1、书面表达指导,写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。 围绕要点，写出句子。 添加过度，确保连贯。 先求正确，再求灵活。 认真眷写，卷面整洁。,假如你正在参加学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全球变暖这个话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为减少二氧化碳排放做贡献。请就这个话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述你自己的观点。 演讲稿应包括以下内容： 节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为 改变以往的家庭生活习惯。（用电，用水） 出行使用公共交通或骑自行车。 -,要求： 1 词数； 100左右 可适当增加细节内容，以使行文连贯 提示： 低碳生活 low carbon life 碳排放carbon emission
2、燃料 fuel,Sample(示例）,Introduction (topic),Body (supporting ideas),Conclusion,文章层次结构,The outline (轮廓）:,Para. 1 - introduction,To present your topic directly To briefly explain the meaning of such an action,Para. 2 - body,1. What/ how to do?,Para. 3 - conclusion,1. To emphasize/ sum up your point,Electr
3、icity Water Transportation means,Key words and sentence patterns,低碳生活,二氧化碳,减少二氧化碳排放,生活习惯,公共交通方式,节约能源的,私家车,环保,low carbon life,carbon dioxide,reduce carbon dioxide emission /reduce producing carbon dioxide,living habits,public transportation means,energysaving,private cars,environmentally friendly (ad
4、j.),Para. 1,2. To briefly explain the meaning/reason of such an action,To present your topic directly,句型： my topic today is -,to fight Global warming . What is it? how does it come about? And its bad effects?,句型： the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to-/ because - it bring about
5、some bad natural consequences ,such as -,Para. 1 the ending sentence :therefore, we must reduce carbon emission.,Para. 1,Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyoneMy topic today is living a low carbon life. As is known, the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to quantities of carbon e
6、mission. (说出问题和原因）It brings about some bad natural consequences ,such as , famine, draught, terrible diseases and the disappearance of species. (说出后果）,Therefore, we must fight global warming and reduce carbon emission. (结束句，接下文，点出主题）,Key points (要点）,1. 选个topic sentence 来统领第二段,2. 写出要点句：用电/ 用水/交通工具-,
7、Turn - off, when dont use electricity Wear clothes instead of turning up heat Keep waster water for toilet Choose bike or our feet instead of driving private cars -,如：That goal needs everybodys effort,Para. 2,3. 注意语句间的连贯，使用连接词： for example; and；what s more, however, in addition, on the one hand; on
8、the other hand, therefore as a consequence (of) ,4. 写个结束句 ending sentence, 强调自己的观点， 如：please believe it that small actions make great difference.,Para. 2. That goal need everyone s effort. （that goal 承接上文；主题句，统领后面的文句）Actually, everyone can do small things in daily life to make great difference to th
9、at big problem. （对主题句的具体解释）,In our homes, for example, we should save energy. (次主题句）When we dont use TV, the lights, computers and so on, turn it off! And wear more clothes instead of turning up the heat! (活用课本语句）And its a good idea to keep waste water during washing vegetable for toilet cleaning. （
10、后几句是用电用水的节约方法，起到对次主题句的支撑作用）,Another important energysaving aspect lies in what transportation means to choose. Since Cars contribute a lot to carbon emission, we can avoid using them if necessary, and choose bike or just our feet to go to school or office. That way is healthy and environmentally fri
11、endly. ( 此句开头就用energysaving , 和前面的关键词energysaving成对照，形成一种语义连贯）（高级词汇加分： lie in; contribute to）,Please believe it that small actions make great difference (总结句） (对主题句的强调，加强论点效果）,Para. 3,I think, if everyone adjusts their behaviors to use energy economically , and when our efforts add up, the world wont be worried about global warming, and we humans can enjoy life more. （使用高级词汇 adjust -to-; add up, 加分）,to rewrite the composition based on the outline.,Assignment:,
