1、英语书面表达高分技巧和策略,高考英语书面表达评分原则,1 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2 词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 3 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 4 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 5 如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,语言地道，流畅,规范,覆盖所有内容要点,主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的
2、连接成分,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,4.语言地道，流畅,规范,1合理使用副词，增强文章的情感性和可读性。,Victory belongs to the people.,Victory certainly belongs to the people.,I like reading while he likes watching TV.,I like reading while he enjo
3、ys watching TV.,2合理使用动词和动词短语，使表达更生动。,在山脚，有一条小河.,1)At the foot of the mountain, there was a small river.,2)At the foot of the mountain, there flowed a small river.,1.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,A good idea suddenly struck me.,Exercise 1,2.She cant correctly pronounce the word. (一般),She has tr
4、ouble in pronouncing the word. (高级),3.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Twentysix classrooms make up our school.,运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。,We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.,How glad we were to see the crops a
5、nd vegetables growing very well！,使用较丰富的句式,1使用感叹句,2. 使用强调句,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,2)Though Im weak, I will make the effort. （倒装句）,Because her mother was ill, she didnt go to work.(强调句型),It was because her mother was ill that she didnt go to work.,3 使用倒装句,4.使用各种从句,The girl was spoken highl
6、y of. Her composition was well written.（定语从句）,The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.,5. 使用非谓语动词,2）He is so kind that he can help me. (不定式),1）She walked out of the room and many students followed her. （过去分词）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,He is so kin
7、d as to help me.,6.使用虚拟语气,I passed the physics exam because of your help.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam.,句型多样化,1.I still remember the day . I first came to Beijing on that day.,I still remember the day whe
8、n I first came to Beijing.,2.He made a promise. He didnt keep it.,Exercise 2,3.She wont go home. She will go home after the exam.,She wont go home until after the exam.,He made a promise, but he didnt keep it.,4.China is a big country. It has a large population. 合并,China is a big country with a larg
9、e population.,6.If it is necessary, you can turn to your teacher for help. (省略）,If necessary, you can turn to your teacher for help.,5.We suffered from cold and hunger in those days. The days are gone. (倒装）,Gone are the days when we suffered from cold and hunger.,The days when we suffered from cold
10、and hunger are gone.,On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文),As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文),Whats more, I can go to be
11、d earlier. (NMET2001 范文）,三、使用恰当的连接词,欣赏高考作文，注意其关联词,1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系,and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well.,2. 表示转折关系,but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all.,高考大纲中常用的连接词,3. 表示对比关系,4. 表示因果关系,on the
12、contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time,so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account (理由) of.,5. 表示时间、顺序关系,6. 表示递进、强调关系,shortly afterwards, first, second, then, next, finally, for one thing, fo
13、r another, in the end, eventually(最后, 终于),besides, furthermore (此外), whats more, in addition, moreover (而且), worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all,7. 表示解释、说明关系,8. 表示结论,namely (也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and s
14、o on, to tell you the truth, according to this,in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally,1.Tom was walking in the street_ he heard someone cry for help 2. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay avisit to so
15、me places of interest. 3.I shared the cost of the gas with myfriends ._, I saved $80. 4.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.,In addition,As a result,Whats worse,when,1.请在下列句子中填上恰当的关联词,Exercise 3,As students, we often take examinations at school,_ sometimes we have too many exam
16、inations which are too difficult for us. _, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. _when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students ch
17、eat in examinations at school.,but,On the other hand,So,2.Complete the following passage, using proper transitional words,_, it is wrong to cheat in examinations _ it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard_ cheating in examinations._, w
18、e should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.,In my opinion,because,instead of,Whats more,四中文写作对英文遣词造句的干扰,1. Zhang Hang studies in Shanxi Province , Xian city, Hongqi Middle School .2.Tom has 5 classes in the morning ,afternoon has 2 classes .,_,_,Hongqi Middle School, X
19、ian city, Shanxi Province,_,_,and 2 in the afternoon,A “Chinglish”型。,4.Our country has taken place great changes .5 .Her age is young .,正: Great changes have taken place in our country .,She is young .,6.高考：high exam,National College Entrance Examination,B “缺胳膊少腿”型：,1.However, other students against
20、 the idea.,2.He seated on the grass.,C “画蛇添足”型：,1.But there are 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.,2.He dressed his clothes quickly.,are,He seated himself on the grass/He was seated on the grass.,But there are 60% of the students against the idea of entrance fee.,himself,D “张冠
21、李戴”型：,The time past quickly.,I was so pleased to hear from your letter.,The price of my car is very expensive.,passed,hear from you,receive your letter,high,E “瞻前不顾后”型。,1)Although he was very tired ，but he went on working in the office.,2)On one hand ，60% of the students are against the idea，but 40%
22、 of the students think it is reasonable.,on the other hand,1. In the morning, I got up. I walked to school. I saw smoke rising from a building. It must be on fire. I dialed 119. Fire engines arrived. The fire men put out the fire.,改写下列段落，使其流畅。,Practice makes perfect,Key:,In the morning I got up earl
23、y and walked to school. Suddenly, I saw plenty of dark smoke rising from a building nearby. I knew it must be on fire. So I went to the nearest telephone booth and dialed 119 immediately. Three minutes later, some fire engines arrived and the fire was put out eventually.,Homework,I like English. I listen to English broadcast. I read English materials. I practice my spoken English. I won the English competition this year and published articles. I will work harder.,Please write a composition,Thank you,
