1、真题呈现 2013广东高考写作一你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。,志愿者的选拔：到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星*的志愿者。志愿者的条件：至少18岁；做好不回地球的准备；愿与他人保持良好的关系。,专家观点：火星生活条件太艰苦；面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。志愿者观点：厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；如果成功，就是人类英雄。,*火星：the Mars【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。,素材储备好词1It is reported that.据报道2whats more而且
2、3keep on good terms with和处好关系4meet with遭遇，偶遇5on the contrary 相反6be eager to do sth.渴望做某事,好句1. It is reported that around thirty volunteers will have been selected worldwide by the year 2015. 据报道到2015年，在全球将选出约30名志愿者。2. They would not_only meet with the unusually cold climate, but_also loneliness and
3、anxiety.他们将不仅面临严寒气候还有孤独和焦虑。,3. The volunteers insist that they have got_tired_of the life on the earth.志愿者们坚持认为他们已经厌倦地球上生活。,审题要点审体裁：本篇为时事快讯，属于应用文体裁，但叙述和议论兼顾。审人称和时态：考生要以第三人称的口吻来写，其中志愿者选拔的条件主要用一般现在时介绍，专家和志愿者的观点可用过去时表达。审要点：本文开放度不高，有一定的局限性。考生把要点用5个句子来概括，但不能直接翻译，要注意要点之间的逻辑关系。,写作模板报道内容：According to the me
4、dia reports，.Its reported that.专家的观点：Some experts warned that.Some experts expressed their views that.志愿者的观点：However, some volunteers said.They also believed.,01 基础回顾感悟,1_n队列；行列vi.排队_不按次序排队的人2_n& v演讲；讲课_n演讲者；(大学)讲师3_n舒适；安慰_vt.安慰_adj.舒适的；自在的；心安理得的_adj.不舒适的；不自在的,4_n需要；需求_vt.需要；需求_必修课5_adj.丰富的；充裕的_n丰富6
5、_v统治；支配；管理_n政府；统治7_n代替者；代用品vt.代替8_vt.反驳；驳斥_adj.相矛盾的_n驳斥；矛盾,9_n常规；日常事务adj.通常的；例行的10_vt.占用；占领_n居住；占用；职业_adj.职业的11_n代理人；经纪人_n代理权；通讯社12_n品质；质量_vt.取得资格；使合格,答案1. queue；queue jumper 2. lecture；lecturer3. comfort; comfort; comfortable; uncomfortable 4. requirement; require; required courses 5. abundant；abun
6、dance 6. govern; government 7. substitute8. contradict; contradictory; contradiction 9. routine10. occupy；occupation；occupational11. agent；agency 12. quality；qualify,1保持优秀成绩；继续干下去_2相适应；相融和 _3申请 _4占据 _5迷路 _6就而言 _7参考；涉及 _,8忙着做；忙于某事物 _9日复一日 _10不可能的；不值得讨论的 _11(迁入新居、更换工作后)安顿下来 _,答案1. keep it up 2. fit in
7、 3. apply for 4. take up5. get lost 6. as far as one is concerned 7. refer to8. be occupied with 9. day in and day out10. out of the question 11. settle in,1. It was the first time she had ever left her motherland.这是她第一次离开她的祖国。句式分析：It is the first time.这是第一次。句式仿写：这是我第一次在公开场合发言。_Ive spoken in public.
8、,2. But I was also very nervous as I didnt know what to expect.但是我也很紧张，因为我不知道期待着什么。句式分析：“what to do”结构在句中可作宾语。句式仿写：请告诉我下一步干什么。_,3. I have been so occupied with work that I havent had time for social activities.我一直忙于学业以至于我没有时间去搞社交活动。句式分析：本句中so.that.意为“如此以至于”，引导结果状语从句。句式仿写：他太幸运了，结果通过了考试。_,答案1Its the f
9、irst time(that)2.Please tell me what to do next.3.He was so lucky that he passed the exam.,02 考点分层细解,归纳拓展(1)recommend sb.sth.recommend sth.to sb. 向某人推荐、介绍recommend sb.for 推荐某人做recommend sb.as 推荐某人为recommend sth.for 推荐某物做某种用途,(2)recommend doing 建议做recommend sb.to do sth. 建议某人做某事recommend that. 建议,语境助
10、记Experts recommend fruits for lowing the chance of being overweight.专家为降低肥胖的机会而推荐水果。I can recommend Miss Green as a good typist.我可以推荐格林小姐作为一名优秀的打字员。Doctors recommend taking a walk after supper.医生建议晚饭后散步。,关键一点recommend表示主观判断时，后面通常为虚拟语气的宾语从句，从句中谓语动词用should动词原形，should可以省略。类似用法的词还有：advise，command，demand
11、，desire，insist，order，propose，require，suggest，urge，etc.。,新题型演练Teachers recommend parents_ _(allow) their children under 12 to ride bicycles to school for safety.答案：(should)not allow解析：句意：老师们建议：为了孩子的安全，父母不应让12岁以下的孩子骑自行车去学校。recommend从句中谓语动词用should动词原形，should可以省略。,语境助记He is working as a substitute for T
12、om, who is ill.他顶替生病的汤姆干活。Nothing can substitute for the advice your doctor is able to give you.大夫所能给你的忠告是无可替代的。,I can substitute milk for cream.I can substitute cream with milk.我可以用牛奶代替奶油。,新题型演练In modern society, people substitute cars _ bicycles; as a result, more and more air pollution and traffi
13、c accidents are caused.答案：for解析：考查介词。句意：在现代社会中人们用汽车替代了自行车，结果是导致了越来越多的空气污染和交通事故。substitute A for B“用A代替B”。,归纳拓展(1)acknowledge sb./sth.to be.承认某人/某物是acknowledge that 承认acknowledge doing. 承认做acknowledge.as 认为是It is universally acknowledged that.是大家公认的acknowledge sb.s letter 向某人表示信已收到(2)acknowledgement
14、n. 承认；感谢,语境助记He was acknowledged to be/as the best singer.他被认为是最好的歌手。They acknowledged having been defeated at last.最终他们承认被打败了。Most people acknowledge that Taiwan is a part of China.(句型转换)It is acknowledged that Taiwan is a part of China.大家公认台湾是中国的一部分。,新题型演练His long service with the company was_(ack
15、nowledge) with a present.答案：acknowledged解析：acknowledge“承认，感谢”。句意：他在公司工作多年，得到一份礼物表示谢意。,归纳拓展(1)occupy oneself with sth./in doing sth.忙于；专心于occupy ones mind/thoughts/attention占据某人的头脑/思想/注意力(2)be occupied in doing sth.忙于做某事be occupied with sth. 从事/忙于某事(3)occupation n. 占领；职业；工作,语境助记This game will keep th
16、e children occupied.这个游戏让孩子们有的忙了。She occupied herself with routine office tasks.她忙于办公室的日常工作。Tom is occupied in doing/with his homework.汤姆正忙于做他的作业。,新题型演练When I visited her, she was occupied_writing a speech on AIDS prevention.答案：in解析：考查介词。be occupied in doing sth.意为“忙于做某事”。句意：当我去看她的时候，她正忙于写一篇有关艾滋病预防的
17、报告。,归纳拓展(1)meet/satisfy ones requirement满足/达到某人的要求(2)require vt. 需要require doing/to be done 需要做require sb.to do sth. 要求某人做某事require that.(should)do sth. 要求,语境助记You are not fit for the job because patience is a requirement in teaching.你不适合这个工作，因为耐心是教学的必备条件。Our classroom is so dirty that it requires c
18、leaning/to be cleaned.我们的教室太脏了，需要打扫。,The situation required that we (should) make an immediate decision.当时的情况需要我们立刻作出决定。,新题型演练The local government made a requirement that food and shelter_ _(provide) at once, or many people would die.答案：(should) be provided解析：requirement后跟同位语从句，其谓语用(should)动词原形。,归纳拓
19、展keep up维持；保持；继续下去keep up with 赶上；不落在后面keep away from 使离开keep in touch with 与保持联系keep on (doing) 继续(干)keep out (of) 阻止进入；不卷入；避开keep off 使不靠近；避开；挡住,语境助记Well done, and keep it up, Tom!干得好，汤姆，再接再厉！Keep it up! Final victory is in sight.坚持下去！最后的胜利已经在望了。They keep in touch with each other through the Inter
20、net.他们彼此通过因特网保持联系。Keep your dog off me.把你的狗从我这儿赶走！,关键一点在keep it up这个短语中，it本身词义模糊，只是帮助构成习语。类似短语有make it，manage it，take it easy。,新题型演练Dad, I have won the first prize in the English competition.Congratulations.Keep it_ and get prepared for studying abroad.答案：up解析：句意：“爸爸，我英语竞赛得了一等奖。”“祝贺你。继续努力，为出国学习作准备。”
21、keep it up“保持优秀成绩；继续干下去”，符合句意。,归纳拓展(1)fit in(with sb./sth.) 适应；与合得来fit sb./sth. in 找到时间见某人或做某事be fit to do sth. 适合做be fit for 适合于(2)keep fit 保持健康,语境助记Do these plans fit in with your arrangements?这些计划和你的安排一致吗？Shes not fit to look after children.她不适合照看小孩。,新题型演练We tried our best to make our garden fit
22、in_ its surroundings.答案：with解析：fit in with“与相适应”。,Besides，as_far_as_he_was_concerned,_what other people thought was not the most important thing.此外，他认为别人的想法并不是最重要的。,归纳拓展(1)as/so far as sb./sth.is concerned就而言；就来说。(2)as/so far as I know/can remember/can see据我所知/记得的/看到的。它们可放在句首，也可放在句中。,语境助记As far as E
23、nglish is concerned，he is the best in our class.就英语学习来说，他是我们班最优秀的。As far as the case is concerned, having guns privately is the main cause of it.就这个案件而言，私自拥有枪支是它的主要原因。She lived in Chicago, as far as I can remember.根据我记得的，她过去住在芝加哥。As far as I can see，you have done nothing wrong.依我看，你没有做错任何事。,新题型演练_ _ _ I can see, there is only one possible way to keep away from the danger.答案：As far as解析：逗号前后并非表示条件、让步关系，也不是用来加强语气。应用as far as I can see来缓和语气，表示“在我看来，只有一种可能脱离危险的办法”。,03 限时规范特训,谢谢观看！,
