1、学会扩充句子，写出高分作文,大学生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括： 1确定新的学习目标 2改进学习方法 3学会独立生活 4参加各种课外活动 5处理好与同学的关系 注意：短文内容要连贯、完整； 短文词数：100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)。I will go to college in the near future. _.,步骤一：列要点,1_ a new target for learning 2_ my study method 3_ how to live on my ownlearn to de
2、pend on myself4_different kinds of after-class activities. 5_my classmates.,set,improve,learn,take part in,get on well with,步骤二：造简单句,1_set a new target for my study.2_improve my learning skills.3_learn how to live on my own.4_take part in different kinds of after-class activities.5_I can get on well
3、 with my classmates.,I would like to,I want to,I am willing to,I plan to,I hope that,步骤三：扩展句子,11 would like to set a new target for my study _(添加状语从句)21 want to improve my learning skills and work even harder _(补充细节),after I enter college,at my lessons,3I am wining to learn how to live on my own as
4、life at college is quite different from that in middle school/ _ _. (添加状语从句或通过举例来补充细节),such as doing some,cleaning or washing by myself,4I plan to take part in different kinds of after-class activities _ _ _(添加目的状语) 5I hope that I can get on well with my classmates _ _(添加分词作方式状语),in order to get mor
5、e,experience and learn more about the,world,by helping them and learning,from each other,步骤四：润色句子,句子的润色包括词语选择与句型运用。仔细观察每一个句子是否可以运用自己熟知的较高级词汇和句型。首先，在词汇选择上，高分作文往往都会用“较高级词汇”来代替常见词语。例如：要点2 I want to improve my learning method and work even harder ( more efficiently) at my lessons这里的“more efficiently”就属于
6、“较高级词汇”。,要点4 I plan to take part in different kinds of after-class activities in order to get more experience and learn more about the world. 如将本句斜体部分替换为broaden my horizons，就显得比较生动。在造句时，“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 其次，在句型运用上，优秀作文常选择“较高级结构”来表达同一思想内容。,例如，要点1、3采用状语从句，要点3还可利用it句型：Its nece
7、ssary for me to learn how to live on my own as life at college is quite different from that in my middle school；要点4、5则采用非谓语动词作状语，要点4前还可以再添加“if possible”省略结构，要点5可以加强语气：“I do hope”这样可以让阅卷老师了解作者对各种语法结构的熟练掌握，从而得到认可，获得高分。,灵活巧妙地运用“it句型”(如：强调句、形式主语或宾语)、倒装句、省略句、独立主格结构等句式，使文章句式丰富多彩、行文生动流畅。同时要尽力避免句型的重复或句式表达的单
8、一性，使行文变化有致，自然流畅。经过润色的句子会给文章增加很多亮点，是保证高分作文的又一关键。,步骤五：连句成篇,表示因果( )、对比( )、类似( )顺序( ),consequently, thus, as a result等,in contrast, on the other hand等,similarly,first of all，above all，at the same time，later，nearly等,转折( )递进( )总结( )个人观点( ),in spite of，nevertheless等,whats more，furthermore，in addition等,in a
9、 word，in other words，in brief，to sum up等,personally，as far as Im concerned,I will go to college in the near future (原文已给)_(连接词)，1 would like to set a new target for my study after I enter college(要点1)1want to improve my learning skims and work even harder and more efficiently at my lessons(要点2),Ther
10、efore, _(连接词)，it is really necessary for me to learn how to live on my own as life at college is quite different from that in middle school(要点3)If possible，I plan to take part in different kinds of after-class activities in order to get more experience and broaden my horizons(要点4),Whats more,_(连接词)，I do hope that I can get on well with my classmates by helping them and learning from each other(要点5)_(结尾句),Finally,I believe 1will have a wonderful life,at college,
