1、高考冲刺：短文改错题型介绍高考英语短文改错历来是考生的一个难点，因为它考查的是考生的综合语言运用能力，考查内容涵盖英语语言的各个层面。短文改错分为两种形式：含有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词增加、删除或修改；对标有题号的每一行做出判断，或增加，或删除，或修改，全文共有 9 处错误，有一行是对的。 解题技巧改错步骤1. 通读全文，了解短文大意。把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误（比如前文用 Mike，后文代词用 she 等）。在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行分句改错。2. 分句阅读，逐行找错。在完成第一步后，要进
2、行逐行逐句的改错。这时要从文中的词法、句法和语篇角度着重分析和特别注意。注意不能改变句子的原意，也不能改掉原来正确的词语而换成了另一种正确的表达形式，如某些定语从句中 that 与 which 的互换是不给分的。3. 最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿。注意严格按照例题要求和解题说明，用规定的符号去改，不要用文字去说明或者用箭头表示，更不能在原题中乱画。答题时可以从以下几点考虑： 1. 句中的时态、主谓、代词一致吗？ 2. 句中的谓语完整吗？ 3. 习惯用法固定搭配正确吗？ 4. 冠词、形容词、副词及关系词得当吗？ 5. 该用被动语态吗？ 6. 从
3、句的连接词对了吗？ 7. 从句中的谓语完整吗？ 真题讲解（一）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried
4、about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. (浙江 )（二）Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.
5、 It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unle
6、ss the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home. (辽宁)（ 三 ）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76._Water is important. We
7、, as well as animal, cannot live 77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. 80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81._out to plant tr
8、ees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85._Sincerely,Li Hua（四）Dear Mom, Mothers Day is coming. Im
9、 sorry that I am abroad 66._and cant send your flowers, so Im writing to you. 67._Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you 68._before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell 69._you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not 70._only giving me life, but also teach m
10、e how to be a good 71._person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though 72._I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your 73,_part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. 74._Hope you good health and much happiness every day! 75._Your little girl,Jennifer（五）Dear Grand
11、pa,How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76._much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 77._the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I 78._was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79._till I fall asleep. We often went to the fiel
12、ds to enjoy the pleasant 80._view there. You told me the name of different plants and their 81._characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82._and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now 83._my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84._and the
13、 findings will be use as materials for our research. Since 85._well do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.Yours,Daisy（一） 1. Two years before, beforeago；ago 指的是从现在起到过去时间的某一点的一段时间。这个时间状语常与一般过去时态或过去进行时态连用。2. I rented for a car. 去掉 for，因为 rent 为及物动词。3. Unfortunate, I had an accident Un
14、fortunate 改为 Unfortunately，修饰一句话用副词。4. at least two week week weeks5. I called my parents, so I did not tell them sobut ，逻辑关系错误。6. I knew that they will be willwould，主从句时态一致。7. worried about myself myselfme，句中的主语为 they，不构成反身代词；8. I was so farther away, fartherfar ，句中不构成比较级。9. I told them interested
15、stories interestedinteresting ，interesting 才表示“令人感兴趣的” 。10.nobody knew truth truth 前加 the，此处特指“那个真相” 。（二）1. we have with you have had，由后面的 was 可知，这儿应该用过去时态。2. It was so kind for you to let us for of，kind 用于描述 you 的，适用于“It +形容词+ of sb.”句型。3. Unfortunate, the only problem Unfortunate Unfortunately，修饰句
16、子用副词。4. for a result, there was a long line of traffic for as, as a result 固定搭配。5. for at least six mile mile miles mile 是可数名词，并且前面是 six。6. we waited there unless the road was clear unless until 后面一句是一个时间状语从句，意思是“我们一直等到路通了”。7. In the car park here here there 叙述的是别的地方发生的事，所以用 there。8. as car drove ou
17、t far too quickly car 前加 a，car 不是特指，并且是可数名词，所以前面要加 a。9. They finally dropped Gina off they we 叙述的是“我们”做的事，所以用 we。10. and made our own way to home 去掉 to，make ones way home 中 home 为副词，前面不用介词 to。（三）76. opinion 前加 my，根据句意前后的代词指代要一致，前文主语是 I，所以后半句表达的意见就应该是“我”的意见。77. animal animals 我们还有动物们没有水就无法活。根据句意用复数形式
18、。78. or nor 根据前文的 neither 可知应该将 or 改为 nor。79. seemed seems 文章整体讲节约用水方面的话题，通篇用一般现在时，所以将 seemed改为 seems。80. we they 句中的“许多国家”指的是外国，不是“ 我们” 。81. a the/ this/ that 本句的问题指上文提到过的问题，表特指。82. though because/since/ as 主从句之间的逻辑为因果关系而不是转折关系。83. 正确。84. using used “水”被使用过，用过去分词作定语85.去掉 for 此处 for 在定语从句中找不到其相应的成分，
19、故删去。高 666 考%资&源#网（四）66. 正确。67. your you。此处动词 send 接双宾语，应使用宾格形式，构成短语 send sb. sth.。68. thank thanks。 “表达感谢”应为：express ones thanks。69. 去掉 on。在副词 today 之前不用介词，故去掉。70. by for。Thank sb. for为固定短语“因而感谢” 。71. teach teaching 。此处是 but 连接的用于介词之后的并列的动名词形式。72. had have。全篇文章属于现在的时态，故将过去完成时改为现在完成时。73. may 后加 not。句
20、意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。74. Whenever Wherever 。根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。75. Hope Wish。动词 hope 后不能接双宾语，应用 wish 符合语境和语法规则。（五）76. those these 根据写信的环境，应该是问“这些日子”怎么样。77. after since 句中提到的是“自从一年前我上大学以来” 。78. happily happy 用形容词 happy 而不是副词作 feel 的表语。79. child 前加 a child 为可数名词，在句中不是特指，加 a 表示“一个孩子” 。80. fall fell 本句说孩子时候的事，用过去时。81. name names name 的定语为 of different plants，根据逻辑应该是不同的名称，用复数。82. interesting interested 句子的主语为 I，用 interested 表示“对感兴趣” 。83. 删去 into enter 为及物动词，介词 into 多余。84. are is 句中的主语为 Ann，together with me 不算做主语，故谓语动词用单数。85. use used 句子的结构为将来时的被动语态，用过去分词。
