very。,16、hardly unnecessary，hardly inevitable .代替necessary，inevitable17、sth appeals to sb，sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in18、capture ones attention代替attract ones attention。19、facet，dimension，sphere代aspect。20、be indicative of ，be
11、suggestive of ，be fearful of代indicate，suggest ，fear21、give rise to，lead to，result in，trigger代替cause,22、There are several reasons behind sth代替reasons for sth23、 crucial, significant代替important24、pour attention into代替pay attention to25、bear in mind that代替remember26、arduous 代替 difficult27、interaction代替
12、communication28、frown on sth代替be against ，disagree with sth29、to name only a few，as an example代替for example30、next to/virtually impossible，代替nearly impossible,CET 写作评分标准（106.543.5） 49.5分/2分条理不清、思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。 58.5分/5分基本切题，表达思想不清楚连贯性差，有较多严重语法错误。 67.5分/8分基本切题，有些地方思想表达不够清楚文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当
13、多，其中有一些严重错误。 85.5分/11分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。 100.5分/14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语法错误，仅有个别小错。,信： 六级05年1月试卷评析 05年1月 Your Help Needed Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously il
14、l. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1，对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况 2，目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理 3，希望捐助，联系方式 本次作文英文指令要求提到的病人是大学生，写信人应代表学生会写一封公开信。如未能按照此要求写作，应酌情扣1分。,题目类型 原因现象描述类文章。表面上看，这是信，但就其实质上说，还是以前的老题型，给出23个提纲，要求按照提纲所示内容完成作文。 应注意的事项 一、 要强调的一点，本次作文，除了提纲外，还应该在文中表明两个要素1、病人大学生；
15、2、写信人代表学生会。这次考试中有不少学生只注意了前面所列出的三项要求，而忽略了后面的这两个要求。 二、 此类文章的构思。四六级作文旨在考查学生的英语基本表达能力，而非逻辑思维和分析能力，因为这是语言考试。所以，广大考生也就没有必要对具体内容的合理性去严谨推敲。 三、 结构安排。原因现象描述类文章的最佳安排方法是，把提纲变为英文体现在每段第一句作为中心句，后面再用逻辑词或链接词把每段内的分支观点串成一篇文章。,第一段要求讲出病人的病情和家庭情况。另外，这是信，所以要在前面加上称呼。作为文章的开头段，应该简要介绍就行，这样也可以避免详细描述。因为大多考生语言基础不足以支撑详细的细节描述。 第二段
16、原因列举表述段。用提纲变来的用中心句统领全段，之后讲出几个不同的困难。困难很容易列出，如钱不够，家庭条件差，要人看护等显而易见且简单的原因。 第三段呼吁捐助和列出联系方法。当然在行文中号召的语言是需要的，同时在结尾处要标明自己是代表学生会提出这个请求。,Dear Students,I am writing to you all for the sake of a poor student from our university.The boy whose name is Li Ming is now studying mathematics in our university. Unfortu
17、nately, last month, something terrible happened in his life that should have been happy and promising. He has got cancer! The disease is like a big bomb to his family and himself. They are shocked and worried ,because their family monthly income is only1000 yuan. How can they afford to cure his canc
18、er?,11 points Now the everyday cost of Li Mings disease if 800yuan .Obviously more than they can afford. And a large amount of money is badly needed for the coming treatment. His parents have used all their savings, but they are just not enough. All the classmates of Li Ming have attended to his alt
19、ernatively, and that makes his parents much relieved.But our help is not enough , we need more .We need your help to make Li Ming recover from his illness and come to the university again. We need you to assist his family and give them more sun shine. If you are willing to help us, Please call 65109
20、083 at any time as you like, or come to our university. You will find the room you can go to at the school gate.We need your help, really.The Student Union,Dear friends, Im writing to you, on behalf of the Student Union, to ask for help for our schoolmate, Li Ming. Hes seriously ill and has to have
21、a lung transplant at once. To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country, which means that his family is quite poor. Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties. To begin with, he cant afford the medical expenses. His family doesnt have a good financial background and mor
22、eover, his parents have already borrowed a lot of money to send him to university. In view of their low income and severe financial situation, we hope,14 points you can show our sympathy. In addition, his family is far away and he needs someone to take care of him day and night instead of his parent
23、s who are thousands of miles from here. Only under careful care can our friend recover from his disease. On no account can we see our friend suffer without giving him a hand! Hes in desperate need of your help, especially in financial donations to help pay his expenses. Anyone who wants to offer hel
24、p can contact us at 55780063 or you can email us by . Please! Yours, John Chairman of the Student Union,本文特点 第一段， 作者开门见山，直接把最后两个要素在第一段就标明，即生病的是学生，要代表学生会“on behalf of the student union, to ask for help for our schoolmate”。然后，用两句话就说清病情和家庭情况。并且用了一个较少能见的链接短语“To make things worse”。 第二段， 列举困难直接把中心句放在段首，本段
25、的基本结构可以这样认为：“Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties.” “To begin with”“moreover”“In addition”。并且，使用比较地道的短语be confronted with. 一般来说，短语优先原则是一个比较好的策略。本段中，尽管作者很少使用从句，但并列句和短语的使用是较多的，“a lot of，In view of，far away，take care of，recover from”。 第三段， 首尾属于传统事务信函的套路。两层意思，一是呼吁捐助，二是联系方式。呼吁捐助的段首句采
26、用倒装，使文章的句式有了不少变化。尽管全文的从句量不多，但句式变化多，如并列句、倒装句、无主句。并且全文的短语使用较多且地道。,Dear friends,It is high time for you to extend your helping hands to one of the students on campus, who is suffering from the serious disease.Li Ming is one of the freshmen in our school. He is longing for the bright future like you and
27、 me. Unfortunately, at the end of last year, he was struck by leukemia. Now he is hospitalized and in serious condition. What is worse is that he comes from a poor village in the western region of China. Apparently his family can hardly afford the medication.,15 Points As you see, the main difficult
28、ies for Li Ming currently is that he needs both financial aid and daily care. It takes long time and painful process for him to combat the disease and come back to school. So your help is greatly needed and welcomed in the critical time.It is more blessed to give than to receive. We hope that all th
29、e people can provide care and warmth to Li Ming, especially in the form of donation.Please contact us. Address: Room 112, No.3 Building. Tel: 65831101.Thank you!The Student Union,A harmonious society,1. 建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势 2. 我心中的和谐社会是. 3. 为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做?,Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that o
30、ne of the objectives of Chinas modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, “a harmonious society“ has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of Chinas development. But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspect
31、s included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly r
32、elation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony bet
33、ween humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy. To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is to develop good relations with people around me, to help others as much as possible, to spre
34、ad this awareness to as many people as possible, and to lay a foundation for this tall building.,Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Graduation ThesisYou should write at least 150 words following the outline given below1每个学校都要求本科毕业生写毕业论文：2有人支持这个做法，
35、有人反对：3你的看法。,Should people own cars or not?,有人赞成个人买车 有人反对个人买车 你的看法,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作 2. 志
36、愿者工作的社会意义 3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做,In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers
37、every year in China. Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games.
38、 Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games. As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. (161words),
